VN Ren'Py Abandoned Savior [v0.16c] [Purple Fellas]

[HorizonD]

English is not my native language either and I don't mind WTF or OMG but what stood out for me was 'Holly shit'.
If I'm not wrong, Holly is a name and I guess you meant 'Holy shit'. The rest was at least understandable even if it somewhat sounded weird.

This is a pretty good machine translator:

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(When your language is there.)

 

[Wicked Garden]

I first thought the redhead was Melissa from AFOTA.

 

[khahan]

I think this is not right thread

sorry, you're right. I have your game downloaded but haven't gotten to it yet.

 

[Wicked Garden]

Ok aside from the grammar it was a solid first release. I wouldn't have told anyone my identity knowing how my father disappeared, especially to stranger.

 

[PeggyBlackett]

I have said this a few times before and it applies here again, a creative writing class is not hard to find.

The average "creative writing" class will do more harm than good.

 

[Vrijgeest]

Too horrible to be true. It is a ROBOT>

 

[myuhinny]

khahan

Since your error post isn't for this game you should click the delete option on your post to delete it.

 

[Gardan]

Nice, that's what i call proper first release! Other new Devs should learn from you !

Only grammar police cares about mistakes in the text, so don't worry about it! Gameplay and content is always the most important task.

PS: I'm known for being harsh to new Devs and their zero content releases #GivenWarning

 

[Purple Fellas]

Nice, that's what i call proper first release! Other new Devs should learn from you !

Only grammar police cares about mistakes in the text, so don't worry about it! Gameplay and content is always the most important task.

PS: I'm known for being harsh to new Devs and their zero content releases #GivenWarning

Thank you so much for your kind words. We are currently working on grammar mistakes and general writing. We wanted to add more content at first release but, we decided to do better renders instead of bunch of average or bad renders. Please keep on sharing your suggestions with us, thank you.

 

[EverydaySanePsycho]

Ok aside from the grammar it was pretty solid first release. I wouldn't have told anyone my identity knowing how my father disappeared, especially to stranger.

It's okay-ish. The story so far isn't blowing me away but...it is the first release.

 

[ChiakiM]

An interesting one, surely saw some potential in it

 

[TheCrimsonRevenger]

Gonna have to wait and find out if the body swapping and futa stuff is optional or forced

 

[SandmansMisery]

The renders an game looks good needs some work on the grammar an a proofreader. Maybe cut back on some of the funny harassing dialogues between the Mc an his Allison making fun of each other is ok but gets old when its there whole conversion. I dont think telling your life story (about your dad ) to a complete stranger was smart when at the coffe shop you didnt want to talk about it but now your spilling your guts out over one drink.

 

[meigame]

Liked your VN. thanks. might have gone with calling his dick a baton or club rather than a gun but that's just me. Looking forward to following this one, thanks again.

 

[JeffTheGreat]

Lmao As a guy that love Tattoo's it's not that bad XD i mean all of the complain about the tattoo i thought she is going to have a lot of tattoo's like Monami frost
You can freaking count Amber tattoo's on your hand XD


Monami Frost

 

[Purple Fellas]

Gonna have to wait and find out if the body swapping and futa stuff is optional or forced

They gonna be optional.

 

[Purple Fellas]

An interesting one, surely saw some potential in it

Thank you

 

[Purple Fellas]

The renders an game looks good needs some work on the grammar an a proofreader. Maybe cut back on some of the funny harassing dialogues between the Mc an his Allison making fun of each other is ok but gets old when its there whole conversion. I dont think telling your life story (about your dad ) to a complete stranger was smart when at the coffe shop you didnt want to talk about it but now your spilling your guts out over one drink.

Thank you. We already done some re-writing and changed some dialogues . We are going to share update as soon as we check everything. Please keep sharing your suggestions with us

 

[SandmansMisery]

Thank you. We already done some re-writing and changed some dialogues . We are going to share update as soon as we check everything. Please keep sharing your suggestions with us

awesome I'll be sure to check it out cant wait

 

[the66]

per request, here is my unofficial android port of Savior v1.0.

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from now on my android ports of Ren'Py games have a 2nd, persistent save location like windows. if you uninstall an app, the save files and persistent data remain intact.
therefore the app needs the permission to access the public external storage, because it has to read and write outside its own external storage directories.
you have to grant the permission or the app is shut down.

have fun and please report problems (you can reach me

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