I absolutely loved it, fabulous! Great characters, strong plot and I hated it to end. LOVE IT!
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- May 17, 2020
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You're right... I meant children's quarrels precisely because of their characteristic of switching off suddenly.
anyway I went on and with cristine's ending I have to say that a few pieces fall into place, at least the two of them realize the time they lost
instead the ending with Dru is not bad, it's the one with more sex which is never a defect, but it's probably the one I liked the least so far
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- Mar 23, 2020
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I'm a bit disappointed... we only had 2 chapters to spend with Dru... that's not even an apetizer..
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So I finally had the time to go through all the endings. Took me a bit to figure out why I wasn't offered the B or Kim endings, but I got there in the end. So, just for myself personally, here are the endings ranked:
End of the day, I want to once again thank STWAdev for such a wonderful story, well written characters (You made it SO impossible to choose) and yes, even thanks for the emotional rollercoaster you put me through. Only one other VN has had me feel so much emotion than this one so far, and that's saying something. I look forward to the next 'Something to Write About' as I am sure you will once again 'knock it out of the park'... so to speak.
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End of the day, I want to once again thank STWAdev for such a wonderful story, well written characters (You made it SO impossible to choose) and yes, even thanks for the emotional rollercoaster you put me through. Only one other VN has had me feel so much emotion than this one so far, and that's saying something. I look forward to the next 'Something to Write About' as I am sure you will once again 'knock it out of the park'... so to speak.
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- Sep 26, 2019
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I loved this vn... until the end. Tbh I only played 2 endings. Dru and throuple. Drus was good but the throuple's is sooo lacking. Especially that ends with out a reaction to the only good thing in the ending.
Such a great vn with a disappointing ending. Hope your next ones are more fulfilling.
Such a great vn with a disappointing ending. Hope your next ones are more fulfilling.
- Oct 10, 2017
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Man this game was good, surprisingly good
I didn't knew about this game until some good lad mentioned the game and oh boy i wasn't dissapointed.
I really liked the story so much the renders are good too not perfect but good, the game strength isn't the sex scenes im not saying they are bad or anything but the story is the main dish the h scenes are a plus.
Now im surprised to be saying this but my fav girl was definitely Kimberly and that sucks because her ending was probably the most bittersweet or less happy zero romance (im a sucker for this) i feel like they went from sex friends to friends to sex friends again, no real relationship, so unfair and i know she's not ready for relationships yet but man that suck so much lmao.
Following the previous point i think some endings if not all need some epilogue or something, i was surprised there wasn't anything like that, the most obvious case is the K ending, another one could be Dru ending we didn't spend enough time with her, but yeah some epilogues are needed IMO i don't know how other players feel but it would be fucking awesome.
But taking away that bittersweet ending with my favorite girl, i think my favorite ending is with Beatrix which took me by surprise but that ending with the pregnancy ( i love this) and the words with her dad was so sweet.
But overall great game man, such a shame i didn't find out about this game sooner but im gonna be following you from now on, maybe support you in my next rotation of people i support.
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Kimberly and mc deserved a more happy ending thats the only thing i didn't liked
I didn't knew about this game until some good lad mentioned the game and oh boy i wasn't dissapointed.
I really liked the story so much the renders are good too not perfect but good, the game strength isn't the sex scenes im not saying they are bad or anything but the story is the main dish the h scenes are a plus.
Now im surprised to be saying this but my fav girl was definitely Kimberly and that sucks because her ending was probably the most bittersweet or less happy zero romance (im a sucker for this) i feel like they went from sex friends to friends to sex friends again, no real relationship, so unfair and i know she's not ready for relationships yet but man that suck so much lmao.
Following the previous point i think some endings if not all need some epilogue or something, i was surprised there wasn't anything like that, the most obvious case is the K ending, another one could be Dru ending we didn't spend enough time with her, but yeah some epilogues are needed IMO i don't know how other players feel but it would be fucking awesome.
But taking away that bittersweet ending with my favorite girl, i think my favorite ending is with Beatrix which took me by surprise but that ending with the pregnancy ( i love this) and the words with her dad was so sweet.
But overall great game man, such a shame i didn't find out about this game sooner but im gonna be following you from now on, maybe support you in my next rotation of people i support.
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Kimberly and mc deserved a more happy ending thats the only thing i didn't liked
There are a bunch more endings waiting for you to find. So if you found an affinity to any of the girls other than Dru you might be pleased with the outcome.
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Thanks, I'll eventually check out the other endings. The throuple was just my number 1 so it just was kind of a let down.
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Never have I ever met a character that I was not supposed to hate that I have soured to so fast as Beatrix. Actually, her initial introduction and attitude affected me so much that I restarted and rejected Kimberly just because I realize how close those two would be throughout the rest of the story. My reaction did not come from having a negative opinion of lesbians nor sharing love interests, I simply cannot stand a character that would openly exclaim that they are leaving to have sex. There are nicer ways to tell people your intentions and yes I know that I am applying real-world logic to a porn game. If that concept is strange then hi, I'm Ace nice to meet you.
But seriously, I can tell that there is going to be some good story here but Jesus, will she and Kimberly ever lay off? Yeah yeah porn logic, but I see no way in actual hell that the MC would put up with Kimberly's antics and I hope that I eventually get to tell her to stop.
I am laughing at the realization of how often I say this next sentence but if the dev reads my comment, do not take this as a negative mark against your writing. You wrote a story and it caused a reaction and a strong one at that, that is not easy. So I'm off to see what the other chapters of this are on about, here is hoping for good things.
But seriously, I can tell that there is going to be some good story here but Jesus, will she and Kimberly ever lay off? Yeah yeah porn logic, but I see no way in actual hell that the MC would put up with Kimberly's antics and I hope that I eventually get to tell her to stop.
I am laughing at the realization of how often I say this next sentence but if the dev reads my comment, do not take this as a negative mark against your writing. You wrote a story and it caused a reaction and a strong one at that, that is not easy. So I'm off to see what the other chapters of this are on about, here is hoping for good things.
- May 17, 2020
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Now all I need is the solo finale... how do I get there?
I have to say that Kmberly's, especially as it relates to what I consider the most interesting character, is a very disappointing ending, it adds practically nothing to his story.
while, for example, Christine and Beatrix's, who as characters I didn't particularly like, add a lot to the story, they complete the story.
I always struggle to make rankings let's say that Lyndie is my favorite girl, while I can't decide if the best ending is the trouple or Aofie's one
I have to say that Kmberly's, especially as it relates to what I consider the most interesting character, is a very disappointing ending, it adds practically nothing to his story.
while, for example, Christine and Beatrix's, who as characters I didn't particularly like, add a lot to the story, they complete the story.
I always struggle to make rankings let's say that Lyndie is my favorite girl, while I can't decide if the best ending is the trouple or Aofie's one
- May 23, 2020
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Thank you for the great vn. I really enjoyed it and I think it was really good.
Always is nice to read a completed western VN, and when it's so good as this one, you can only say thanks to the author. I have stopped by the author's patreon to also show my support in a more direct way.
Thanks again and hope to read something else in the future.
EDIT: Ah, I forgot, just a question. Somebody knows what happened with Marie? I thought that she was going to make an appearance at some point but at the end...
Always is nice to read a completed western VN, and when it's so good as this one, you can only say thanks to the author. I have stopped by the author's patreon to also show my support in a more direct way.
Thanks again and hope to read something else in the future.
EDIT: Ah, I forgot, just a question. Somebody knows what happened with Marie? I thought that she was going to make an appearance at some point but at the end...
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Believe it was said that there was no point to her return. She left the MC high and dry and made no attempts to contact him after his injury so that relationship was left in the past. Just something the MC has to work through throughout the story, but never see her return.
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She was mentioned but there was no point in a confrontation.
She didn't care when the MC nearly died so he wouldn't get anything out of seeing her. She isn't guilty about what she did, didn't visit him when he nearly died and she'd been cheating on him for a while.
She moved on.
In situations like that the person that suffered want an apology and want the person that hurt them to be sorry, she isn't and see's no reason to apologise.
A confrontation with her would have just hurt him more and he wouldn't gain anything.
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from the point of view of Mc's motivations you are right, it does not make sense for him to want to meet her.
but from a narrative point of view, after the friend warns Mc that she's coming to LA, after the flashback that shows her to us (which means that the character has been created), I think it was normal to expect to see her, and it almost seems like there was a change or a rush to close the story
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As I understood it, Marie was one of three potential late additions to the cast. The others being Dru and Lyndie's sister (Heather?) STWAdev had a poll on Patreon and ultimately selected Dru as the new character to join the story. So yes, he had set the stage to possibly introduce Marie but ultimately did not.