VN Ren'Py Serenity [Ch. 2 v0.3] [N2TheFire]

[preskerd]

I'm kinda at the beginning of the game but please tell me there is sex scenes with Karen and MC! God damn she is so sexy, beatiful and cute and I would love to romance her. I mean it doesn't count as incest anyways does it? Her actual mom is dead and the book Karen is just a copy. I don't think Patreon will have a problem with that at all. I mean if it would be a problem then dev can just make a incest patch. Millions of other games do and they're still on patreon. Hell I would say most of the top games at patreon actually contains incest or fully incest themed games which offers players an incest patch from background. Hell some games which clearly a 100% incest themed, lets you decide the relations of the characters and mc and they are still on patreon perfectly safe. I don't think Patreon will kick N2TheFire over a copy character which is not MC's mother (since she is dead) or worst there can be a patch for it

 

[Frostic]

I'm kinda at the beginning of the game but please tell me there is sex scenes with Karen and MC! God damn she is so sexy, beatiful and cute and I would love to romance her. I mean it doesn't count as incest anyways does it? Her actual mom is dead and the book Karen is just a copy. I don't think Patreon will have a problem with that at all. I mean if it would be a problem then dev can just make a incest patch. Millions of other games do and they're still on patreon. Hell I would say most of the top games at patreon actually contains incest or fully incest themed games which offers players an incest patch from background. Hell some games which clearly a 100% incest themed, lets you decide the relations of the characters and mc and they are still on patreon perfectly safe. I don't think Patreon will kick N2TheFire over a copy character which is not MC's mother (since she is dead) or worst there can be a patch for it

I don't think that will happen. Cause even tho Karen might be a copy of her original self. The MC still sees her as his Mother and i think the Dev already said that there will be no Incest this VN.

 

[preskerd]

I don't think that will happen. Cause even tho Karen might be a copy of her original self. The MC still sees her as his Mother and i think the Dev already said that there will be no Incest this VN.

Oh man... Then why did he put such a sweet and sexy character in the game? I mean this a porn game in the end. Ofc most of the people would want to bang her. Especially if it's literally a HAREM game. After the first scene where MC ogle Karen's tits I was sure there will be something happen This is kinda cruel man. He teased us and leave it like that? I still think it can happen in the future via a patch (which most games uses) or some other way. I don't want to believe that we won't romance her. Maybe mc will create a women named Karen and looks exactly her but a different person. It would fit the game's story as well. Then everyone will be happy

 

[BoltonGuy35]

Noooooooooo!!!! Two of the hottest characters in this game and we won't be able to play abit of bump n grind with either of em? Oh well there is plenty of other girls to go around
Still tho would have been nice but hey ho...
First time played and look forward to the story progression.

 

[punisher2099]

Noooooooooo!!!! Two of the hottest characters in this game and we won't be able to play abit of bump n grind with either of em? Oh well there is plenty of other girls to go around
Still tho would have been nice but hey ho...
First time played and look forward to the story progression.

Its WVM all over again!

 

[tigerdiamond]

Ok so, not gonna lie, I almost teared up reading about the mom starting the book on the day she got sick, and the renders/character designs look pretty fantastic.

Unfortunately, I can tell this is going to be pretty story focus and possibly emotional, and I'm not in the right mental state to give your work the attention it'd disserve (The ADD been real bad lately, can't actually sit through more than a few lines at a time before I start skipping). So, I'm gonna put it on my wait list for now, but I think this'll be really good once I can sit still long enough to actually read it; lol.

 

[Valeck]

Thanks, N2TheFire great update.
After this update, I have to say I love all the girls but Fade become my favorite.
Her new form is beautiful .

 

[reznar]

Heck of an update. I really like that we get an actual familial relationship with the mom and sister instead of the usual incest harem approach that a lot of other authors go for. While it can be executed very well, I feel like it isn't always and we tend not to get this side of the coin.

Beyond that, it's a fun story and I'm looking forward to seeing all the problems get solved with MC's magic dick how it continues!

 

[Pervo]

You've done a really good job of dreaming up an immersive world with interesting characters so far author. I hope it continues developing as you foresaw it and the engagement from the community continues to rise. For a first project, it is very well written and one can see improvements as the time is going on, exhibiting improvement in your development process and skill.

I don't mind the decision to cut incest out one bit. Like you've said, there is plenty of that abound f95. If a wish could be considered and you are considering adding lesbian stuff, please please please make it optional/skippable. It may be some people's cup of tea but it would be very nice to avoid it.

All the best to you! Can't wait to see how it goes.

 

[N2TheFire]

Hey everyone, thanks for the kind words, glad you like it so far.
I've been made aware of a minor issue with the gallery (not a game breaker) but when you playback the last two scenes, they don't end automatically but instead keep going (rookie mistake... I left out the lines of code that are supposed to stop the replay). Also the image for Fade's scene isn't aligned properly on the image map... I'll address that as well. I've had one person say that the Fade scene didn't unlock in the gallery for them... it works fine on my play-through. I know that this can be attributed to the persistent files in renpy and not really something I can fix but I'm just curious if anyone else has that problem.

I may try doing a fix and release it separately in a zip file to let those who want to fix it now overwrite the old files. It would be a very small download and probably will host from my own web server so it is easy for everyone to download. Will update on that later. Just trying to find an opening between my regular job and other crap to get it done.

If a wish could be considered and you are considering adding lesbian stuff, please please please make it optional/skippable. It may be some people's cup of tea but it would be very nice to avoid it.

Thanks Pervo! Honestly, I didn't intend to put much "lesbian" stuff into Serenity... I have to do enough of that via the custom CG's for my Fade Crown tier LOL. Anyway, I will keep this request in mind, definitely. Because there are a few scenes later that were written in and I'd hate to change it too much. But it should be no problem to add a quick choice before hand that doesn't break you from the world too much.

Thanks, N2TheFire great update.
After this update, I have to say I love all the girls but Fade become my favorite.
Her new form is beautiful .

Haha! Funny thing... I think she has become my favorite also LOL. Can't wait to do some customs of her.

On another note, I had an idea to do a couple of customs for F95 only as a thank you to you guys because, quite frankly, most of our exposure comes from here. Anyway, be sure to follow this thread and watch for my posts for more on that soon.

 

[cavebear]

Mega link is in the previous page

https://f95zone.to/threads/serenity-v0-9-public-n2thefire.61604/post-5490191

thank you

 

[Pervo]

Thanks Pervo! Honestly, I didn't intend to put much "lesbian" stuff into Serenity... I have to do enough of that via the custom CG's for my Fade Crown tier LOL. Anyway, I will keep this request in mind, definitely. Because there are a few scenes later that were written in and I'd hate to change it too much. But it should be no problem to add a quick choice before hand that doesn't break you from the world too much.

Cheers mate. I'd hate to put extra/unnecessary burden at all on your development process nor try to put a cap on your creative thinking. Heck, I'm sure people with my thought process who dislike 'sharing' the main girls(even with other girls) probably won't mind the lesbian stuff if it doesn't involve the nekos. I'm unapologetically monopolizing the kittys in my playthrough .

Big props for taking the thoughts and feedback from this community on board.
Onwards to dream writing!

 

[tester1957]

N2TheFire another GREAT update, the way you immerse your audience in the story is truly remarkable and other DEVs should take a page from your book for writing. your artwork is top notch as well.

 

[preskerd]

N2TheFire I played the game and probably near at the end for this update. It's absolutely amazing that I couldn't believe that this your first game. Characters, romance, designs are really really good. But I have a minor criticism. I have to agree with the others about Camilla lesbian sex scene. Don't get me wrong. I don't mind girls in the harem having fun with each on rare occasions. If Camilla was the part of MC's harem, It wouldn't be a problem for me at all. But according to you, Camilla will never have a romantic relationship with mc and so she won't be part of the harem. Her having sex scenes with other girls kinda leaves a bad taste in the mouth. It's like saying 'See how Camilla fucks others? You want her to have fun with MC too? Nah you can't have that' Sorry but it's kinda 'IN YOUR FACE!' for people who wants mc to be with Camilla. If you plan to make more Camilla sex scenes with other girls , please at least make it avoidable ( not a skippable but avoidable. as it won't happen if we choose the option for it)

 

[Xill]

Thank you for letting those of us that like being called master do so, the last update made me a little nervous it would just be taken out completely, but the solution to pick what they call us is even better imo...

I agree. I like the idea of royal kind of harem where the girls aren't rebellious or things like that. But the MC not wanting to be called Master or Majesty is in conflict with that. I don't think I've played many games like that(harem), and the ones I have don't involve an actual harem even if the game is marketed as such.

A question though, that choice isn't in the game yet is it? I've played until the final version and I didn't get anything like that.

Anyway, I like how lovable all the girls are. Even Camilla, even though I feel that got resolved a bit too fast, but the other girls don't trust her so that feels natural atleast.

My favs have to be Sam, Rin's ascended form and I guess Cassie even though we only see just a bit of her. It's probably because I like fit girls, and those three are quite fit. Especially Sam, like, whoa... Those are some killer abs.

Edit: Oh and yes, the music is really nice.

 

[cryoxxx]

Great update bud. Must say again that the ending sequence was so beautifully done. Can't wait to see where you take us all!

 

[Spfjolietjake]

A question though, that choice isn't in the game yet is it? I've played until the final version and I didn't get anything like that.

I sadly haven't had the chance to play the newest update, so I have no idea if the dev made it a choice yet. N2TheFire was discussing it a page or two before my post I believe.

Sorry responding with a idk answer but I hate to ignore when some quotes a post. And I do hope that will still have the opportunity to be called Master if we so wish cheers

 

[Xill]

I sadly haven't had the chance to play the newest update, so I have no idea if the dev made it a choice yet. N2TheFire was discussing it a page or two before my post I believe.

Sorry responding with a idk answer but I hate to ignore when some quotes a post. And I do hope that will still have the opportunity to be called Master if we so wish cheers

Oh that's fine, no worries. I was asking in general anyway, I don't mind who answers.

 

[jhustrue]

Gave it a try and am very disappointed to find that this is a kinetic novel. A couple of choices at the beginning of the game are merely "Sex scene, Yes or no?" that have no bearing on the story and they're the last choices you make for over an hour. This needs the kinetic novel tag. Absolutely no choice you make in the game changes anything aside from seeing a sex scene or not, and most of them aren't optional.

This game is for WVM and MNF fans. If you don't like those two games, you won't like this one. Guaranteed.

 

[N2TheFire]

Gave it a try and am very disappointed to find that this is a kinetic novel. A couple of choices at the beginning of the game are merely "Sex scene, Yes or no?" that have no bearing on the story and they're the last choices you make for over an hour. This needs the kinetic novel tag. Absolutely no choice you make in the game changes anything aside from seeing a sex scene or not, and most of them aren't optional.

This game is for WVM and MNF fans. If you don't like those two games, you won't like this one. Guaranteed.

Sorry you were disappointed. I keep forgetting to ask them to add that tag when I post an update. I just PM'd someone. Hopefully they'll take care of it. Thanks for checking out Serenity anyway