only part i had in the script was..early on i lambasted the stories presentation here..the dev took notice..accepted invite to my server and we worked to bring out his quality writing instead of Shouty MacWTF style the first drop was in..so i did not do anything to the script..i shook up the dev and got him to find his smert
what i did hands on is playtest look for bugs ..noticed alot of grammar and spelling errors and got my pal
Ozel to proofread it for him..Ozel was hands on the script..so thank him
The renders were just too nice to go to waste..Team Thunder had to help