After some time playing this game, i can say that the art and graphic part is really well made, lots of interesting details (i'm not a fan of the blurring effect with the model coming in the middle of the screen tho, it impedes the immersion imo)
The animations are also really polished
The gameplay and the global storyline seem interesting
The only point that bugs me are the text lines, i can't pinpoint exactly what it is, but it prevents me from focusing on the story and the characters instead of giving a deeper perception of them.
Except for that, the game is really promising, keep up the good work !