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I don't mean to sound ungrateful, but did this game just feature an mc's sex scene with his mother?
I think the biggest problem for me is crossovers as I rarely enjoy them, so they drag on for me, and none of the endings really felt complete or connected to one another.If you want more content then I can think about doing that but if you are finding them boring then I don't think adding more would help the problem. I wrote the endings just as I have done with all the previous content and I put all of my effort into that.
If I decided to add more content then it would just be continuing the storylines that you are finding boring. But I appreciate you for playing anyway.
It shouldn't be surprising that open endings are unpopular. People want a sense of closure. You've said yourself that the game has been going on for three years - many people have been following it through that time with genuine interest in the characters, so to see a relatively unfulfilling / open ending occur, they're going to be upset. If someone is expecting a definite ending and gets the opposite, they're going to feel strung along.I actually like to leave the endings open
Well, seems you quite fucked up your playthrough then. I had actually a really big update, don't know what weird decisions you made back in the game...What, i just started and load my save to just get the ending the next second!!
Well that was the shortest update ever !!!
From what i have seen in the previous posts, it seems that there was a misunderstanding and the dev gets upset because people are not satisfied.
What did he expect by making that kind of shitty end, Superwriter ending up as Underwriter. Well when someone choose Superwriter as a name, he can expect some kick in the butt if he's not that super! My god some people really have an inflated ego!
For me it was a solid update, too. I liked the endings in this release. As said the ones before (harem and Norah) are a bit rushed, but the others imo are fine. All in all I liked the game.Well, seems you quite fucked up your playthrough then. I had actually a really big update, don't know what weird decisions you made back in the game...
Wow really a shame, but I can't say too much since I only supported you during 2 or 3 months so yeah I was excited about the final and I didn't play the game for a while in order to know norah ending before playing now that I know she only gets one sex scene and really not so much romance or pregnancy its a turndown. Hopefully you could finish her story in the future but its really unlikely since people and you will probably forget it . Hope for the best to you and my only advice is to make stories that are short but substantial , don't make something large to end it fast , it leaves a bad taste in the mouth because your game is good. If it were trash no one would complain.Hey, everyone. This is SuperWriter. I deleted my account a month or two ago, so I just created this one because one of you players messaged me and said I was on here getting bashed, and I didn't understand why, so I just wanted to clear some things up.
1) Why did I cut Norah ending? And not making her pregnant?
I had the bakery getting into some trouble and had one more update for that, but I realized it couldn't be wrapped up in one update and could be used later for a potential DLC/sequel. And Norah's storyline was about empowering her, and getting her to open up her bakery, so I was good with ending things there.
As for the pregnancy, I tried playing it out and it just didn't make sense to me to make her pregnant for no reason. Just like Picture Perfect, I could only envision pregnancy for those who it made sense. It made too much since for Irene because you are taking over for your father who couldn't get the job done, and she has just always wanted children as an older woman.
2) Again, you cut content?
Again, I feel like it made sense. But I I have put in so much work until this game that what I did cut out is probably less than 1% of content. This game now has 200,000 words and 3000 renders.
I know you guys are not game developers, but I will tell you right now that it is a ton of work, and I have been developing this game for 3 years.
It takes me about 3 hours to write 1500 words, so 200000/1500 = 133 x 3 = 399 hours of writing.
it takes me about 8 hours to do 20 renders, so 3000/20 = 150 x 8 = 1200 hours. (I'm pretty sure I'm doing that math right but please let me know if I'm wrong)
So combined, I have put in 1599 hours of work. By myself. I do all of the writing and I do all of the rendering. Every single letter and every single render. And for this final update, I did 40k words and 500-600 renders.
I understand if some of you may think my endings are rushed, but it's about the build up for me. Once the storyline is done, I have no more story left in my head. Again, I understand if people don't like that but this is the way that I know how to develop and tell stories.
It's actually why I'm no longer doing the full games. I have my anthology coming out next month (collection of short visual novels) And each will be about six updates long.
I'm trying it out to see what the feedback will be but I think you guys will like it because I have so many ideas I want to do. Of course if you guys don't like it then I will need to reconsider.
But in coming here is to say that I did my best with this story and I had a lot of fun doing it and I told the story that I wanted to and there's nothing that I want to go and change or add right now. Hopefully you guys will play the whole thing from beginning to end and be able to enjoy it more that way. But either way, I am going to try to do my best for my future games and hopefully you guys can enjoy them.
I will most likely be deleting this account again soon but please feel free to message me while I am here.
I get the guy doesn't want to spend more time on one VN then he has to but at least put more effort into closing out this series. Now I have to worry if his other games are going to be this shallow and lackluster, if they are then I'll pass.I heard that there is no ending with mc mom and the ending is in bakery.
Honestly, I am very dissapointed and angry. Mother mc was my favorite woman in the whole game (along with Irene) and I have to understand we only have one sex scene with her and that's it??
Sorry, but I don't know if I will play any more games from this Dev.
I heard that there is no ending with mc mom and the ending is in bakery.
Honestly, I am very dissapointed and angry. Mother mc was my favorite woman in the whole game (along with Irene) and I have to understand we only have one sex scene with her and that's it??
Sorry, but I don't know if I will play any more games from this Dev.
He is handling multiple games at once and AFAIK he updates every game in 2 weeks. He is limiting his time and hence we see these rushed content. Same with sex scenes, 5-6 renders and that's it. Also he remade a lot of his previous games that's why I wait for him to finish his game before trying it out. It gets tiring playing the same again and again. This game has been remade 2 times.I get the guy doesn't want to spend more time on one VN then he has to but at least put more effort into closing out this series. Now I have to worry if his other games are going to be this shallow and lackluster, if they are then I'll pass.
Seems you rejected then Zoe and Irene, because these endings are following after.So, wait, that's it? As in it needs a completed tag now? Because that shit seemed kinda sudden. "You and Coral won and made DLC shit, the end."
A variable that is either True or False so in other words you are either on the path or not.How should games track whether a potential LI has gained feelings, lust, or whatever for the MC?
This version contain:SO is the game complete or are there still more endings to come?