VN Ren'Py Completed Revenga [v1.0 Extra] [Maks]

[Naxos]

Without being stupidly evil I would root for the step-mom. Yes she planned to get the money ... oh. btw. It is way easier to get the money and have a nice life when you dont torture the only child of your moneybag. But back to the topic. She had a plan, but she was married to her husband for 12 years and now she only gets 1 house and 500k for that? And the son (that left his father behind and did his own thing) gets the rest?

She has every right to be pissed!

A. You're trolling.

B. You're just as delusional as Mallory is if you think she has any right to be pissed. The murderous bitch doesn't have a right to a single dime of his. She never did. Don't care if she's been married and taking up every hole 5 times a day for the last 12 years. She murdered his wife to get there, so wasn't entitled to a single cent from the start. Plus if you spent more than 5 minutes playing the game you'd know she is nothing more than a murderous gold digging whore who couldn't wait any longer so poisoned the father to kill him off sooner for the money.

If you seriously believe Mallory is justified in being pissed or in anyway, you may want to consider some professional help.

 

[BTLD]

A. You're trolling.

B. You're just as delusional as Mallory is if you think she has any right to be pissed. The murderous bitch doesn't have a right to a single dime of his. She never did. Don't care if she's been married and taking up every hole 5 times a day for the last 12 years. She murdered his wife to get there, so wasn't entitled to a single cent from the start. Plus if you spent more than 5 minutes playing the game you'd know she is nothing more than a murderous gold digging whore who couldn't wait any longer so poisoned the father to kill him off sooner for the money.

If you seriously believe Mallory is justified in being pissed or in anyway, you may want to consider some professional help.

indeed !
Agree110%

 

[Gh0st_Harambe]

A. You're trolling.

B. You're just as delusional as Mallory is if you think she has any right to be pissed. The murderous bitch doesn't have a right to a single dime of his. She never did. Don't care if she's been married and taking up every hole 5 times a day for the last 12 years. She murdered his wife to get there, so wasn't entitled to a single cent from the start. Plus if you spent more than 5 minutes playing the game you'd know she is nothing more than a murderous gold digging whore who couldn't wait any longer so poisoned the father to kill him off sooner for the money.

If you seriously believe Mallory is justified in being pissed or in anyway, you may want to consider some professional help.

You couldn't have said it better.

 

[Naxos]

I don't know if the dev is here, but if so and any future potential devs, please don't do this:

"Locking 1 woman behind the choice of another."

E.g. I might not like Hillary, doesn't mean I'm not interest in milfs or the other chick in the group, it just means i'm not interested in Hillary.

Other bad dev tactic imo is the love or hate with no middle ground.

Just because I might not like the cousins look doesn't mean I dislike her (actually I do now because she's a cunt), so it's either her hating your and being a cunt to you or you have to say you like her look (regardless if you do not) and she then wants to fuck you. kind of love or hate. where is they hey, I'm not a fan, but if you like it awesome, lets be friendly option.

 

[sevendustkorn1008]

1) Yes (and it is the MC's sorta-girlfriend/fuckbuddy sharing him with another, not vice versa). 2) MFF.

Ah. Ok. Usually when the swinging tag is applied it refers to MC's girl also having sex with other men. I know technically, swinging only requires one of the couple of have sex outside the relationship. So, it could just be the man having sex with others, or the woman having sex with other women. However, that is more or less standard in every game. If we were being technical, damn near every game on this site can be tagged with swinging, especially harem games, since a lot of times, the woman shares the MC with other women. I just took the "swinging" tag as being something to warn players that the woman has sex with other men, while not being NTR (since that's mostly what triggers people).

 

[Naxos]

Ah. Ok. Usually when the swinging tag is applied it refers to MC's girl also having sex with other men. I know technically, swinging only requires one of the couple of have sex outside the relationship. So, it could just be the man having sex with others, or the woman having sex with other women. However, that is more or less standard in every game. If we were being technical, damn near every game on this site can be tagged with swinging, especially harem games, since a lot of times, the woman shares the MC with other women. I just took the "swinging" tag as being something to warn players that the woman has sex with other men, while not being NTR (since that's mostly what triggers people).

So far there are zero other dicks in the game as far as I remember. I was a little apprehensive about the swinging tag too, but so far there is nothing I'd consider swinging at all.

Even cheating would be a bit of a stretch. While I know Maddie and the MC are not officially together, I view them as such, but she's given him a green light to play the field. I could be wrong, but I don't think he'd had sex with anyone else before she said that. Hannah was after, and so was Hillary I think. Yes there was some oral /hand stuff, but no real sex.

Even Mallory getting action from Enrique is not shown, very strongly implied but not shown.

 

[BUCCO]

You couldn't have said it better.

yes, she doesn't have a piece in her, good. is like a disney duck what she has in her eyes dollars (a tribute to the DEV, for creating a perfect evil nature) but the brain is the Spanish papa Enrique ;-)

 

[Deleted member 1399911]

Ah. Ok. Usually when the swinging tag is applied it refers to MC's girl also having sex with other men. I know technically, swinging only requires one of the couple of have sex outside the relationship. So, it could just be the man having sex with others, or the woman having sex with other women. However, that is more or less standard in every game. If we were being technical, damn near every game on this site can be tagged with swinging, especially harem games, since a lot of times, the woman shares the MC with other women. I just took the "swinging" tag as being something to warn players that the woman has sex with other men, while not being NTR (since that's mostly what triggers people).

EXACTLY.. My point..

There is no swinging in this.. But at the same time I also don't see MC and Maddie as a couple..

 

[BTLD]

EXACTLY.. My point..

There is no swinging in this.. But at the same time I also don't see MC and Maddie as a couple..

But at the same time I also don't see MC and Maddie as a couple.
all I have to add to that is ...yet!

 

[Deleted member 1399911]

But at the same time I also don't see MC and Maddie as a couple.
all I have to add to that is ...yet!

Still wouldn't be swinging either way imo.. Would require pretty much every game to get that tag.

 

[BTLD]

Still wouldn't be swinging either way imo.. Would require pretty much every game to get that tag.

true true

 

[micojive]

Renders are pretty solid and the girls are all pretty, but man the dialog is laughable. Some of the shit that is said is straight out of days of our lives.

 

[BUCCO]

Renders are pretty solid and the girls are all pretty, but man the dialog is laughable. Some of the shit that is said is straight out of days of our lives.

ooo I like it, at least I don't have a problem with the translation hahaha

 

[Naxos]

Renders are pretty solid and the girls are all pretty, but man the dialog is laughable. Some of the shit that is said is straight out of days of our lives.

One of my favourites is the bad guy following the MC home, knowing who the MC is the whole time and then finally arriving at the MC's house and is like "oh so this is the puta they keep talking about". It's awesome, great laugh.

ffs he knew that the whole time.

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[BTLD]

I swear to god ...some of these people that write up reviews..I think they have really big issues...
" The first interaction is him being a massive dick to his step-family, would've been more effective if he was at least somewhat diplomatic and polite, just trying to see his dad, instead of outright hostile. I guess he couldn't wait to show how 'alpha' he became? But I digress. "
Seriously?you would be diplomatic with someone calling you names everyday...and lets not forget that they lets not say stab but poke him with needles to "deflate" him..and you say...diplomatic....right...sure....

I like the game to be honest and MC's rage is nothing short of justifiable ....anyone who says otherwise is either trolling or ...well you know you.

 

[Naxos]

I swear to god ...some of these people that write up reviews..I think they have really big issues...
" The first interaction is him being a massive dick to his step-family, would've been more effective if he was at least somewhat diplomatic and polite, just trying to see his dad, instead of outright hostile. I guess he couldn't wait to show how 'alpha' he became? But I digress. "
Seriously?you would be diplomatic with someone calling you names everyday...and lets not forget that they lets not say stab but poke him with needles to "deflate" him..and you say...diplomatic....right...sure....

I like the game to be honest and MC's rage is nothing short of justifiable ....anyone who says otherwise is either trolling or ...well you know you.

I get peoples reaction like that at the start, but they obviously haven't made it through the front door of the game to think that.

Anyone with 2 functioning brain cells who thinks that either hasn't played the game or is trolling or maybe in need of professional mental help. All the bad writing aside, there is no way any functional person can justify defending the step family or their actions.

I could see a tiny bit of justification for the step sisters as they are a product of that witch of a mother, but it's just a tiny sliver and they have a lot of work to do to redeem themselves, but i doubt they will. There is zero redemption for the mother, short of her giving up everything, a complete over change in every aspect and full confession to the police of everything she's done, even then one day maybe forgiveness, but never forgetting.

 

[BUCCO]

I get peoples reaction like that at the start, but they obviously haven't made it through the front door of the game to think that.

Anyone with 2 functioning brain cells who thinks that either hasn't played the game or is trolling or maybe in need of professional mental help. All the bad writing aside, there is no way any functional person can justify defending the step family or their actions.

I could see a tiny bit of justification for the step sisters as they are a product of that witch of a mother, but it's just a tiny sliver and they have a lot of work to do to redeem themselves, but i doubt they will. There is zero redemption for the mother, short of her giving up everything, a complete over change in every aspect and full confession to the police of everything she's done, even then one day maybe forgiveness, but never forgetting.

you read my mind with those stepsesters, I thought about it too..

 

[Talmadge]

There's a typo in the script (v5.rpy line 700): if renpy.has_label("v4_h_0_e") should be if renpy.has_label("v5_h_0_e")

Tagging MaksB JIC.

How do I change the code? Where do I go? I looked in the Script.rpy, but can't find that line.

 

[Trasher2018]

A. You're trolling.

B. You're just as delusional as Mallory is if you think she has any right to be pissed. The murderous bitch doesn't have a right to a single dime of his. She never did. Don't care if she's been married and taking up every hole 5 times a day for the last 12 years. She murdered his wife to get there, so wasn't entitled to a single cent from the start. Plus if you spent more than 5 minutes playing the game you'd know she is nothing more than a murderous gold digging whore who couldn't wait any longer so poisoned the father to kill him off sooner for the money.

If you seriously believe Mallory is justified in being pissed or in anyway, you may want to consider some professional help.

You miss my point.

From the OUTSIDE she has every right to be pissed (from her perspective that is not even a question).

You look at that with the knowledge of the player that she murdered the mom. But as I said earlier - imagine you are a neighbor or something like that and you hear about it by gossip.

The beautiful wife with her sweet daughters, that helped him after the tragic death of his first wife, who spent the last 12 years with him, gets barley nothing and the son gets 99%.

Without the magical dream and backflashes (and her talking about her murder every 2nd scene ) you would not know that. And yes she is (as I said) stupidly evil (bc bad writing) - so there is no chance to root for her - just because. But you could achieve that with a better build up.

And yes - I know it is "just a porn" game and its the typical kind without any care about stuff like character arcs, motivation and development, suspension of disbelief or other things.

Its basically a slideshow with porn style dialog and text. "Why are you wearing a mask?" - "Why is there straw?" *fucking*

I am aware that I over analyse the plot and character motivations - but that is fun - and no, I have no intention in trolling. I just want to point out how you can improve your stories - not for this game, but maybe for the next (if the dev is reading here - dunno, dont care - maybe other devs can understand my point ^^)

So maybe I should rephrase my earlier statement - "I COULD root for her, with better writing and if she wasn't as stupidly evil as she is, because from an outside perspective she has the right to be pissed."

 

[BUCCO]

nice one

you too