VN Ren'Py Abandoned Sex Coach [v0.1] [Valkenfyre]

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Avaron1974

Avaron1974

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Normally when I read a review I expect some detail about the game, the pro's and the cons and some insight into what is going on......

And because there's a character limit, i'm going to hold down the period key for a few lines.................................................................................................................................
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This shit, isn't a review.

Character limit is there for a reason and utter tripe like this needs deleting.
 
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u z i

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the female character is so fucking hot! has the perfect curves in my opinion:love:
beautiful renders. the storyline is not too convincing but it doesn't really matter when you have hot babes XD
will definitely keep an eye on this.!
 
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valkenfyre

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The most common complaint about the game right now seems to be about wanting to reject Amber at the end, so I hope this makes up for that:
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It's a small patch (0.1a) and you can't remove Amber from the game with it, but I hope it's at least worth something.
 
Avaron1974

Avaron1974

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So, i've been reading the dialogue and i'm now looking at this guys job title.

Either he's very new or not very good at it.

Only a certain type of girl would tolerate being called a slut while cheating on her husband with a guy she's just met and they don't end in romance.

A lot of us love a bit of roleplay and dirty talk but that kind of thing aint a turn on when we don't know them.

I don't mean to be overly critical but it does read like a teenagers wet dream.

Personally, if I was to cheat on my girl and some tart was railing me like that with a strappy and she started calling me a slut we'd have 2 problems, the first would be me having to hop home and the other would be her trying to explain to the paramedics why she has a high heeled boot lodged firmly in her rectal passage.
 
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Goblin Baily: DILF

Goblin Baily: DILF

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Avaron1974 said:
So, i've been reading the dialogue and i'm now looking at this guys job title.

Either he's very new or not very good at it.

Only a certain type of girl would tolerate being called a slut while cheating on her husband with a guy she's just met and they don't end in romance.

A lot of us love a bit of roleplay and dirty talk but that kind of thing aint a turn on when we don't know them.

I don't mean to be overly critical but it does read like a teenagers wet dream.

Personally, if I was to cheat on my girl and some tart was railing me like that with a strappy and she started calling me a slut we'd have 2 problems, the first would be me having to hop home and the other would be her trying to explain to the paramedics why she has a high heeled boot lodged firmly in her rectal passage.
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#TEAMAVARON4LIFE
 
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valkenfyre

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Feb 1, 2019
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Avaron1974 said:
So, i've been reading the dialogue and i'm now looking at this guys job title.

Either he's very new or not very good at it.

Only a certain type of girl would tolerate being called a slut while cheating on her husband with a guy she's just met and they don't end in romance.

A lot of us love a bit of roleplay and dirty talk but that kind of thing aint a turn on when we don't know them.

I don't mean to be overly critical but it does read like a teenagers wet dream.

Personally, if I was to cheat on my girl and some tart was railing me like that with a strappy and she started calling me a slut we'd have 2 problems, the first would be me having to hop home and the other would be her trying to explain to the paramedics why she has a high heeled boot lodged firmly in her rectal passage.
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I get that. I added the occasional 'slut' nickname said by the male main character due to the Slut trait. I went back after adding that trait to alter some dialogue so that trait would have effect early on in the game. But I can certainly see what you mean. Hopefully it didn't ruin the experience for you

Maybe in the future I'll make it so that her nickname depends on what traits she has and which stats are high or something
 
ohhaiguize

ohhaiguize

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Wow what a great first version of a game! The best 0.1 I've played so far! I'll just list a few things I liked and didn't like.

First off great story and set up. I like the sexual therapist angle and the accident that get her to his house is funny and it works well. The story / sexual acts do seem to come a little too fast for me though, like it goes from her checking his dick out to fucking so quickly I was slightly let down. To me It would be more interesting to slightly slow down the build to sex. Would someone who is cheating for the first time be fine fucking like that so soon? Does he have to do barely no work at all to get her to cheat? I like that you set up how pent up her sexual urges are but it just seemed like you could have maybe had one more situation where she can barely control her urges and he see's this and pushes her more.

As far as the renders and models go I think they are top notch. The main girl has a great body, and so does the guy for that matter haha. I loved the look on her face when she is turned on or holding back sexual urges, like when she was checking his dick out, the slightly goofy exaggerated expression is really great.

Either way I'll be watching for version 2.0 and maybe even donating on patreon, solid work!!!
 
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btw..her chin is too pointy and narrow to be BSS..the art basically looks the same..but the chin dosnt fit..lol..its the one thing i always noticed about BSS games..the damn chin :p of course..dev's can change and alter style..so whadda i know...i enjoyed it..in the end thats all that really matters.
 
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valkenfyre said:
The most common complaint about the game right now seems to be about wanting to reject Amber at the end, so I hope this makes up for that:
You must be registered to see the links


It's a small patch (0.1a) and you can't remove Amber from the game with it, but I hope it's at least worth something.
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Updated
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version to v0.1a
 
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valkenfyre

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ThunderRob said:
btw..her chin is too pointy and narrow to be BSS..the art basically looks the same..but the chin dosnt fit..lol..its the one thing i always noticed about BSS games..the damn chin :p of course..dev's can change and alter style..so whadda i know...i enjoyed it..in the end thats all that really matters.
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In what way exactly is my style similar? I'm still trying to understand the situation here, but I'm only getting more confused. We both use 3DCG, but so do tons of other people
 
Avaron1974

Avaron1974

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ohhaiguize said:
Would someone who is cheating for the first time be fine fucking like that so soon?
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You're damn right they would.

Slow builds only happen in love stories, porn games aimed to milk patreons and extremely religious families.

You take a woman that has been neglected for years, sexually and emotionally starved and set the scene just right then she'll bounce on a phallus like it's a 1980's Space Hopper disco.

I don't know where some people here get this idea that we need weeks of romance and pampering to get in our panties. We aren't that different to men when it comes to sex, we love it too.
 
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