VN Ren'Py Abandoned Sinister Chronicle [v0.2] [Flylupus]

eddie987

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If I put a warning and put a skipable option would you be up to play it again?
Not really. I've already seen it, so I'll still know exactly what and how it's happening. It might help with new players though, I don't know. Don't worry too much about it. You can't please everyone. Just tell the story you want to tell. Some people will like it, some won't.
 

flylupus1980

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Not really. I've already seen it, so I'll still know exactly what and how it's happening. It might help with new players though, I don't know. Don't worry too much about it. You can't please everyone. Just tell the story you want to tell. Some people will like it, some won't.
Well I'm working on a skipable option with a warning, will be in a Fix update
 
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ArturiousDesign

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english isn't my mother language, i'll try to correct everything I can
get yourself an editor. you can find them in the help wanted section of f95

you need to resize this character's hair size. You probably need to go back and recheck all your renders kuz i'm sure there are more

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another graphical issue. what is wrong with this guy's neck? and why is the other one not wearing shoes? also his toe is poking through his shoes.

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flylupus1980

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you need to resize this character's hair size. You probably need to go back and recheck all your renders kuz i'm sure there are more

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On it already.

another graphical issue. what is wrong with this guy's neck? and why is the other one not wearing shoes? also his toe is poking through his shoes.

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It'll correct that one as soon as I can

get yourself an editor. you can find them in the help wanted section of f95
Moderate your tone, i'm not your fucking dog. Be polite, indulge me on that : It's Like my first VN, My very first post here and I wrote already like 400 pages in Word in a language you don't usualy speak everyday. I dare you to do the same in French or Spanish or Italian without a single Non sens or Mistake!

For your information: I posted a Prologue of a Story I'm working on for 18 month. It prologue is an Alpha. I'm aware, I need improvement.

If you don't moderate your tone, all you will win, is me ignorate any remarks you'll do at good as they can be.
 
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bigbossbravo6

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"Be aware, that my Main Character is Pansexual. He will sleep with not only girls but with men and trans as well." so is this a kinetic novel?
 

Grimtown

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it is a kinetic novel yes
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[Kinetic novel]: Used when a a visual novel style game presents the player with no choices.
No choices? Didn't you say certain content will be optional? Or will there be a checklist at the beginning to check/uncheck what you want to see in the game?
 

flylupus1980

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[Kinetic novel]: Used when a a visual novel style game presents the player with no choices.
No choices? Didn't you say certain content will be optional? Or will there be a checklist at the beginning to check/uncheck what you want to see in the game?
Well, Choice you can make will be to see or not a scene. like the rape there before. but what ever you choose, the novel will go on, and the action you skip would have happened anyway. you just choose to close your eyes on it.

You can't choose to not have sex with someone. you just decide to not watch it.

isn't a Kinetic Novel mean VN that doesn't have impact choices / no choices at all ?
 
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Grimtown

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you just choose to close your eyes on it.

You can't choose to not have sex with someone. you just decide to not watch it.
Yup, that sounds kinetic.

isn't a Kinetic Novel mean VN that doesn't have impact choices / no choices at all ?
Usually yes. I was quoting f95's definition of the tag.

But since I don't do kinetic novels, this is where I leave.
Good luck to you and the project, I hope it inspires more bi-/pansexual male MCs in the future. (y)
 

Jack Dangers

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english isn't my mother language, i'll try to correct everything I can
Your premise is interesting, flylupus1980. If English isn’t your native language, perhaps you could consider hiring a translator to help you? Lots of folks on this site offer such services at reasonable prices. If you wish your game to gain mass appeal, I think that would be an excellent step to take.

Good luck with your game!
 

flylupus1980

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Your premise is interesting, flylupus1980. If English isn’t your native language, perhaps you could consider hiring a translator to help you? Lots of folks on this site offer such services at reasonable prices. If you wish your game to gain mass appeal, I think that would be an excellent step to take.

Good luck with your game!
Thanks for the comment, I didn't feel I was that bad in english until now. You can't really evaluate your self until you confront yourself to a blunt reality
 
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flylupus1980

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Hello, for those who don't want to wait, I repack the game (request F95Zone => here )


 

libertypics

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Well I'm working on a skipable option with a warning, will be in a Fix update
Thanks for taking the make it skipable approach not knee jerk remove it as so many devs do under pressure. While I get some people want certain scenes kept network TV at worst some of us are okay with pay TV levels of graphic. I want Game of Thrones* or The Boys, not Hercules the Legendary Journeys or The Flash. Thanks for allowing both sides to get it their way, not just knee jerk watering down a villain/scene the second someone complained.
*Earlier seasons obvously. :LOL:
 

Hellkinglucifer

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Having an option to just skip the rape will not help your game because the people who would want to skip are the one who don't want that kind of scene at all in their games. Adding skip will not matter to them because the scene still happens regardless. Either keep the scene or remove it are the options you realistically have depending on what route you want to take with your game.
 

flylupus1980

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the Skipable option is just to help sensitive people to go throught the "scene". I can't understand people don't like that. but like everything in this story, you can choose to skip it but doesn't mean it isn't happining. I prefer this options. it's a Kinetic novel. not a multi-ending novel (too much work for me)
 

creedgeezer

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Its great but when the rape scene happened....Well it crumbled it all(for me).......................

Will mcs sister(one of the twin) be a member to the future harem??.....

Well if she....Theres a scene when mc rescue her right??? Then she is on bed.....then she got fxck well it means mc got ntrd right??cuz the dick of the rapist is inside........ Well dame my eyes.....
Well if she is one of the girls Hoping that scene will change or has a patch to remove for people(like me) who don't really like to be ntrd...... And if it can't be help(to change )/ISPOILER]
Well wish you luck and I'll be dropping this
 
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