VN Ren'Py Completed Second Chance [v1.0] [Maks]

[blastwave2k]

This is only version 0.3. We will try to do more scenes with Chloe. But don't expect more than hugs and kisses. She is not of legal age.

Why even tease anything then at that point? All you will be doing is pissing off people.

In my mind, my MC is 20, so if shes 2 years younger that's totally legit and porn safe. Looky what I did there. If people like her, just get creative.

Edit: also dev's MaksB bonghits420 if you guys haven't yet, you should check out Our Fate by CedSense. That game has a pretty awesome way of doing what it feels like you're trying to do, tell generally the same story with the same or similar renders but using the writing to approach it from different... paths, with some variation as needed

 

[J0K3RXXX]

It's a very promising game

 

[MaksB]

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[GamingWithTheNyte]

I have been searching for discord of maks who made this amazing game like Second Chance. Is there anyone who can help me find their discord? Please

 

[Only4You]

Wow, the mom always addresses the MC as "son". Long live the Victorian era.

For God's sake, non-native speaker devs, don't make the games cheesier by doing this. I'm a non-native speaker myself, yet it makes me cringe all the same. Occasionally - maybe, but not all the time. Just use the son's name instead, or dear/honey/sweetie/baby - depending on how close they are.

And ditch "mommy"/"mother". Even 5-year-old kids nowadays feel ashamed of calling their mothers "mommy" and even a 70-year-old person wouldn't address their moms as "mother". Get creative; use - Mum/Ma/Mama - which might indicate where they come from - for example, the British usually say mum instead of mom. Hispanic people often call their mothers "ma"/"mama".

 

[bonghits420]

Wow, the mom always addresses the MC as "son". Long live the Victorian era.

For God's sake, non-native speaker devs, don't make the games cheesier by doing this. I'm a non-native speaker myself, yet it makes me cringe all the same. Occasionally - maybe, but not all the time. Just use the son's name instead, or dear/honey/sweetie/baby - depending on how close they are.

And ditch "mommy"/"mother". Even 5-year-old kids nowadays feel ashamed of calling their mothers "mommy" and even a 70-year-old person wouldn't address their moms as "mother". Get creative; use - Mum/Ma/Mama - which might indicate where they come from - for example, the British usually say mum instead of mom. Hispanic people often call their mothers "ma"/"mama".

That's not necessarily true, as a native speaker and a hispanic (chicano) the term mother is still used. Especially when "mother" abandoned her own kid. Speaking from my own experiences with my own shitty mother, I never call her mom or mama. It's always mother. Thanks for the feedback it is appreciated.

 

[Only4You]

That's not necessarily true, as a native speaker and a hispanic (chicano) the term mother is still used. Especially when "mother" abandoned her own kid. Speaking from my own experiences with my own shitty mother, I never call her mom or mama. It's always mother. Thanks for the feedback it is appreciated.

Yeah, "mother" is still used, but it's kinda cold, as you've pointed out. Damian Wayne calls Talia "mother" and Batman "father"... So, if that is one's intention, i.e. showing how cold their relationship is, they could go for it.

 

[MaksB]

Whose pussy?

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[sakuyas_mmaster]

Whose pussy?

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Jessica?

 

[leon02457]

Common can't wait to see mom son scene

 

[Warhawk1]

I'm excited for the possible scene with chloe

 

[MaksB]

Common can't wait to see mom son scene

 

[ZagorTeNay]

Looks a bit glued to the boy.
Err, what's with the nails?

 

[HorizonD]

The nails? Hmm, they are long? ^^
What more confuses me is that MC looks too small/thin... Could be the angle, don't know.

 

[MaksB]

 

[leon02457]

I don't care what others said about this beautiful game but Dev any idea of next realease date

 

[MaksB]

I don't care what others said about this beautiful game but Dev any idea of next realease date

Next week

 

[leon02457]

Next week

Can you post some more of next update's mom-son scene

 

[pitruchio]

Spoiler: v0.3.1

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[HorizonD]

Spoiler: v0.3.1

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Thank you but I guess it's just a bugfix?