I like the premise, but the English could use some work. I've taken a stab at it myself. I've only playtested the harem route, because that's the one that matters to me, but I tried to help all of the routes along. Mostly just grammatical corrections and some light re-wording, but I did throw in two memes for fun. One major fix is that I added a way for the player to set the in19/n15 tag (which defines what Rose is to Maggie) as it didn't exist in the base game (version 0.3) and results in a couple dialogue issues. Dev/mods, if you'd rather not have this here I'll be happy to delete it; I mostly just did this for my own entertainment.