Lol, multiple versions in my download folder and never played it...until now.
After the blind date at home with ingrid: "i took out my phone..." while the cg shows the myfans site on the laptop.
Morning after the nighty pics: "i dried ourselves" should be "myself".
After the café, reading in bed, mom comes in and asks "what'd you do mary"...my protagonist has an other name, there should be a name-variable instead of a text-name. Again in the same scene "is it so bad that i want you to have sex mary?" The answer "mary's a prude" as well...better check the whole scene for written names and change them to variables ^^
The next scene as well, leyana at the club also calls me mary...ingrid too...again on the dancefloor, and remembering the long gone leyana the protagonist says "we need to find she", should be "her", not "she"
Hmm...the dildo choice earlier is kinda pointless if you still get fucked by a fake dick and then order a rubberdick yourself...at least ingrid crys the right name during her masturbation scene, still, i cant understand dickshaped sextoys during lesbian sex, i instant-dry-up from seeing one instead of getting in the mood...
Why does she flirt with that ugly nerd in the café while i am on the lesbian route?
Aside from this things its nice, i dont think future updates will pile up unplayed in my download folder again ^^