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- Mar 25, 2018
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How femdom heavy will this game be? or already is? If it's just a few scenes it doesn't worth downloading, and from what I've seen so far, you either go full femdom or full vanilla, no really half measures.
- Jun 4, 2020
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Crazy that it has to be said, but... When you write a NOVEL (even a visual novel) in English, you must hire a competent native-English-speaking TRANSLATOR and an EDITOR. And you want to put your best foot forward. The first post up top is a mess in English.
I feel bad for the people making these games who plan on having volunteer translators and editors. Head over to Upwork, find someone in your price range and pay them.
The last game failed because it lacked a competent translator and editor. There are games on here with amazing renders and perfect UI; that fail miserably because of atrocious English. Look at the lowest-rated and least-frequently-viewed games on the site. Observe what they all have in common.
Your game is 100% DOOMED until you hire an editor/translator. Does that suck? Yes. Does it make it harder to make enough money to support yourself while doing this? Yes. But, in my opinion, you are guaranteed to fail until you hire help. If you can't afford a translator or editor, you shouldn't waste your time making a game and trying to market it in English. Best of luck, OP/Dev.
I feel bad for the people making these games who plan on having volunteer translators and editors. Head over to Upwork, find someone in your price range and pay them.
The last game failed because it lacked a competent translator and editor. There are games on here with amazing renders and perfect UI; that fail miserably because of atrocious English. Look at the lowest-rated and least-frequently-viewed games on the site. Observe what they all have in common.
Your game is 100% DOOMED until you hire an editor/translator. Does that suck? Yes. Does it make it harder to make enough money to support yourself while doing this? Yes. But, in my opinion, you are guaranteed to fail until you hire help. If you can't afford a translator or editor, you shouldn't waste your time making a game and trying to market it in English. Best of luck, OP/Dev.
Let me give you one example from the first post.
"You find yourself in a new world unknown to you..."
This sentence fragment contains an example of a grammatical and compositional error called redundancy. A "new" world is always "unknown." Otherwise, it wouldn't be "new!" Redundancy errors set off a native speaker's grammar ear, creating a similar sensation to hearing the sound of nails on a chalkboard.
The following sentence fragment:
"Purgatory, a world full of dangers and threats, you have to solve the mystery of this world and find friends to survive and go further into the unknown."
These are two independent clauses. They must be punctuated as separate sentences; we can also make use of a semicolon to separate two independent clauses--rarely, we may use a dash to indicate a longer pause before introducing a new independent clause. So the correct version would be: "Purgatory is a world full of dangers. (Saying dangers and threats is another redundancy.) As the main character, your task is to solve the mystery of this world. And if you want to venture further into the unknown, you will need to find friends to survive."
There's a great book called The Elements of Style, which better describes what I'm trying to explain here.
"You find yourself in a new world unknown to you..."
This sentence fragment contains an example of a grammatical and compositional error called redundancy. A "new" world is always "unknown." Otherwise, it wouldn't be "new!" Redundancy errors set off a native speaker's grammar ear, creating a similar sensation to hearing the sound of nails on a chalkboard.
The following sentence fragment:
"Purgatory, a world full of dangers and threats, you have to solve the mystery of this world and find friends to survive and go further into the unknown."
These are two independent clauses. They must be punctuated as separate sentences; we can also make use of a semicolon to separate two independent clauses--rarely, we may use a dash to indicate a longer pause before introducing a new independent clause. So the correct version would be: "Purgatory is a world full of dangers. (Saying dangers and threats is another redundancy.) As the main character, your task is to solve the mystery of this world. And if you want to venture further into the unknown, you will need to find friends to survive."
There's a great book called The Elements of Style, which better describes what I'm trying to explain here.
- Aug 15, 2019
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This is the Italian translation of Sorrow: Rebirth [v0.99]
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Unzip the .rar file - copy/paste the game folder into the game directory, replace when asked.
This translation is "unofficial" and "made by a fan"
- Mar 6, 2021
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Sorrow: Rebirth [v0.99] [LustFight] crunched
Info: Enabled quick menu and improved UI translation.
Original / Compressed Size PC*: 1,67 GB / 218 MB - SorrowRebirth-0.99-pc-crunched.zip
Original / Compressed Size Mac: 1,64 GB / 183 MB - SorrowRebirth-0.99-mac-crunched.zip
= ~13,1% of the original size, image/video quality 80% (png 90%)/60%
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My compressious likeses! Give them to us you filthy little pervertses!
This compression is unofficial and untested, use it at your own risk.
The compressing process reduces the quality and can break the game.
*PC = Win+Linux
Info: Enabled quick menu and improved UI translation.
Original / Compressed Size PC*: 1,67 GB / 218 MB - SorrowRebirth-0.99-pc-crunched.zip
Original / Compressed Size Mac: 1,64 GB / 183 MB - SorrowRebirth-0.99-mac-crunched.zip
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- Oct 22, 2017
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The non-stop zoom-in/zoom-out effect is super fucking annoying. Simulating a drunk who's constantly wobbling forward and backwards. And even worse, it suddenly resets every time you advance the script.
so this is a remake? so i see harem which is good but I also see LESBIAN..
will the lesbian be optional in this version?I remember last time you had the mc sitting and watching instead of even getting in the action while one of the girl "teach"
like as lone as it's optional and none of the girls is fucking behind the mc back I will give this game another shot.
will the lesbian be optional in this version?I remember last time you had the mc sitting and watching instead of even getting in the action while one of the girl "teach"
like as lone as it's optional and none of the girls is fucking behind the mc back I will give this game another shot.
Oh? There is? This is an absolute Deal Breaker for me if it is
I'm also curious about this. Also a deal breaker for me
Will give this game a go if there is animations and some type of wincest
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Who is Diana to me? How should I know, I never even met her. lol
