- Jan 11, 2020
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Oh, well, you know how it is. There's so many comments popping up that, sometimes, one can't be bothered to sift through 10-15 pages to find previous comments like that... xD
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- Apr 25, 2017
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people growing wings
werewolves
vampires(turning people into vampires)
myths wearing disguise and turning into human and original form.
need i go on?
This was the first update at the end of which i didn't feel unsatisfied 
Hopefully the complete chapter 4 will be the same
Hopefully the complete chapter 4 will be the same
- Mar 19, 2018
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Knowing a little of the real world mythology and history bouncing around in Zivairs bag of tricks there is a lot more than meets the eyes when it comes to the last update, partially because I added a little to said bag.
We have only barely skimmed the surface of whats happening, I have no Idea how much of the things I know about that he might be using in the long run, only that many things may mean more than they seem to, and could change future events in various severe ways.
Not having certain people around later might make some things more difficult later, or easier who knows.
PS: Trying not to let out any Ideas me and Zivairs chatted about out.
Just trust him to write a good story.
We have only barely skimmed the surface of whats happening, I have no Idea how much of the things I know about that he might be using in the long run, only that many things may mean more than they seem to, and could change future events in various severe ways.
Not having certain people around later might make some things more difficult later, or easier who knows.
PS: Trying not to let out any Ideas me and Zivairs chatted about out.
Just trust him to write a good story.
I thought its just easy fuck who you want and dont who u dont want
- Jan 3, 2018
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Many thanks to the dev for this game.
Finally got around to playing and thought this was excellent, a well told story in progress and am now looking forward to the next episode with high regard!
Great fun, great job! Thank you and well done!!
Finally got around to playing and thought this was excellent, a well told story in progress and am now looking forward to the next episode with high regard!
Great fun, great job! Thank you and well done!!
- Mar 19, 2018
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It is that, but so much more..., and less...
*Mind melts*
Lets just say Zivairs is learning a lot of the worlds Myths, Legends, and History behind the scenes to help him make a better game. Mainly in areas relating to things hes adding at the time or planning to add, eg. Magic or Vampires.
Just to remind people at the beginning of Chapter 4 MC is more than human, more than sorceror, maybe even more than a god, so the things he does could have lasting effects.
We just have to watch, Same Archon Time, Same Archon Channel lol
- Jul 10, 2017
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Yup .. Keep on riding the supernatural train straight to nothingness ... 'cause the arm dissapearing
rule of magic <give something 4 magik to hapen> must be lost on this so called always a wizard
MC without the will to conjure on the common sense of asking 4 help. Family trait, I guess.
rule of magic <give something 4 magik to hapen> must be lost on this so called always a wizard
MC without the will to conjure on the common sense of asking 4 help. Family trait, I guess.
I don't like where things are going. At the end of this chapter it feels like meeting with mc's father is going to be on neutral or positive circumstances. I hope it is not the case here. I just want to be in a hostile and bloody if possible.
- Mar 18, 2019
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Dunno if that will happen. Guy killed your GF and kid afterall
- Mar 21, 2017
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I kind of want something quick. MC and his father meet, dad launches into his self-important villain speech about destiny and the greater good, and MC cuts him off about three lines in by vaporizing him. Don't give the character the validation of a dramatic death sequence, and drive home his insignificance in relation to the MC.
But if you do that he won't have time to appreciate his insignificance. Yes, interrupt the speach, but use something that will be slow -- like melting him into a sentient puddle before you vaporize him.
Bwahahaha
Bwahahaha
- Dec 19, 2018
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OMFG, the comedy in this game is great, albeit sometimes a bit cheesy but damn Sammy and Alvara. Sammy: I hope you are accurate. Alvara: We will both find out! that killed me omfg i am still laughing.
So far this game is something else. It has captivated me to the brink. I almost called into work just to finish it. hahaha
anyway good job Zivairs
I would like to add, I reluctantly tried this game recently, after I dont know how many times i just passed it over. I am glad i did break down and try it though. I am pleasantly surprised. the engrish isnt to terrible.
Although I did find myself saying this dialog needs an English speaking proof reader, the translation isnt to bad, just little things like want instead of what, etc. i did read a few comments that said there was really bad engrish with words like your instead of you're, i did not run into that(so I am guessing that stuff was fixed).
ultimately I am glad i decided to play this game, the story was well done, definitely refreshing that is for sure. not the same old run of the mill crap story line about boinking every thing that walks, talks or slithers with a little magic or mythical BS thrown in to try to seem cerebral. Although the MC is a major slut, but i digress. Renders are quite nice. I do have to agree with ThunderRob from an earlier post about Kitsumi, she is a delite, would love to see more with that girl in future updates. I totally like where things are going with the story. well I gave my 2 cents. Thanks again Zivairs! Cheers!
So far this game is something else. It has captivated me to the brink. I almost called into work just to finish it. hahaha
anyway good job Zivairs
I would like to add, I reluctantly tried this game recently, after I dont know how many times i just passed it over. I am glad i did break down and try it though. I am pleasantly surprised. the engrish isnt to terrible.
Although I did find myself saying this dialog needs an English speaking proof reader, the translation isnt to bad, just little things like want instead of what, etc. i did read a few comments that said there was really bad engrish with words like your instead of you're, i did not run into that(so I am guessing that stuff was fixed).
ultimately I am glad i decided to play this game, the story was well done, definitely refreshing that is for sure. not the same old run of the mill crap story line about boinking every thing that walks, talks or slithers with a little magic or mythical BS thrown in to try to seem cerebral. Although the MC is a major slut, but i digress. Renders are quite nice. I do have to agree with ThunderRob from an earlier post about Kitsumi, she is a delite, would love to see more with that girl in future updates. I totally like where things are going with the story. well I gave my 2 cents. Thanks again Zivairs! Cheers!
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- Jul 10, 2018
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Little bug report for the run without Sammy in chapter 4
- image 'Rch4courtyardfight1ala' not found
- the MC after the meeting with the alpha referes to him and sammy needs a glamour, but sammy is not with him
- image 'Rch4courtyardfight1ala' not found
- the MC after the meeting with the alpha referes to him and sammy needs a glamour, but sammy is not with him
This game has been a pleasant find. Great story, nice amount of content and i will most certenly keep an eye out for it in the future
- Jul 10, 2017
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Oh .. SNAP! That exact STORY IS THE ORIGIN TALE FOR BOTH HERCULES AND KRATOS gg
So I’m sitting here in my hotel room reading these comments, and damn you guys are blood-thirsty. Lol.
) So I am going with the original plot, and in the original plot, she loves the MC, and the MC cares for her since she has been closer to him than his family.
Work has pulled me away for a week, so it will take some time. Especially if the poll I have going right now wins for a Short-story for Valentine's day.
Thank you for telling me I’ll fix it when I get back home.
Back in Ch 3. I was going to have the MC send Alvara away, but my girlfriend enjoys her original plot and made me keep her on(A few people here took her side as well.
) So I am going with the original plot, and in the original plot, she loves the MC, and the MC cares for her since she has been closer to him than his family.Yes, they are a different species from humans. One created/blessed by Hecate.
Yup, it seems my proofreader missed it, and I can’t spell. lol
If you recall so is Vanessa, but she has the Faun is helping her with that. Just like Elizabeth now has the Countess.
Ashall Family is the top Sorcerer around those parts, to them asking for help would be like. You asking an Ant to help you move something. Oh, and they do ‘give up’ something when the worship Hecate. I don’t show the MC doing it because it would be repetitive to see it, every Chapter, but I can put it in if you want?
I will fix it when I get home, thank you for telling me.
That’s true, but in both those stories or at least the ones I’ve read. The Gods/a God made them go mad, the MC didn’t go mad and kill his own GF and child….maybe the Father went mad instead…?