VN Ren'Py Abandoned Queen's Curse [Ch. 1 v0.5] [3R3CT]

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What would be better?

  • More quick H-scenes

    Votes: 121 19.4%

  • More relationship building

    Votes: 133 21.3%

  • A bit of both...

    Votes: 369 59.2%
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Arassei

Arassei

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I never understood why Devs love so much when a woman talk (or in this case, is shown) about her previous lover(s).
It's not a turn on, you know :/
Now, I don't want to fuck that Maya (or Edeline or Emilia) or Ashley or even Karen...
And the game would needs " possession " tag but it was just a one shot, so...
The " voice " said he was the MC but even, it's an " other entity " than the actual MC. It would be so much better if it was just memories.
And the father who was in a relashionship with MC's mother and Karen (the aunt is a bitch, what a surprise) at the same time... of course he was, it's always like this. *sigh* So, Karen doesn't see the MC as the MC, but as his father's son.
For me, I am just interested in Mel and Alina, now. But I stop this adventure here.

That story is not for me ^^. What a pity, I love harem-lesbian-incest.
Thank you, and good luck for the futur ^^
 
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Arassei said:
I never understood why Devs love so much when a woman talk (or in this case, is shown) about her previous lover(s).
It's not a turn on, you know :/
Now, I don't want to fuck that Maya (or Edeline or Emilia) or Ashley or even Karen...
And the game would needs " possession " tag but it was just a one shot, so...
The " voice " said he was the MC but even, it's an " other entity " than the actual MC. It would be so much better if it was just memories.
And the father who was in a relationship with MC's mother and Karen (the aunt is a bitch, what a surprise) at the same time... of course he was, it's always like this. *sigh* So, Karen doesn't see the MC as the MC, but as his father's son.
For me, I just interested in Mel and Alina, now. But I stop this adventure here.

That story is not for me ^^. What a pity, I love harem-lesbian-incest.
Thank you, and good luck for the future ^^
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You'll miss out on all of the plot twists then.
 
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R3kT said:
You'll miss out on all of the plot twists then.
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Oh, I am sure of it.
After that " fake Maya " (ashley) slept with the " possessed MC ", I started to click faster and missed some sentences. And when I saw that Karen-MC's father flashback... that was more faster and I missed a loooot of sentenses.
 
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Arassei said:
I never understood why Devs love so much when a woman talk (or in this case, is shown) about her previous lover(s).
It's not a turn on, you know :/
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Yeah man! How dare those devs setup their characters and make them more than one-dimensional characters.
God i wish devs would just stick to fucking and only fucking...Fictional universes, world building and character depth are for novels. /s

Oh wait it's a VISUAL NOVEL. Sorry you don't get turned on by world setup, it's almost like that's a fault of you and not the dev or something.
 
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The gallery pictures kept me away from this, but I got curious and tried it.

As many ppl say, this game is underestimated.
The story is unique (even sometimes predictable), the story and relationship building are great, renders are good.
And the setting is quiet unique and interesting, too.

Like it, big thanks to the dev!
 
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tk99 said:
The gallery pictures kept me away from this, but I got curious and tried it.

As many ppl say, this game is underestimated.
The story is unique (even sometimes predictable), the story and relationship building are great, renders are good.
And the setting is quiet unique and interesting, too.

Like it, big thanks to the dev!
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Thanks for the feedback... I'll replace the gallery pictures.
 
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Arassei

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ZTex said:
Yeah man! How dare those devs setup their characters and make them more than one-dimensional characters.
God i wish devs would just stick to fucking and only fucking...Fictional universes, world building and character depth are for novels. /s

Oh wait it's a VISUAL NOVEL. Sorry you don't get turned on by world setup, it's almost like that's a fault of you and not the dev or something.
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Yeah, whatever...
 
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tk99

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R3kT said:
Thanks for the feedback... I'll replace the gallery pictures.
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Wow, that was fast ;)

Good idea ... the current pics don't show the real quality of this VN.

And as I said: I really like it.
Thanks for this game, looking forward for updates.
Good work!
 
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I like this a lot, there are some very nice touches (No pun intended). The writing and characters are quite appealing as well.

Nice work R3kT
 
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Arassei said:
Oh, I am sure of it.
After that " fake Maya " (ashley) slept with the " possessed MC ", I started to click faster and missed some sentences. And when I saw that Karen-MC's father flashback... that was more faster and I missed a loooot of sentenses.
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Sounds like you need to find some nice, safe, 'virgin' porn on Pornhub if you can't stand seeing any women with any guy but one. At least then you can fantasize/self-insert that you're the guy with the girl in the porn, since it seems you really just want the delusion anyway (all porn, no story, and can't stand seeing any woman with any other male character, even if it was before the MC existed).
 
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Vuynjou

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the story is interesting, i like the characters very much and the renders are great as well
 
Arassei

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Ozygator said:
Sounds like you need to find some nice, safe, 'virgin' porn on Pornhub if you can't stand seeing any women with any guy but one. At least then you can fantasize/self-insert that you're the guy with the girl in the porn, since it seems you really just want the delusion anyway (all porn, no story, and can't stand seeing any woman with any other male character, even if it was before the MC existed).
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Uhu...
If I want virgins, I will go play japanese eroge.
 
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WILL PA

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- So far, it's a good job ... I loved Melanie and I hope you focus on her a little bit.

- Impregnation and post-impregnation are phases ignored by all Dev and I do not know why, I wish you focus on that.

- I know your story is rich but this game like others contains many girls, a wise man said (the abundant thing has no value) and it's frustrating for us who have a preference for a particular woman to wait for her turn and for you to create many characters that do not have much importance.

- I thank you for being interested in black women, you did a great job in their design

- Finally if you continue on this project, take your time to create various extended endings ... The end is the most important phase and I do not know why the Devs usually do not care about it.
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Sorry for my english
 
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zakariachawki said:
- So far, it's a good job ... I loved Melanie and I hope you focus on her a little bit.

- Impregnation and post-impregnation are phases ignored by all Dev and I do not know why, I wish you focus on that.

- I know your story is rich but this game like others contains many girls, a wise man said (the abundant thing has no value) and it's frustrating for us who have a preference for a particular woman to wait for her turn and for you to create many characters that do not have much importance.

- I thank you for being interested in black women, you did a great job in their design

- Finally if you continue on this project, take your time to create various extended endings ... The end is the most important phase and I do not know why the Devs usually do not care about it.
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Sorry for my english
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Chapter III will be dedicated to endings.
 
Carpe Stultus

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Ozygator said:
Sounds like you need to find some nice, safe, 'virgin' porn on Pornhub if you can't stand seeing any women with any guy but one. At least then you can fantasize/self-insert that you're the guy with the girl in the porn, since it seems you really just want the delusion anyway (all porn, no story, and can't stand seeing any woman with any other male character, even if it was before the MC existed).
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I'd agree with your suggestion but there is a problem. He doesn't get to fuck the virgin that does someone else for him and he would scream NTR.
 
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Speaking of virgin....MC sexes and possibly impregnates one in this update.
 
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