VN Ren'Py Completed Retrieving The Past [S3 E.6 & Epilogue] [MrKnobb]

[renoX]

Nice work!

 

[TiffanyMonroe]

Did the free game not measure up? Show some fucking respect to the dev. He obviously put a lot of hard work into it. I like the story.

I'm sorry, I must've missed the memo where you can't criticize things if they are "free", derp. I'll do better next time.

 

[User_31172]

I'm sorry, I must've missed the memo where you can't criticize things if they are "free", derp. I'll do better next time.

Calling something a waste of time cause YOU fail to read tags and don't like the linear game concept is hardly criticism. It doesn't help anyone and is very disrespectful.

 

[h3avenw0rd]

Enjoying this game so far, I do like it when a game has consistent progression over an abundance of choices that aren't fully implemented.
Definitely keeping an eye on more updates as this game and its story develops.

 

[TiffanyMonroe]

Calling something a waste of time cause YOU fail to read tags and don't like the linear game concept is hardly criticism. It doesn't help anyone and is very disrespectful.

"Criticism: the expression of disapproval of someone or something based on perceived faults or mistakes." Please read the definition carefully, it'll help you in the future. Thanks.

 

[User_31172]

"Criticism: the expression of disapproval of someone or something based on perceived faults or mistakes." Please read the definition carefully, it'll help you in the future. Thanks.

constructive criticism

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[misterf91]

"Criticism: the expression of disapproval of someone or something based on perceived faults or mistakes." Please read the definition carefully, it'll help you in the future. Thanks.

The "Perceived faults or mistakes" part is intended on the game side.
If you make a mistake reading tags, you're the one at fault.

Your criticism is like searching for a Turn Based Strategy game, picking up a First Person Shooter and complaining there's not enough strategy involved...

 

[Luka85]

eurhmmm ?
linear story .
its a visual novel, did you even play it?
or check other comments ?

never play...just ask before dowload..waste of time?

 

[N7]

added Android Version ch 2

 

[Myscho]

With some many girls around, poooor Jensen

 

[UncleVT]

Walkthrough?

LOL!!!

 

[HorizonD]

The Story is pretty interesting. Also, the Renders and Models are fine looking.
Nice work, keep it up.
Thank you.

 

[dacris69]

Nice update, and so many girls and all hot, damn :FeelsGoodMan:

 

[Draakaap23]

This game has some of the most simpleminded-porn-like-story to it from most games on f95, I like it
Plenty of hot girls, choices don't really matter much (yet?)
It doesn't take itself too serious, although what I can see is that there will be an option for that in future releases.
The story is a bit predictable, but when that predictability means you know that hot girls and women will jump for you at a snap of your fingers, who's going to complain about that?

 

[Skyangel007]

This game has some of the most simpleminded-porn-like-story to it from most games on f95, I like it
Plenty of hot girls, choices don't really matter much (yet?)
It doesn't take itself too serious, although what I can see is that there will be an option for that in future releases.
The story is a bit predictable, but when that predictability means you know that hot girls and women will jump for you at a snap of your fingers, who's going to complain about that?

I agree if you're going for a more serious game then go for a more serious game and put a lot of effort in it! I feel it should be same in reverse even if a game is a bit more simple. Like you've said this game doesn't take itself too serious then that's fine too as long as the effort has been made to make it a good game which the developer definitively has.

 

[Draakaap23]

I agree if you're going for a more serious game then go for a more serious game and put a lot of effort in it! I feel it should be same in reverse even if a game is a bit more simple. Like you've said this game doesn't take itself too serious then that's fine too as long as the effort has been made to make it a good game which the developer definitively has.

Indeed, if it fits the tone of a game: go for it. But if you are gonna add something a whole lot different halfway through development, it will just feel wrong more often then not

 

[BeastMaster59]

Did the free game not measure up? Show some fucking respect to the dev. He obviously put a lot of hard work into it. I like the story.

Same here,hate it when people download a game,don`t pay shit,and then have the nerve to bitch about it.just right disrespectful.

 

[Skyangel007]

Indeed, if it fits the tone of a game: go for it. But if you are gonna add something a whole lot different halfway through development, it will just feel wrong more often then not

Well I kinda disagree. Change can be a good thing but it depends on the timing, circumstances and the change itself. If hes going with a VN style game then yea I agree with your sentiment. But change isn't a bad thing adding interesting new feature's can improves one's game play if done properly. My point is don't half-ass it, put in some effort. There are some games out there that have been half-finished or just been rushed to completion. But I don't think this game is one of them nor is it gonna be in this format.

 

[Deleted member 635942]

SO NO ONE noticed the yellow boots after Jensen dude fucked up the two body builder dudes? No find that interesting? What, who, why?
I just have a feeling somethings a foot (Oh yeah i Punned it)

 

[Deleted member 167032]

First of all, thank you for playing the game whether you like it or not. You at least took the time to do so. As a dev that means a lot.

Now if I may, I have plans for this Visual Novel and I mean Novel. From the start I wanted to tell a story and this is a risky thing as the story can be interesting/entertaining or just shit. I hope for the first. Without choice based or information gathering, big ass / tittles and incest not many will find it interesting to play once again something I was/am aware. Still I have a story to tell and would like you guys to enjoy it with me.

I deliberately called it Episode One and then Chapter etc....

Episode Two (I like mixing shit up) which will come later on, my vision is to introduce a choice based game using the current story and characters, same game slightly different style. It will be a game and not just a read.

As for current Chapters TRUST me when i say your mind will be blown as I have something planned that will make most ppl go WTF?

So I leave y'all now to enjoy it for what it is a Visual NOVEL. Chapter 3 will have more fighting, mystery (Yellow boots as mentioned earlier) and more sexiness and porn. As for graphics quality I can only do what my hardware allows me but I can do better with regards to my animations which I will work at.

As my grandma use to say "Son, it's better than a kick in the ass"

.:Lataz:.

EDIT: I worked on Episode One, Chapter 1 for 7 months before releasing it and I wanted to give more content than most Demo's on release which I believe I did. That's how serious I am.

Well I kinda disagree. Change can be a good thing but it depends on the timing, circumstances and the change itself. If hes going with a VN style game then yea I agree with your sentiment. But change isn't a bad thing adding interesting new feature's can improves one's game play if done properly. My point is don't half-ass it, put in some effort. There are some games out there that have been half-finished or just been rushed to completion. But I don't think this game is one of them nor is it gonna be in this format.