VN Ren'Py Completed Secret Summer [v1.0 Epilogue] [SuperWriter]

[Deleted member 1412183]

SuperWriter first off just wanna say, i love this game! i guess i came in a bit late and missed the version where the MC was a twin, but i still feel its turning into a great story just the same. as a writer myself, ive kinda made a few estimates as to the way things will play out and im glad you decided to keep this one going as id love to see where your story goes!
your renders and charachter models look great and i love the addition of pubic hair to Leanne! (on that note, i just wanted to point out a continuity error where if you ask Leanne to get naked for you in the first chapter or so, she is shaven and then when you take her to the camping trip later, she has her pubic hair down there. dont know if that would be easy to fix or not but i just thought id bring that to your attention)

just really enjoying your game and i been seein all the haters on here and thought that i would send out some positive vibes to let you know there are still those of us out here that enjoy your work and your stories. sure having to restart the game is a bit of a bummer, but i look at it as a chance to go back and see what the consequences of making different choices will do (of course i usually always roll back and go with the one i like most anyway lol) keep up the good work! i can unfortunately only support you with words of encouragement as my financial situation could be better right now, but if i had the means to support you, i definitely would. once again, thanks for keepin this one going! looking forward to that new update you mentioned!

PS. also thought i should point out how the text kinda drops below the text box sometimes when the text gets really long. just a minor thing that isnt a game breaker but something you should know about so you can tweak it if you get a chance.

This game was definitely a challenge starting out because I was a complete newbie and didn't know exactly how to turn the book version into a VN like I did with my other game Picture Perfect.

But I appreciate the love, dude. I do get my share of haters for whatever reason, but there are plenty of fans like you who do appreciate my work and it really does keep me motivated to give you guys the best updates possible.

And I promise I have a lot more good shit coming!

 

[Arigon]

Several years ago doctor's told a woman I know that she couldn't have children, so she went the adoption route. Almost 18 months later she was diagnosed with Stage 2 Cervical cancer. The treatment involved cauterizing the cervix with a freezing wand (not sure why they called it cauterizing, but they did). In any case it worked. She was diagnosed cancer free. Since she wasn't supposed to be able to get pregnant she and her husband didn't take any precautions... she ended up pregnant 16 months later. A year after her first natural birth, she was pregnant again. That was 24 years ago. Medicine's advanced a long way, lots of shit's possible. I have faith Super will have MC fix the situation, super sperm or otherwise... (no pun intended)

Personal experience-My wife has polycystic ovaries. They had damaged her ovaries so badly that they removed one. I have 4 kids and 3 grand kids now..... medicine can indeed do wonders. A condom also can do wonders but I love my kids... just never thought I would get 4... ages 33 to 11..........fuck, If I had not gotten my shit lasered up and totally nuked I probably would have had 10 kids....

 

[punisher2099]

 

[Deleted member 1412183]

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Lol Come on, leave the poor horsey alone

 

[JohnJG]

SuperWriter What a super sexy and fulfilling relationship the MC has with Irene. It was very enjoyable to play through.

Nicely done.

 

[markus T]

When I first started with this game...I got the mega bitch vibe from irene but about half way through that changed. Not only is she a total bombshell but she turned out to be a decent person. I was kinda surprised. Although I imagine that changes depending on your choices obviously.
Hopefully we get to take everything from the dbag father

 

[Weasel_Face]

There's gotta be a way to get Irene pregnant in the future

Perhaps she already is

Anyhow, just finished the update and given that it was all Irene I was skeptical but I gotta say what an update! I, like MC am definitely falling for her! (Nora is still the Queen tho)

 

[The ArcKnight]

I am liking the game so far but the Irene turn around is giving me whiplash.
I'm not talking about her going from cold bitch to warm and motherly
I'm talking about going from warm and motherly to "your my man now."
Like, that progression happened so fast I thought I had Guile from streetfighter up in here with that "SONIC BOOM!"

I understand Irene just had a traumatic event, but there needs to be more pacing for this to be even remotely believable.
Give them some time to express that motherly affection before it jumps to "make me your woman."

And yes, I realize I'm arguing against a sex scene but only because I feel the quality of the dev's writing in every other aspect is so much better then this, it feels rushed.

Just MHO though.

 

[Deleted member 1412183]

I am liking the game so far but the Irene turn around is giving me whiplash.
I'm not talking about her going from cold bitch to warm and motherly
I'm talking about going from warm and motherly to "your my man now."
Like, that progression happened so fast I thought I had Guile from streetfighter up in here with that "SONIC BOOM!"

I understand Irene just had a traumatic event, but there needs to be more pacing for this to be even remotely believable.
Give them some time to express that motherly affection before it jumps to "make me your woman."

And yes, I realize I'm arguing against a sex scene but only because I feel the quality of the dev's writing in every other aspect is so much better then this, it feels rushed.

Just MHO though.

You left a previous comment that said you loved the update and now you are saying it feels rushed lol

Not everything needs to be a slow burn or developed one step at a time. My games are more on the realistic side, so I like to have unpredictable events, just like life.

I have a friend who met a girl and got married a week later. Sometimes love just happens. It does not need to be carefully planned out. That's my opinion anyway lol

 

[Valeck]

I have a friend who met a girl and got married a week later. Sometimes love just happens. It does not need to be carefully planned out. That's my opinion anyway lol

I got married to my wife 2 months after we met.
In fact, I would have proposed to her the first time we talked but I waited some weeks to give her time .

 

[Gaunt27]

Super Writer, you're coming out with games left & right. Aren't you?

 

[Deleted member 1412183]

Super Writer, you're coming out with games left & right. Aren't you?

Not really lol. I have 3 current games.

1) Picture Perfect 0.11 (out a year+)

2) Secret Summer 0.6 (out a year+, was on hold)

3) Sun Breed 0.1

Sun Breed is my newest game. And Picture Perfect is in the final stages with three more updates left. I will replace it with another game once it is done.

 

[Abhai]

Super Writer, you're coming out with games left & right. Aren't you?

..and up&down...he is kinda fucking S.King of porn vns/novels
edit.
SuperWriter, may i ask you whats happening with those short vn-s you have started to release a while ago?
those were kinda nice mini-stories also

 

[Deleted member 1412183]

..and up&down...he is kinda fucking S.King of porn vns/novels
edit.
SuperWriter, may i ask you whats happening with those short vn-s you have started to release a while ago?
those were kinda nice mini-stories also

Aw, man. I did want to do those, but ran into some trouble. So I put them on the sideline for now. I'll get to the eventually though!

 

[rash69]

Not really lol. I have 3 current games.

1) Picture Perfect 0.11 (out a year+)

2) Secret Summer 0.6 (out a year+, was on hold)

3) Sun Breed 0.1

Sun Breed is my newest game. And Picture Perfect is in the final stages with three more updates left. I will replace it with another game once it is done.

What about Hunger For Chaos is that onhold?

 

[Deleted member 1412183]

What about Hunger For Chaos is that onhold?

Yeah, that's the only one on hold. Not exactly sure which way I want to go for it yet

 

[The ArcKnight]

You left a previous comment that said you loved the update and now you are saying it feels rushed lol

Not everything needs to be a slow burn or developed one step at a time. My games are more on the realistic side, so I like to have unpredictable events, just like life.

I have a friend who met a girl and got married a week later. Sometimes love just happens. It does not need to be carefully planned out. That's my opinion anyway lol

Yup, I started playing the update just at the Nora shower scene (as that's where I left off). As I progressed, I loved it the Coral section, date with Nora, all of it was great.

The Irene party section was the last little bit, so when it got to the hotel room things seemed to go from 4 to 11 with her. It just felt a little forced there at the end there, as she went from "I want to be a mother figure to you" to "My husband is probably cheating on me, he cares more for his business then me.. well fine then, I had one good day with his kid so I'll fuck him and make him my man then!"
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What?!
lol.

I just figured this section could of done with at least a little bit more time to breathe, especially since until then, Irene was MC's bitchy, cold, and emotionally withdrawn step-mom with nearly no interactions with MC. With the mom and sisters I can equate years of buildup to what we are seeing now, with Irene it just comes out of left field. And I've played your other games, they are stellar, I honestly wouldn't bother with this critique if I didn't already know you for being a good writer.

But those are my thoughts, feel free to use 'em or toss 'em as needed.

 

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[Deleted member 1412183]

Yup, I started playing the update just at the Nora shower scene (as that's where I left off). As I progressed, I loved it the Coral section, date with Nora, all of it was great.

The Irene party section was the last little bit, so when it got to the hotel room things seemed to go from 4 to 11 with her. It just felt a little forced there at the end there, as she went from "I want to be a mother figure to you" to "My husband is probably cheating on me, he cares more for his business then me.. well fine then, I had one good day with his kid so I'll fuck him and make him my man then!"
....
..
.
What?!
lol.

I just figured this section could of done with at least a little bit more time to breathe, especially since until then, Irene was MC's bitchy, cold, and emotionally withdrawn step-mom with nearly no interactions with MC. With the mom and sisters I can equate years of buildup to what we are seeing now, with Irene it just comes out of left field. And I've played your other games, they are stellar, I honestly wouldn't bother with this critique if I didn't already know you for being a good writer.

But those are my thoughts, feel free to use 'em or toss 'em as needed.

Ah, so you liked the previous updates, not this one. That's what was confusing lol.

But like I said, sometimes things move fast, yes, and a lot of people seemed to really like this update. Hopefully you'll like the content with her in the future.

But Coral and Leanne next up for now!

 

[phupdup]

Apologize in advance if someone has already brought this up, but Leanne really should be named Chris Craft. Either that lake is composed of jello that's been set and chilled, or else she's really a fiberglass boat with nothing but air on the inside.