VN - Ren'Py - Completed - Sorcerer [v1.0.0] [Talothral]

Version 1.0

Story 4/5: There were some moments I could guess the outcome still it was a great story.
Tags 5/5: well it had all the tags I hoped/wished to be in a game so
Visuals 4.5/5: The scenes were well placed only issue I could think of was same positions was used for most characters but that's all I could think of.
Sound 0/5: wish it had music or moaning. hope we get someone to add sound to this game.
Overall 4-4.5/5: honestly if you can ignore the absence of sound the game is solid 4.5 I will only give 4 just because the sound otherwise 4.5 out of 5 is what I consider fair.

Awsome, extraordinary, mindblowing games..I love this kind of games harem ending, breeding, pregnancy, romance everything has in this game looking forward to next game like this..and many love for developor..love from android player who also make this game available in android

Weirdly, in this game, what i like the most is the setting. There is at first a clear vibe from doctor strange (the main character, the powers) but then there is a plot with classical element, but refreshingly played.

Curiously what i do not very much have interest in is the sex and girls. For the girls, there is almost only one girl you would find in other AVN, and many are "setting dependant" (monsters, superhuman-like), but I personaly do not very much like their design, exception made for Susan, the war vet but she has very few scenes for what I already have seen.

The sex scenes are of the boring kind: simple scenes, no text, quick action (missionary/doggy/occasional blowjob). For the sex part, it's a bit boring.

There is some harem in the setting, but again, nothing really exciting.

No music/sound is a classical error of AVN but take what you have.

Some errors with the visuals (feet in the ground in some scenes...) but nothing really serious.

So all in all, a solid 3 but for different reasons than many other games, which is confusing.

Finally a game with a satisfying ending. It's sad that it's so rare to have an adult VN with a good ending (or any ending at all, given how often games get abandoned). That alone makes it worth your time.

Enjoyed the story I am bit sad that it has come to an end, the renders are of a good quality and the game play is interesting... that being said there is a lot to be improved on the animation front. And most importantly my respect to the commitment of Talotharl in completing the game which is becoming rare in adult game. Hope he gets more love and support for his next project.

One of the greatest games i have played. it's been about two years since this game was made here before the walkthrough mod was made official and most of the scenes took place at the cabin then i believe had to replay around April 2021 and played through that save till this Final update and it was like a strange feeling seeing some of these character's have kids with playable character and funny joke how the hospital staff react to you have kids with so many different women but this game looks amazing has a interesting story and made me feel invested and horny and that's good story telling i am saving this game in a folder i call important there are only 20 games in that folder i have played porn games from here for almost 4 years and have played thousands of games and updates to them and only 20 have impacted me enough that i want to keep holding on to them and replay them This is a wonderful game i hope you play it and i hope the developer makes more like it in the future.

One of the best VNs I have ever played. Great story, characters and (of course) sex ! Can't wait to play more of your stories! Thank you

Best characters are Maie, Susan, Aya & Sabrina *-) But there are a lot of very hot women(?) to enjoy some time with! You can't wrong with a Harem story!

Love this game. One of the best i have played.
Have played it from start to finish multiple times.
Hope there will be more to this game
Very well made. great job
Greate renders. Looking great. Love the storie.

The story is great, the renders look good, the variety of companions is good, the only real negative I have is the sex animations, they're a handful of frames sorta looped until climax, not a whole lot of detail to them, some changes to faces or sometimes a change in position, and that's not a bad thing for less involved scenes, such as conversations or other interactions between characters, but for sex animations? Not great, makes things feel more stiff. If you don't mind that though it's a good, solid game with lots of genuinely interesting content, keep up the good work Dev.

Scorcerer 0.36 .Love this game as it takes you off the normal beaten path . Grannies midgets amputess giants . The graphics and the story line are great .But i think it casts a much wider view .Which, is it doesnt matter about age gender disability colour or religion or sexuality .What does matter is we all work together as a force for good. May be way off base but thats the feeling i get .Keep up the good work

Played v1.0.0.
This game is amazing! It has some flaws here and there but its stil very very good. The concept is nice as well as the story and there are multiple endings too. The characters are lovable and their looks are 10/10. Renders seem fine but lacks a lot on sex scenes. There is no sound effects either. These two are the onlt flaws for me.
Definitely reccomended if u like harem+preg games or just preg games.

This game Is brilliantly thought out! It got action, humor and lots of sex, even tho It's not animated, there Is some movement.
But to be honest I don't play this game for the sex scenes, I play it for the story and the humor, It's just so good and the MC and dialouges thats going on In the game are hillarious.
So even If you don't like to play games without animations like me, you should give this a try anyways I highly recommend It!

A brilliant game with a unique story and creative writing!

Pros

• Good renders and visuals
• Unique art
• Good to excellent character models with realistic bodies
• Excellent and unique characters
• Brilliant story
• Brilliant and creative writing
• Excellent and detailed lore
• Likable MC (overall)
• Harem done right (believable and done in a way that makes sense)
• Lots of lewd content
• Lots of content

Cons

• The animations are one of the weakest parts of the game. It is OK to use 2 to 4 FPS animations during non-lewd scenes but during sex scenes it is a major problem. The animations are too choppy due to being only 2 to 4 FPS and don't look natural. 20 FPS is what is required to make smooth looking animations.
• The weakest part of the game are the lewd/sex scenes. The author only illustrates sex scenes using animations and nothing else. It causes a big time immersion issue. The author either needs to narrate the sex scenes with writing or make good use of sound effects. Animations alone do not sell the sex scenes! The sex scenes in the game are plentiful but they are lackluster and disappointing.
• The third problem with the sex scenes is a lack of back and forth movement in the vast majority of scenes. The back and forth movement is generally only one to two inches. Rarely does the MC ever go balls deep because of this. If you have a long dick you need more penetration and back and forth movement (one to two inches just doesn't cut it).
• The final problem with the sex scene animations is the lack of body parts moving. It is too robotic. Usually, only the hips are moving and little else. Some animations are worse than others. More body parts need to be moving during the sex scenes. Humans don't fuck like robots or statues.
• Susan never has her 'Oath of Loyalty' event in the game. She was suppose to have it first and yet Aya beat her to it when she initially said she wouldn't do it and was only loyal to the lady of the house and not the MC directly. This is very odd. I know she didn't have it because when Aya had it, it was a huge magical event with lots of fireworks.
• The MC is a bit too 'white knight' for my tastes but he isn't as bad as I've seen in other games. The MC is likable overall. I do get REALLY tired of the MC always correcting others when they call him "Lord". We get it dev that the MC is humble, a gentleman, selfless, and treats everyone as equals but it gets to be too much sometimes and makes me cringe (please STOP).
• Poor character development with some of the characters. I understand that the MC is building his own house but he meets and visits so many new people throughout the game that many side characters fall by the wayside (get somewhat forgotten). Story events often outpace character development. The love interest count is starting to get out of control and I don't see this slowing down anytime soon. Once the cast gets too large the game will quickly lose focus.

The author created a very detailed fantasy world rich in lore! The writing and story are top notch and among the very best this site has to offer! This game has some of the best and most creative writing that I've seen!

I really wanted to give this game 5 stars!!! I had to take one star off for the lewd/sex scenes (multiple problems as listed in the Cons). I'm hoping that after the author finishes the game that he'll do a remastered version and re-do all of the lewd/sex scenes and do them properly. I'm an author myself and I hate to narrate sex scenes also but I do it out of necessity. It leaves too much out of the scene when you don't know what the sex partners are feeling or experiencing and have to guess each time. Without narration, all sex scenes seem vanilla (and boring) since their individual personalities aren't being shown (sexy talk, expressions, moans of pleasure, female orgasms, etc.).

There are several instances in the game where the sex comes too easily. It's kind of like, "I'm a male, you're a female, I'm hot, you're hot, let's FUCK!" A bit too much porn logic in some of the sex events for sure. I'd rather have this problem then the opposite however.

One thing that the author does in this game that is almost entirely unique on this site is use realistic character models for the females. Most authors turn all females into perfect supermodels with F cup breasts. This developer uses a variety of realistic character models which is HUGELY refreshing! The developer also uses an attractive male character model for the MC which is rare on this site!

I really liked the fact that the author included a disabled vet (partial leg loss) and midget character into the game. This adds uniqueness and sets the game apart from countless others. The dev also does a great job with the many fantasy characters in the game.

I was greatly impressed by the story and the deep lore that is involved throughout it. One of the most lore rich games on this site.

The harem in this game is done brilliantly! It is one of the few harems that is actually believable and makes sense. This is refreshing as far too many harem games rely on pure fantasy to be believable!

The author has a ton of creative talent and I feel very fortunate that I came across this game (on accident) and had the pleasure of playing through it!

I highly recommend this game and encourage others to give it a try!

Loved it, pretty good game. Story is getting heated as i type . Girls are gorgeous specially the Asian chik, mc is middle aged man with well endowed personality, liked him too. The whole fantasy element in general is great. Whole guild formation is great idea and as you go ahead respective members starts to join, of course you have to sort out their problems sometimes. Lookin forward.

TL/ DR. Nice elements hampered by weird choppy animations and blitzkrieg pacing.

Good:
~ MC is a decent dude- with an interesting backstory.
~ Character model for MC is unique- he kinda looks like a stereotypical cheesy showman magician.
~Good variety of mythical creatures.
~All the scenes capture an element of romance or affection
~Some creative uses of magic / magical metaphysic
~Mc actually acts like an adult and not some weird perv.
~Some fun magical sex.

Bad:
~Not a ton of character building. The plot outpaces the character growth. It is difficult to connect to many characters as a result
~ Really choppy animations. They need another frame or two in their loops. I'd even prefer stills over them.
~A lot of the scenes involve porn logic instead of arising from anything that makes any sense or character motivation- the pacing of it is just too fast.
~Mc power growth is just lightning paced and you don't really get a sense of what he can and cannot do at any point. Would be nice to see more of a training montage here. 1st thing he learns to do is teleport long distances- bit too OP out the gate.

Well finally sat down and played from the beginning until the update and I must say I was very impressed. I’m definitely someone who is about the story and build up. Well this game certainly does that and has a great story. This is the best story I have had the pleasure of reading.

pros
- graphics and characters are unique and well flushed out as far as their story. The world and npcs are all interesting and love the interactions.
- worth multiple playthroughs to see the different twists and turns.
- lots of stories, twists, plots, and side quests that are all interconnected and blended together very well
- overall a great story with plenty of lewd content and kinks to certainly satisfy most. Great game and looking forward to the updates.

cons
- wish there was sound as the love making is just kind of boring with just facial expressions.

great game overall and certainly five stars

Holy ghost on pogo stick! This game is looooong.
Whatever it lacks here and there in pacing (some scenes feel rushed to be honest) or creativity, it gives back in the amount of content.

The story is pretty decent for harem power fantasy. The renders quality vary (some are a bit generic) but they are all above certain level.

My only real "complain" are the animations - I could really live without them. They are simply to basic to be enjoyable, so why bother?

Hmm... my first review, huh? I used to write reviews for anime, so lets see if I still have a knack for it.

For the short attention span crowd, here is the summary.

Positives:
a) Renders are well done.
b) Story is well-written, engaging, and quite long as of version 0.31.0.

Negatives:
a) The adult content doesn't work.
b) No sound or music.

Here is the longer version in essay form.

I'm still a relative newbie when it comes to visual novels and adult gaming having only played 30 or 40 games so far. Still, it's enough to get an idea of what works and what doesn't. What Sorcerer has going for it is an excellent writer and excellent renders.

While the dialogue isn't perfect and contains a spelling error or a grammatical error every 20 lines of dialogue or so, it's far better than a lot of games I've played and doesn't detract from the flow of the story, and the story is where Sorcerer really shines. It's unique, engaging, and as of 0.31.0, is at least the length of a typical light novel. I never felt compelled to skip dialogue to speed things along as even the lore was interesting and worth reading.

On top of that is the excellent world building. The world of Sorcerer is full of magic and wonder, and there are quite a few throwaway scenes where the author doesn't use words or pay much attention to them, but it adds to the mystique of the world in a subtle way. Think of the bar scene from Star Wars. The author doesn't give the whole story away at once leaving me curious about what new rules of this world are left to discover. Sorcerer is one of those rare games where I was truly engaged in the story and read every single line with care, making sure I didn't miss anything.

There's a walkthrough for the game which I of course would recommend, though it's occasional fun to click on the "wrong" options just to see where things would end up. The author put effort into all paths, and some of the "wrong" paths end in an entertaining way.

If this were a typical R-rated game, the only thing I would ding it for is the absence of any music or sound effects. Perhaps they'll be added at a later date? I don't know. Unfortunately, this is an adult video game with numerous sex scenes, and this is where the game critically stumbles. I don't want to be too harsh, and perhaps some of this is personal preference, so if still frames with no dialogue and several seconds of two-frame repeats, say of a butt moving back and forth during sex, is something that *cough* works for you *cough*, then pay this criticism no mind. For me, there are two correct ways to do an adult scene in a visual novel:

1) Animation.
2. Multiple still frames with dialogue explaining what is going on. Good writing is a must.
3. A mix of 1 & 2.

Sorcerer does something unusual for a game where, I assume, this criticism has been levied before: It is "animated" in that the scenes progress from frame to frame without user interference, but they are more a collection of still frames, and most painfully, there is little to no writing. The scenes advance from undressing to "release" quickly, and attempts to back up to the beginning resets the whole scene.

So the adult content didn't work for me at all. I was expecting as I played through that it would improve, as a lot of adult games made by single authors do, as the authors get better at their craft. Sadly that was not the case.

The one other issue, which is more personal preference, is who you end up romantically entangled with. Without spoiling anything, lets just say that many of the couplings are aimed towards fantasy fetishes, some of which are quite "out there". They are skippable at least.

So great story, good renders, excellent world building, but the absence of sound and the poor adult content definitely brings the rating down. I feel this game could easily make it into the top 10 if the adult content were improved. Stayed for the story, and am looking forward to the next update, but I'll be keeping my pants on.

[review of v31.0]

I really enjoy this game.

The frequent updates, great world building and enough choice to make the story feel like you have some effect on events give this game a top score from myself.

I am entertained each release. i enjoy seeing how the story progresses and while the renders are not the best on site they are far from the worse. The animations are hit or miss with more misses than hits to be honest but i am hoping the author will improve as time goes by.

It is nice to have a non douche of a MC which is even rarer given that the MC is a powerful sorcerer yet still doesn't use magic to get laid. The author seems to know how to form a plot and craft a story around the plot. Most characters you have sex with are optional and the characters in the game are varied both in appearance and in motivation.

This game is very story driven so if you don't like the story you wont like the game but it is written far better than most games here. It is worth the download in my opinion even if you don't think you will like the game you probably wont but if you do you will have found a gem you will look forward to playing each release.

Worth the download.

VERY good plot, story, writing, characters, drama, nice twists...
The overall game is awesome, but what truly holds this back from FIVE STARS (which it does deserve):

• Lack of any music or sound anywhere in the game.
• Animations (in sex scenes) are 1fps slideshows and barely anything moves.
• Some animations are 10-15 frames of nothing but the 10 pixels of 2 people's tongues moving in the tiny opening between their mouths as they french kiss.
• A handful of typos, odd phrases throughout the script (perhaps 100 mistakes in 100,000 lines of dialog) which I tried to ignore, but cause me to re-read a line 3-4 times to figure out what it was supposed to say.
• The locked images in the middle of and at the end of animations await a click to progress the scene (without text to alert the player it's needed).
• Some scenes have 4-8 people in them and a single wide shot that does not change much or show who is speaking... for over 40 lines of text.
• Could use more variety of breast size proportionally (how about some B-cups tossed in in the future?)

Great stuff:

• Almost every time MC cums, it's inside a woman's unprotected womb (the promise of "heirs" will hopefully become real soon).
• Nice variety of women, many players will enjoy the selection.
• Amazing story with fun twists and magic reveals.
• Solid renders with good lighting.
• The final potential love interest in 0.31.0 has an amazing in-your-face shot of carpeting that really offset any dislike of the character.

Overall:
I look forward to seeing how far this game grows. It's already huge, took me 2 full days to play through 0.31.0. It may be a slower-pacedVERY STORY-RICH game, but it does have some cool stuff that keeps players invested and playing.