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Wicked Garden

Osiris
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May 9, 2018
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Aside from the game being written in Old Engrish I have no real complaints. I liked the previous look on the daughter, but this version works for me also.
 
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so after playing it some of the english is out of place. also they use relationship titles alot that it seems like a bad porno. big sister and little brother is one thing. but MC's brother in law really calls him "brother in law" like in a way thats trying to shove it in your face that they're brother in laws.:LOL:
I'm guessing the Dev must be a native Spanish-speaker. Because in various Spanish-speaking countries, they often refer to their kids as "hijo" or "hija", which is Son or Daughter. Same thing happens with the -in-laws "Cuñado" and "Cuñada" they translate Brother-in-law and Sister-in-law. "Suegro" and "Suegra" translate to "father-in-law" and "mother-in-law". Some people use the names, others use their familial role.
 

BigDaddyDom

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is it just me or are lots of games recently missing the loli tag?
I don't think this qualifies as loli though, even though the dev may have been going for that. Other than the niece having pigtails and being thin, she doesn't actually look that young.
not sure if this is in purpose but this girl looks 42 in the face..

Upon closer look, I agree with what you and others have said - she does have a very old looking face. It's partly the lines around the mouth, but also the eyes...she looks so tired and withered or something :LOL: I think wider eyes, fuller lips and more color in her face would help
 

lgac1492

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Apr 23, 2020
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So far i like all about this game except the mc. The mc seems an old lady of church. Maybe it's necessary as a contrast of the "rebel daughter", but with his attitude looks like more a ntr cuckold character than the typical mc of incest game.
 

stahalle

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Jul 11, 2018
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So far i like all about this game except the mc. The mc seems an old lady of church. Maybe it's necessary as a contrast of the "rebel daughter", but with his attitude looks like more a ntr cuckold character than the typical mc of incest game.
never played single again huh? :LOL:
 
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Silk_Ari

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I don't think this qualifies as loli though, even though the dev may have been going for that. Other than the niece having pigtails and being thin, she doesn't actually look that young.
Yeah, Im not sure how well that would hold up in court lol. What Im saying is that I see ALOT of games where the characters are "over 18" and It's obvious they aren't unless you have a very very loose grey area.... and again, I'm not sure that would hold up...anywhere.

Also seems loli is the new VN cash grab...
 

3DReaver

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May 15, 2020
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Yeah, Im not sure how well that would hold up in court lol. What Im saying is that I see ALOT of games where the characters are "over 18" and It's obvious they aren't unless you have a very very loose grey area.... and again, I'm not sure that would hold up...anywhere.

Also seems loli is the new VN cash grab...
incest and milf are the biggest cash cows, lotta motherfuckers out there
 
Dec 9, 2019
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Don't want to leave an official review for something so early in production.

Overall, cool idea, that has a few flaws in the presentation.

Character Models - The "Older Sister" model looks okay, with a body that would realistically match her supposed age. It's in the "Daughter" and "Niece" designs that things fall apart. The chest - hips - ass proportions for the daughter are all over the place, with the chest in particular throwing all other perceptions off. On the other hand, the Niece is fine body wise, at least matching what her supposed age is, however her face is massively off. Bringing it closer to the daughter in composition would be a good start.

Another suggestion would be to make a back-banner for when choices appear on screen. Something to highlight what options are available.

I don't want to comment on the translation, as it's clear that the author is working on that.
 

SeveredRealms

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Apr 10, 2020
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Don't want to leave an official review for something so early in production.

Overall, cool idea, that has a few flaws in the presentation.

Character Models - The "Older Sister" model looks okay, with a body that would realistically match her supposed age. It's in the "Daughter" and "Niece" designs that things fall apart. The chest - hips - ass proportions for the daughter are all over the place, with the chest in particular throwing all other perceptions off. On the other hand, the Niece is fine body wise, at least matching what her supposed age is, however her face is massively off. Bringing it closer to the daughter in composition would be a good start.

Another suggestion would be to make a back-banner for when choices appear on screen. Something to highlight what options are available.

I don't want to comment on the translation, as it's clear that the author is working on that.
Did you play the original? I do not know why the hell he changed them. they where much better then what ever this "stuff" is. A lot of people feel the same that he should have stuck to the original models. With the way these look and the daughters overly large fake looking tits... I wont touch this... Sad part is I really looked forward to more from the original and instead we got this...
 

bamachine

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Might be a decent game but in serious need of a proofreader. Syntax and pronoun issues galore, for such a short initial release. Also, the daughter needs a boob and ass reduction. She looks like a cartoon character, rather than a real female. Those boobs and ass might fit if her waist was not so small.
 
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