VN Ren'Py Abandoned SeaL [v0.11 Gamma] [Vernam]

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Vernam

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Destriss said:
dont see the humor
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I'm sorry to hear that.
My intention, as per the description, is to create a fast-paced fun sequence of scenes.
Obviously storytelling can be considered experimental with the S.e.a.L system to generate the story and it may not be liked.
 
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Destriss

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Vernam said:
I'm sorry to hear that.
My intention, as per the description, is to create a fast-paced fun sequence of scenes.
Obviously storytelling can be considered experimental with the S.e.a.L system to generate the story and it may not be liked.
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The problem its not the scene sex or a fast-paced fun sequence of scenes
it's the way it's put forward, yes a guy who turns into a girl and becomes crazy about dicks in 20 sec, actually I don't see how it's funny.
It would be more logical to have scenes that don't have the consent of the MC who explores his new sexuality like that.
 
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I'm sorry but it's not the intention of the game to be anything introspective or complex.

Maybe it's just me but I think a face that appears and, every 3-4 min, says "You have unlocked [X]" funny :)
Especially with unexpected and strange tags (A whole sequence about [Ahegao]?).

Regarding the main character I honestly don't understand the need for a character to easily identify with in a story.

As I joke in the ending the only complex or "philosophical" question is the following:
If you have to be Takuya, which one are you in the finale?
 
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Vernam said:
I'm sorry but it's not the intention of the game to be anything introspective or complex.

Maybe it's just me but I think a face that appears and, every 3-4 min, says "You have unlocked [X]" funny :)
Especially with unexpected and strange tags (A whole sequence about [Ahegao]?).

Regarding the main character I honestly don't understand the need for a character to easily identify with in a story.

As I joke in the ending the only complex or "philosophical" question is the following:
If you have to be Takuya, which one are you in the finale?
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making a logical story doesn't mean a complex or introspective story, and a logical story doesn't mean an unfunny story.

I'm not saying this in order to be mean or to be in pure negative criticism.
But it seems to me to be the kind of game that chains together scenes without any real coherence just to have a wank. And I repeat myself, but I don't see how a guy who turns into a girl who is looking to be fucked 20 seconds later is funny.

For me there is a work to do in the storytelling.

I repeat, of course I didn't like it, but if I criticize here it's not just to be mean. ( sorry for my english )

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Never thought of criticism as an offense, or you being mean!
I was just trying to explain my choices for the game.
As I said, the game can be considered experimental from a storytelling point of view and it's not like it has to be liked.

Ps: the real funny thing I think is this: I use the same translator :)
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The game is still under English correction with possible addition of new jokes.
As the next version is to be considered complete (SeaL 1.0?) I don't want to rush things.

Regarding an expansion with new sequences (and tags) I'm afraid it is necessary to change the structure of the game, the idea of expanding only the endings convinces me less and less, I think it is necessary to add new paths in between.
Obviously it is necessary to maintain the symmetrical structure of the endings, this is SeaL after all.

If I expand it is my intention to do it in a single update, effectively doubling the game and it's a big work.

For now i'd like to have a complete and correct game and then see what to do.
 
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The end triggers two loops after the second harem and having seen all the paths, including humor.
 
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Before I waste a download to try I have to know is there a male MC path were we get with the women of the school or is this a game were the MC is forced to take a pill at the beginning of the game that transforms him into a female so he now she can be a walking cum receptacle with no choice in the matter from the player.
 
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1Teddy1 said:
Before I waste a download to try I have to know is there a male MC path were we get with the women of the school or is this a game were the MC is forced to take a pill at the beginning of the game that transforms him into a female so he now she can be a walking cum receptacle with no choice in the matter from the player.
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"waste a download" Ouch, to answer your question, there is? But you have to find it.
 
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"waste a download" Ouch, to answer your question, there is? But you have to find it.
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I have to find it?, so I have to sit through a female path and look at scenes I don't want to see just to get to a male path?
 
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I can't wait for the new version and wonder when it will come. If anyone knows, can you tell me when it will come?
Sorry if my english is bad.
 
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