VN Ren'Py Completed Something to Write About: The Author [Ch. 7.1] [STWAdev]

[HornyyPussy]

This is my literal nightmare. But honestly I really think the next game will do it for you. It has similar themes, but I really like the characters, and I have a greater support system now, there are quite a few fellow devs who are taking time to help me make this the best I can.

As for age.

Chris 27-28
MC 26-27
Kim 26
Dru 25
B 23
Aoife and Lyn 22

Well, i was fairly close

While we have you here Boss i just wanted to say thank you for one of the best VN's i've ever played! REALLY looking forward to the next part!!

And to put and end to further discussions....Aoife&Lyndie are THE best girls ever, period!!!

 

[underoath27]

Yep.

During B's ending she will ask if you want to have sex with Lyndie or not. If you agree to it you will get her cuck ending where she gets off watching you fuck Lyndie and Aoife until all 3 of them are in a relationship with him.

If you pick no it goes to B's normal ending.

Nice. Thanks!

 

[cxx]

good update and all endings were so well written that picking favorite wasn't possible, others seemed to get preggo except aoifie.

 

[BGRW2020]

Certainly, he doesn't have to post a new chapter yet, even a title card for the game would be nifty as we could talk about it.




The MC is African American? I thought he was simply dark skinned, like a latino.

I thought so at first but look at his hair, most Latino men have hair very similar to a caucasin

 

[MisterDan]

This is my literal nightmare. But honestly I really think the next game will do it for you. It has similar themes, but I really like the characters, and I have a greater support system now, there are quite a few fellow devs who are taking time to help me make this the best I can.

Whatever you come up with next I have one request, make the eyes look better. It is a pet peeve of mine but I hate it that for a lot of VN's the eyes look dead or they look like they smoked too much weed (too large pupils). Kim is a good example of this.

I'll definitely will read your next VN so feel free to ignore me but, it would make me very happy .

 

[Maviarab]

Whatever you come up with next I have one request, make the eyes look better. It is a pet peeve of mine but I hate it that for a lot of VN's the eyes look dead or they look like they smoked too much weed (too large pupils). Kim is a good example of this.

I'll definitely will read your next VN so feel free to ignore me but, it would make me very happy .

There are reasons for this with many devs if you understand Daz and Iray.

 

[HornyyPussy]

There are reasons for this with many devs if you understand Daz and Iray.

I don't.....

 

[MisterDan]

I don't.....

My guestimate is that the time you have to spend on making it work is not worth it (especially if it is the first VN you make). Or you have to pay for it and most devs just don't want to spend the money (yet). Going a bit off-topic so I'll leave it on this note.

 

[HornyyPussy]

My guestimate is that the time you have to spend on making it work is not worth it (especially if it is the first VN you make). Or you have to pay for it and most devs just don't want to spend the money (yet). Going a bit off-topic so I'll leave it on this note.

That sounds probable!

....but really, i was mostly stalking Mavi

 

[Maviarab]

Any chance we could rename the female NPCs? Not a clue how to pronounce that name Aoife?

IIRC, she does actually tell you....

 

[Avaron1974]

Any chance we could rename the female NPCs? Not a clue how to pronounce that name Aoife?

Eefa

But no, you can't change them.

 

[J1215]

I like Aoife!

 

[Walter Victor]

Any chance we could rename the female NPCs? Not a clue how to pronounce that name Aoife?

It can be done, but you would have to go into script.rpy and change the define and everyplace the name appears in the text. I guess a mass replace would work. It's only the one file.

 

[HornyyPussy]

I like Aoife!

that's like saying water is wet....

 

[automatica]

Any chance we could rename the female NPCs? Not a clue how to pronounce that name Aoife?

EE-fe.

She does mention it at one point early on.

 

[alex34389]

That was one of the best experience from all games. Not gonna type half a page of text, but I guess this is "type of games", that I really adore. STWAdev dunno what next game will be like, but all thumbs up for this one!

 

[HornyyPussy]

That was one of the best experience from all games. Not gonna type half a page of text, but I guess this is "type of games", that I really adore. STWAdev dunno what next game will be like, but all thumbs up for this one!

If you haven't heard, it's gonna be part 2 of this story with a different MC

 

[Avaron1974]

That was one of the best experience from all games. Not gonna type half a page of text, but I guess this is "type of games", that I really adore. STWAdev dunno what next game will be like, but all thumbs up for this one!

Altogether there are 3 planned stories with different MC's.

One of them is the guy this MC was talking to in one of the scenes. One of the friends of him and Chris. Don't know if the 3rd MC will be the 3rd friend but it's likely.

 

[Draon79]

STWAdev First off kudos on a great story and excellent endings. Things i wish had made it into this would have to be a confrontation with the ex Marie for some closure, more to the B cuck queen route as that is fairly rare in VNs, more to the No One ending or just more Hannah period as that was such a major teaser to end on and would have loved just a story line involving her in it. All in all Thank you for the great story!

 

[HornyyPussy]

Altogether there are 3 planned stories with different MC's.

One of them is the guy this MC was talking to in one of the scenes. One of the friends of him and Chris. Don't know if the 3rd MC will be the 3rd friend but it's likely.

wasn't aoife's aunt supposed to be the lead in one of them or is that my senility again?