StingerWolf
Hii, thanks for trying out the game. Since you made a review, I will adress it here
"Since the developer of the game contacted me to reivew this, I am doing it."
Well I appreciate honest reviews but when I think there is a misunderstanding. When I mean critize, I didn't mean it in review in first stages, more like pointing out the parts you didn't find well portrayed in private or in comments so I can correct them in the beginning stages. I only messaged very few people whom I noticed that they comment in several games I like so they can give more constructive comments. I believe in you guys taste. But anyway I can only learn from mistakes, will write why I ask for criticism if I write someone
"Normally I wait till a game has more content. Currently this one has not much yet. The writing is okayish, sometimes a bit off, but I have seen worse from Russian devs. "
Is there any aspect of writing that feels "off", is it grammar mistakes, dialogues etc? I am trying to improve my writing and english in general so any detailed message is appreciated!
"Art is generally good, it is the only aspect this game stands out."
Don't worry guys, after two chapters, things will get more action and story included. I wanted to introduce characters before getting into action so you won't give critic decision with wrong characters
" The interface is unoptimized, meaning, when I want to save, I cant change the saving page with the arrow, because the "return" button overlaps it. Never seen anything like this, it should be corrected ASAP."
Ops sorry about it and thanks for pointing out. The device I could play test had very different screen size is different so when I played full screen, I didn't had it but I corrected the position of "return" menu now. I will release it with renewed animation scenes. Also I heard it should be affecting 8th etc. pages, do you guys save that much? if so I am flattered lol
"So in short, unique art, some characters are interesting, some are rather boring."
Oh which character that catched your interest most in current content?
"A very strange thing is, that they don't have names. Usually in other VN s characters introduce themselves after a few lines, or atleast we get to know their name. Here not so much."
I wanted mc to find their names in more natural order. He won't learn angry driver's name or random cashier's name when he first meet them or he will learn about some girls name before he meet them etc.
"This game might turn out better with more content and repaired UI. Currently I can only give it 3 stars. If it would have twice as much content, I would have had a better picture, dev should have waited until then, rather than ask for a review now. It is an average game with great art, bad UI, and sometimes the wirting is a bit all over the place. Well it can only get better, no?"
Well since I think it is caused by a misunderstanding, and with the content of public update it is definitely not negative. I asked for criticism now because I can't change the important mistakes in the game after it has more content. I am sure you will understand it. Also do you say UI bad because of bug of return menu or are there more displeasing things about it?
Have a great day!!