That cart scene is actually great, definitely want to see what you do in the city, and I'm pumped for certain scenes to pick up where they left off when she gets back to he village. On a side note, have you considered making that cart bj have more stages and be a slightly longer scene. It is a long journey and a couple other images would be nice to demonstate the passage of time. My two suggestions would either be some form of bukakke (a flash to her face sullied followed by another where her top is down and dripping with more would be the idea, guy did say he was backed up). Suggestion 2 would be to consider having her give a titjob since he did start the journey talking about her bouncing betties for a whole scene.
Of course focus on the city since progressing the story matters most, but if you find time I would love some extra love to that scene since its my favorite so far. Also eager to see a way to visit old scenes once we progress a little more.