Even though I agree with you, your render seems off here. She does not look like Astrid enough to stare at her HOURS.But let's be honest, does someone really care about time when watching her? I don't believe it
I'll stare at you for HOURS.
Going through the rework again just reminded me how much I love her character.But let's be honest, does someone really care about time when watching her? I don't believe it
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When you put it that way, it became interesting but I could not find any interest in neither Sonja nor Candrid which makes BB path only Yrsa for me. On the other hand, I found all the WW girls hot and interesting and hot and intriguing, did I say hot? Especially Astrid's book path, how people looks down on her simply because she is into books. How she learned English just by using 2 books she had. How oppressed she is just because she is a woman and have some non mainstream interests. Also Astrja's dilemma about what she wants from life and what's expected from her. Also also, Mathilda is not that bad.
I mostly am agreeing with this but Milka's story is too funny to skip.
Just a guess but depending on how the Thorsten cliffhanger pans out, we might just dragged into that role on all paths anyway.
Am I the only one that thinks attack on Ragnar and possible attack on Torstein related alter ego of Nox. When Liz said you ordered Katja to go with raiding party to the Nox she was shocked. Can Nox be under control of a god/goddess like someone from the sandstorm?
The Ragnar 'accident' could also been Candrid acting her sneaky self, and for all we know of yet, T-wolf might just have had a stroke or whatever.
As I see it, if what I assumed was correct Nox's alter ego took over her, assassinated Ragnar put it on another village which she knew they would attack then ordered Katja and other Raven's to kill the Jarl while others were busy with raiding and finally she pulled something on Torstein. If so, Nox knows nothing about it. Like I said I maybe reading too much into it. Maybe MC lied about the order to Liz and there was no alter ego after all.The Ragnar 'accident' could also been Candrid acting her sneaky self, and for all we know of yet, T-wolf might just have had a stroke or whatever.
Which admittedly would not prove Nox as innocent persay
Also wondering just who killed the Jarl. Candrid would be a possibility there too, but a lot of the whole mess could also been caused by some threat outside the village.
Thorsten business partners might be making a power-play or the christianized King wants their 'rogue' status gone.
Assuming the possession, that could mean she's really not aware of actions done when whatever rides her is in control.
Downfall of communism, again.Assuming the possession, that *could* mean she's really not aware of actions done when whatever rides her is in control.
But as an argument against her being unknowingly controlled:
She seems clearly aware from where MC has arrived now.
Also damn: Things could get somewhat nasty in the Raven Lair if she is only certain that the MC kid will be some ChosenOne™ but she can't be sure if that refers to *her* kid with him or any other child we might father.
Wow talk about going above and beyond the call of duty! Thanks for adjusting it and even taking the time to review your whole script. For me the story definitely feels strong and engaging, can't wait to see it progress. Also I'm really sorry I was definitely looking at the girls!! It's just that the story was so engaging that's why I noticed it xDI forgot I wrote that, lol.
I've adjusted it, the MC will now wait for her when the sun is at the northeast section of the daymark. Good luck to him.
I made a search on the words minutes/hours in the rest of the script just for safety measure, and the other misuses were mostly during astrid/mathilda's carpenter event. Seems like I forgot the context at the time I wrote that event.
The remaining times, it was used in MC thoughts or from narrative, so nothing wrong there.
Anyway, I wish this was the only thing wrong with the historical context... ^^'
Many things don't exactly fit: the language, the clothes, the cleanliness...
Often by choice or by constraint, it's an AVN after all.
That said, time measurement is an easy thing to adjust, without harming the attractiveness of the game, so I'll pay more attention about that next time. Thanks for the remark.
But let's be honest, does someone really care about time when watching her? I don't believe it
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Don't choose that option, choose the one for protecting her with the shield, it will give you the DEX option
I think there is a dex(?) check for shielding her if you picked another version of supporting her, instead of passing her prepped arrows.
You need to anticipate the path and think quick for that, closer to int stat. You can cover her with your shield then you can use your dex skill.
Kindness will be my downfallEven though I agree with you, your render seems off here. She does not look like Astrid enough to stare at her HOURS.
