VN Ren'Py Abandoned Sin to Heaven [v0.4] [AG]

[Bryon Smothers]

I just can't with this game the intro and the way the family treats you right out of the gate also could you not find a doorbell there free ones all over the internet you can just import objs into daz.

 

[Sguru007]

Any info on next update?

 

[Liquid_Donut]

I feel like avoidable NTR is the perfect solution, right? People can pursue it if that's their thing or avoid it.

Why is it even an issue in the first place? These are INCEST games. The NTR shouldn't even matter at that point. Plus for many people (not me so much) that's part of the excitement.

 

[DA22]

Why is it even an issue in the first place? These are INCEST games. The NTR shouldn't even matter at that point. Plus for many people (not me so much) that's part of the excitement.

Uhm, why should NTR not matter when it is an incest game? You know I might be strange, but immersing in a story and have a character being abused and raped (Blackmail and such is exactly that) by an asshole NPC, that I identify with as a sister or mother for the purpose of the story and getting excited and fap to that to me feels way more bad and uncomfortable as having consensual sex with them even while it is incest. Admittedly I might be strange, but whatever consensual sex there is in a game, whether scat, BDSM, or whatever still feels better as non consensual (whether the women or males are supposed to like that or not).

That I am not too much of a fan of NPC's having sex without MC there is another thing (means certain games are not for me), just really did not get where you wanted to go with your remark.

 

[harsha_26]

Why is it even an issue in the first place? These are INCEST games. The NTR shouldn't even matter at that point. Plus for many people (not me so much) that's part of the excitement.

Excitement? How? Adult games are not third person porn (unless u think it is). These adult games are all about immersion to many people in f95.

For example, look at the famous incest game Big Brother. There is NTR in it in the form of "eric". Many hated that guy & the most asked question in the game thread is "how to get rid of eric". (yes, we can get rid of him by doing a mission).

 

[Mario4don]

Where is incest in this game ? I installed incest patch but MC still calls milf as landlady so I'm confused.

 

[Mario4don]

Where is incest in this game ? I installed incest patch but MC still calls milf as landlady so I'm confused.

OK i find solution, I see that this game is a little mess with files because incest patch is a "script.rpyc" but in game folder we have also "script.rpy" so i deleted "script.rpy" and now incest works fine.

What can I say about the game itself? Well it contains incest that I like and that's probably the only plus for now because unfortunately for me the game is a total failure right from the beginning.

The story for me makes no sense at all.
The MC comes back after many years from boarding school and the family already at the very beginning completely ignores him, the mother who was excited that in the end she will see her son after many years suddenly leaves for a week without even informing him on the phone about it and the MC finds out about it only when he knocks on the door of the house and nobody greets him.
In addition MC is sent for a week to an aunt with whom the MC does not really want to live.
Why didn't mom inform him earlier that she is leaving and why didn't she leave him the keys to the house? He has been living in a boarding school for many years and suddenly he cannot stay home alone for a week ? Really where is the logic and sense in this?
It is not enough that the family has him in the ass after so many years and nobody greets him in his family house but they send him to the aunt who he would prefer to avoid.
So for me this whole story is completely no sense and is simply ridiculous.

 

[dartred]

so from what i'm reading. this game is a skip?

 

[Honey hunters]

Unofficial android port with incest patch
Sin to Heaven [v0.2b] [AG]
updated: 20-12-2020

Mega

 

[sigalchris]

This game has been pretty much rewritten at this point with a whole new writer (me). Give it another shot and please keep feedback constructive.

 

[Shagrynn]

Alright, imma give it another shot, the models are hot, and the change logs look like a lot of work was done.

 

[Mikey Mike]

I see potential here and would consider donating if the dev stays true to what he's reporting on his Patreon page: "Okay, this is a very high goal. But I'm already working full time on the game and trying to do best i can."

I would suggest the dev find someone to help him with the story aspect, so the story is both interesting and believable. The MC doesn't have a key to his own house and/or one placed strategically nearby?! The story really needs to be rewritten from the beginning and reintroduced. I'm not really digging the face tattoo on the aunt, and think it's a bit excessive. Why's the aunt like a dozen shades darker than the mom?

 

[Shagrynn]

It Is much better, still kinda retarded that they left the son they haven't seen for 4 years to go to a week-long beauty pageant. Suppose if Cissy is an especially spoiled child that could explain some of that. Other than that do not ever end an update right before a sex scene. Frustration is not an emotion you want resurfacing the next time an update comes out. And also yeah, what the guy said why is the aunt straight up black some scenes and tanned others, did her mom let a mood ring creampie her?

 

[Ara-sH]

How much content? how many renderes? worth to play ?

 

[Oh my]

Shota.

No options.

 

[eddie987]

I'm sorry, I'm not trying to be a dick here, but the story still makes zero sense.

The mother is a loving, caring, altruistic woman who only thinks about the welfare of others... except for her son's. She cares so much, she couldn't stay behind for a few hours until he arrived or at least make her husband do that while she's on her way to their daughter and then go together and meet his sister. And of course he still can't stay at his house or go to them, because... She said so! Sooo loving and caring!

And let's just say the MC is a dumb simp thinking she's the perfect woman, while in reality she doesn't really give a shit about him (and no, saying how much she missed him means absolutely nothing, if she ends up leaving for a whole week, the day she was supposed to see him again after four years, without even letting him go to her) and move on with the rest of the story.

When the MC arrives home, we see her saying (on the phone) she couldn't call him earlier, because she didn't have signal on her phone... Then how did she manage to call his cousin to pick him up? It's clearly stated that the drive from the MC's place to his aunt's took a few hours and he showed up right after the MC got off the phone with his mother, so it's not like she managed to reach him a few minutes before the MC, but at least a few hours.

Once again, let's say that his cousin happened to be somewhere close to his house because... I don't know, "reasons" and got there so quickly.

Then we have the bunk bed issue... The cousin says his mom bought it for them, and then he says how he fell from the upper bed the previous night... So, she knew the MC would stay there a whole day before? She clearly doesn't want him there so this can't be another happy coincidence where she happened to go out of her way and buy a new bed for him "just in case" at the right time.

Then we have the MC perving on the psycho aunt and that's when I got bored and stopped playing. I didn't expect any miracles after the rewrite, but I honestly don't see any point checking out the new content, if the whole intro still has more holes than a colander.

I'm sorry if I'm being too harsh on my criticism, I'm just being honest.

 

[EZ8lt]

This game has been pretty much rewritten at this point with a whole new writer (me). Give it another shot and please keep feedback constructive.

I just did. Maybe your influence will do good on it later, but you only squashed out a few minor problems. Changing it to boarding school, having a 4 year education was the right move, but the biggest problems still existent within the game. The conversation with the "mom" goes exactly the same as it did in the previous version, which was stupid, and very badly written. The whole thing lacked any kind of logic behind it, and it's still not justified. The situation, the explanation, how the conversation goes down between the MC and her is pretty much the same, and there's no improvement on it, neither on the fact that he wasn't at home for 4 years. Even if you're in a boarding school, unless you have a reason not to go home, you'll visit at least on the holidays. One of the biggest problems from the very first version was how that scene played out, and the background that basically destroyed any positive image of the main character and the family members. That issue, wasn't addressed at all. Neither how the "aunt" is portrayed, so does the situation where the MC gives her the towel. He already has a shit reputation but then risks it even more by impersonating her son. After an introduction like that, her jerking him off and starting to lust after him and having a 180 turn in personality is anything but plausible.

 

[JanisL]

I totally agree with mario4don, eddie987, TL8ez.
As for me, if our guy doesn't get along with his aunt, why the fuck is he drooling over that old tattooed cow? what's so sexy about her? sagging udder? Personally, I'm disgusted with her. Yeah, and I'd tell my mother to fuck off and go to the hotel myself.

Even if my aunt was the last woman on earth, I wouldn't fuck her.

And how did our hero graduate from college?
He's not right in the head. It's a diagnosis. i don't want to go to my aunt, i have a misunderstanding with her, and as soon as i saw a piece of naked ass, i want her... The boy has sperm toxicity? He had never seen a live pussy in College? Never fucked? Virgin?

Aunt, a woman has not been fucked for 5 years. What a shame, okay, her husband died (probably fucked up). And then she saw her nephew's penis and she immediately started flowing. (poor guy - you'll have to fuck the whole village, and a gorgeous funeral is waiting for you soon)
Oh, here it is necessary to enter NTR on the contrary, MK should not fuck everyone! He should be able to send all the women to hell and manfully jerk off to porn.
In general, why not give the opportunity to skip the towel at the very beginning? Just yell at my aunt that her son is fucking up somewhere? In a dream, do not dream of an aunt, just skip it. In the morning I got up without jerking off my aunt. I just worked for a neighbor, to answer her harassment " i'm sorry, i'm not interested in old women."
Or is it planned as a harem? Drink everything that burns and fuck everything that moves?

At least from the porn games are expected mainly characters fucking like rabbits. But! Author, there must be logic! Not a bunch of letters.

 

[acondo]

How much content? how many renderes? worth to play ?

I would say no, not at all. Technically this game has been in development for 8 months already and has little to show for all that time, like, were talking of about 15 min of 20 min of content, maybe less if you read faster.

 

[KeiNineX]

I don't think this rewrite helped at all tbh.

Ok so now he's been at boarding school which makes a bit more sense I guess but just because you go to boarding school, it doesnt mean you're detached from the world and you have to be there 24/7 for 4 years straight and can't go visit your parents so that still doesn't make sense to me.

That whole "Caring" mother situation when she leaves you alone the day you arrive, she still comes off like she doesn't give a fuck about MC and the MCs reaction to this whole thing is probably even worse than the thing itself.

Then that whole "lusting over" your aunt situation (Why does she have to have a face tattoo??? It looks ridiculous.) and then out of nowhere she wants to fuck you now or something? It's just weird.

So yeah... I don't think this achieved anything imo.