VN Ren'Py Sort Of Justice [v0.1.0] [Creator Tom]

[KoGa3]

Quick made Android port for this game with my usual settings Mod
(textbox/textsize/MC renaming/named saves)


Android port from the game compressed
with integrated settings Mod v0.1.0/chapter 1 (~150MB)

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[Skye8]

Phew...No ntr

 

[Hyperserver]

review on 0.1:

TOP NOTCH!
Solid start, top renders, excellent writing, cufing story, some of the very best fighting scenes i ever experienced in such a game and attractive girls/women.
Maybe only a few more animations would be the "cherry on the cake", but this game has a lot of "calories" even without that - so it's just about to find ANYTHING "bad" about this gem.

After playing countless adult games , i may be entitled to say that this one is outstanding (so far).

Seeing that other games out there got 5 stars, this one certainly deserves 10 compared to them I know that a lot players are following me over here, so i just advice to them: "CHECK THIS ONE OUT!!!".
This is instantly one of my all-time favorites (which happens barely, if not at all).

Well done!

 

[vs2011xyz]

Quick made Android port for this game with my usual settings Mod
(textbox/textsize/MC renaming/named saves)


Android port from the game compressed
with integrated settings Mod v0.1.0/chapter 1 (~150MB)
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Thanks BRO

 

[xvertion121]

Not gonna lie, Adult games are getting so far. Normally i don't expect a story from these type of game so when i get one its like WOW.

Story is really good.Only game i could compare is to being a DIK. Good luck to the Dev i guess.

 

[Little_Cap]

Please tell me that bro didnt do what I think he was about to do at the end of the chapter.

 

[Hyperserver]

Please tell me that bro didnt do what I think he was about to do at the end of the chapter.

Usually, if it's a cliffhanger, it's most likely NOT what you think it is
But to be sure, we obviously have to wait for the next update

 

[Bigdick606]

It looks interesting, I'm waiting for the next updates and then I'll evaluate it thoroughly

 

[stahlblau]

It's exactly the game I was looking for. Revenge, criminal organizations, beautiful detective, angry but sexy companion, an unknown boss. Seems like it would be a good story.

We saw a small flashback when we got into the gunfight. If I'm not mistaken, the child we see at the end of the episode is us. That fucker kills our mother and we kind of block out the memory, I guess we don't remember any of it. That's why we freeze in a gunfight.

I think we will cross paths at some point with the detective who will start investigating the man who killed our mother. I could be wrong, but I think that detective is also the female detective who interrogated us 7 years ago. She or she looks a lot like she.

Also, the man Adam is talking to is probably our father.

Send updates quickly, my friend.

 

[stahlblau]

In case anyone asks about future tags

 

[nino40]

Excellent start, the only real flaw in the plot is that the "primum movens" on which the whole story of the incriminating signature depends cannot be such a colossal naivety as the signing of an illegible piece of paper by an MC defined as very smart and intelligent, It would have been better to characterize the document as extremely complex in legal terms. a dialogue like:
(I didn't know that Scarlett had all this legal knowledge, with all these references to laws and decrees you can't understand anything)
Other than that, great work
Given your commitment, I wish you great success

 

[xXwankerXx]

Between which characters, exactly? Because the MC has no non-absent family.

Technically, it could be considered incest if he called Malena 'mami' when he's giving her backshots. Just sayin'.

He beats the shit out of people for fun, hardly a beta.

Yeah, but he learns how to fight and beat ppl up like that only after he gets his ass thrown in prison for one of the stupidest possible beta bitch boi reasons, which is simping like an idiot for an obviously sus asf bitch with sus asf interests.

Life in prison is almost impossible for idiots like that (he gets his ass whooped there badly too), so he was forced to adapt and survive, he didn't become a fighter out of his own free will or like most guys IRL do it, cuz it's a necessity that helps a lot with the ladies.

So, the guy agrees to take the blame and doesn't even so much as request a handy?

He believed in the purity of her love for him thinking what she did can't be anything that bad, and look how good that worked out for him in the end. At least he only got 7y, even tho I think there should've been a few more to that sentence, only for being a complete idiot to trust a cunt like Scarlet alone, but I'm not exactly a lawyer, so we'll have to go with porn 'logic' again to make things make sense. Not even porn logic can justify this much stupidity tho.

I'm with you on that. KNs aren't my thing. I wish the dev well.

I'm with you two on this too. In a game like this, the potential for the MC to become a good guy in a world of criminals and fucked-up ppl or a bad guy having fun doing all kinds of bad guy things is too big to be thrown away like that.

Hope the dev reconsiders the whole KN thing and hires a coder to give us at least a few important choices on how the story unfolds and the MC acts, but if they don't, we'll just have to enjoy playing the game how it is or delete it and move on.

 

[xXwankerXx]

After playing countless adult games , i may be entitled to say that this one is outstanding (so far).

Seeing that other games out there got 5 stars, this one certainly deserves 10 compared to them I know that a lot players are following me over here, so i just advice to them: "CHECK THIS ONE OUT!!!".
This is instantly one of my all-time favorites (which happens barely, if not at all).

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Please tell me that bro didnt do what I think he was about to do at the end of the chapter.

Usually, if it's a cliffhanger, it's most likely NOT what you think it is
But to be sure, we obviously have to wait for the next update

Nope, it's safe to say he did jus that. Motherfucker's batshit crazy, something of a most wanted criminal, shooting a kid and his mom won't be a problem for him after he admitted he killed his damn stepdad or his mom's boy toy when he was only 13yo. If it wasn't against Patreon's holy moral guideliness, I'd make an educated guess and say he raped her too.

We saw a small flashback when we got into the gunfight. If I'm not mistaken, the child we see at the end of the episode is us. That fucker kills our mother and we kind of block out the memory, I guess we don't remember any of it. That's why we freeze in a gunfight.

Oh shit, that's a good observation that would explain why he unwillingly played possum when the bullets started flying around.This begs the question tho, who was the lunatic who shot her and why ??

I think we will cross paths at some point with the detective who will start investigating the man who killed our mother. I could be wrong, but I think that detective is also the female detective who interrogated us 7 years ago. She or she looks a lot like she.

Yeah, it's kinda predictable. Wouldn't be surprised if, somewhere along the line, we'll be forced to choose sides or become double agents and risk getting shot at by both mobsters and cops if we screw things up.

 

[Alextsai]

i like revenge type of plots, will keep an eye on this one

 

[Hyperserver]

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Nope, it's safe to say he did jus that. Motherfucker's batshit crazy, something of a most wanted criminal, shooting a kid and his mom won't be a problem for him after he admitted he killed his damn stepdad or his mom's boy toy when he was only 13yo. If it wasn't against Patreon's holy moral guideliness, I'd make an educated guess and say he raped her too.



Oh shit, that's a good observation that would explain why he unwillingly played possum when the bullets started flying around.This begs the question tho, who was the lunatic who shot her and why ??



Yeah, it's kinda predictable. Wouldn't be surprised if, somewhere along the line, we'll be forced to choose sides or become double agents and risk getting shot at by both mobsters and cops if we screw things up.

well - it's more easy to tell a good story within a kinetic VN where you can focus on your writing rather than having to wave several paths around the main plot.
But indeed, we got some inspiration out of this.

And talking about the cliffhanger:
You might be wrong:

 

[jtc]

Bookmarked, let's see in a year if this one is still around.

 

[w123t4]

The model and story is nice at the first release, just hope there will be harem in the future update

 

[Eldiran]

So this will always be a linear kinetic story with no real choices? That's a huge turnoff for me. Renders look really great though, too bad.

Same. We all have stuff we don't wanna do or stuff we need to have, giving at least the illusion of choice to be invested a bit more into the story.

I think they are a reason if they aren't that much of kinetic story who really work out here (compared to non-kinetic i mean ) despite the fact that it's easier to create. Yeah too bad like you said imo.

The model and story is nice at the first release, just hope there will be harem in the future update

It will be harem, i mean it's kinetic . For exemple, the description doesn't have the romance tag but it say romance is in the bag.

 

[fishbrain]

Same. We all have stuff we don't wanna do or stuff we need to have, giving at least the illusion of choice to be invested a bit more into the story.

I think they are a reason if they aren't that much of kinetic story who really work out here (compared to non-kinetic i mean ) despite the fact that it's easier to create. Yeah too bad like you said imo.


It will be harem, i mean it's kinetic . For exemple, the description doesn't have the romance tag but it say romance is in the bag.

You did get the choice to fuck one of the girls or not, so it's technically not kinetic but a linear story I'm guessing. I certainly enjoyed it though and I usually despise KNs that I give a chance. The story and graphic violence will probably make it good enough for me personally.

 

[Eldiran]

You did get the choice to fuck one of the girls or not, so it's technically not kinetic but a linear story I'm guessing. I certainly enjoyed it though and I usually despise KNs that I give a chance. The story and graphic violence will probably make it good enough for me personally.

Fair enough.
I guess i should give it a try. I mean, it mustn't be that long to read it and i could be surprised : ) .
Tbh, i'm more a romance type of person than a "fuck everything possible", so these thing need time to be enjoyed a bit imo.