So, Talothral. I really enjoyed playing Sorcerer. It was a surprisingly detailed and interesting story. So great job completing it, congratulations. I know making a game of this size is a lot of work, magnitudes more than most people realize.
I had a blast meeting such a variety of characters. As with any game with so many characters, I probably would have liked getting a little more in depth in the story with some of them (Mei, at least one of the Gorgons, the witch), but that is just me.
My only suggestion for your next game is modify the way that you do the sex scenes. Sorcerer does them a little differently than most Renpy games, where you can't spacebar back and forth through them easily. Is it some sort of Renpy loop mode? Making them a sequence of images, even if the images themselves are repeated, would be a better experience for the user, so you can go forward and back as you prefer.
Also, while you do generally have some dialog at the end of the scene, having dialog in the middle of the scene makes it more natural and meaningful. I am not talking about the same cliched dialog we always see, but something unique to the character to make it more interesting. Otherwise, it tends to be kind of mechanical, at least for me. Just a handful of lines, that the character would be likely to say, in the middle of the scene, would go a long way.
I look forward to more Terminus Reach, and whatever you work on next.