VN Ren'Py STWA: Unbroken [Pt. 7] [STWAdev]

[MrFriendly]

Really impressive of a game to start. Very long update for part 1. I really hope all additional parts will be close to this length. My fear is if they are we will be on a 3 to 4 month wait for each update. That will royally suck.... Great work and hope for somewhat decent update times.

Hopefully we won't have to be forced into a particular women. There are 5 worthy and hard to chose. Be nice for a pregnancy option at some point but wishful thinking.

Honestly, if they are this much content or longer I can wait 6 months for them. Sure I like to see updates every 3-4 months but not if they are shorter or of poorer quality due to being rushed. This looked really good and I would hate to see a dip in quality or quantity with the next releases.

In the previous release there was no love interest the player was forced to choose... There were some that got more time onscreen than others.

yes and as long as I'm not forced into a harem I'm good

and I would also love a pregnancy option

Bah, preggers women are bonkers

If at the end one of them confirms they are pregnant that makes sense but otherwise I don't see how it would matter if someone gets pregnant unless there's a significant time skip.

 

[Vidal the king of Pervert]

Wouldn't makes since if all girls could have that option. Especially if you choose the fighter or Vi. They are young but who knows.

I don't care about all the girls I just want to knock up Elspeth and that's it

she's the girl for me

 

[cxx]

no idea why every1 wants to get girls preggo right after meeting them.

 

[Vidal the king of Pervert]

no idea why every1 wants to get girls preggo right after meeting them.

I was thinking about getting to know her first building a loving connection and then knocking her up
after all isn't that the ultimate expression of love between two people it is to me

 

[cxx]

I was thinking about getting to know her first building a loving connection and then knocking her up
after all isn't that the ultimate expression of love between two people it is to me

my post wasn't aimed at you just general aka let's say game has barely started and players are already wanting impregnate girls.

 

[Vidal the king of Pervert]

my post wasn't aimed at you just general aka let's say game has barely started and players are already wanting impregnate girls.

I know bro I know don't worry I was just having a happy conversation with you it's all good

 

[Avaron1974]

I doubt pregnancy will be a big thing, it wasn't in the first and didn't happen until the endings.

Considering Amrit's age and career she probably won't have a pregnancy at all.

 

[cxx]

Considering Amrit's age and career she probably won't have a pregnancy at all.

same thing with vid as she is sameish age and mc is also bit young to become daddy.

 

[Ragnar]

no idea why every1 wants to get girls preggo right after meeting them.

It's a kink like feet or whatever, some people are into that.

 

[cxx]

It's a kink like feet or whatever, some people are into that.

i know that.

 

[Angelsong]

When a game draws you in to focus on the writing rather than skipping to fap scenes I call that a win. Excellent renders too. Keep up the great work, dev!

 

[Vidal the king of Pervert]

I doubt pregnancy will be a big thing, it wasn't in the first and didn't happen until the endings.

Considering Amrit's age and career she probably won't have a pregnancy at all.

again the only girl I care about is Elspeth and Amrit's don't get me wrong she's a nice girl but I'm her coach and she's a little young for me I like my women older but what about you my sister who's your favorite, so far

 

[Misosoc]

my post wasn't aimed at you just general aka let's say game has barely started and players are already wanting impregnate girls.

I didn't say I wanted it now. Just as a future option was all. I would be happy for later updates. Maybe final 2 or 3 before game complete. We know a lot of games do a fast forward in final release to see how it worked it. That's all I personally was referring to.

 

[Demonic Presence]

Very impressive game good luck to the Dev.

 

[Vidal the king of Pervert]

same thing with vid as she is sameish age and mc is also bit young to become daddy.

too young what the
the MC is a grown-ass man

 

[MrFriendly]

too young what the
the MC is a grown-ass man

Bah! Please! Grown ass man? The MC is still immature in how he treats women. He doesn't have anything more than fuck buddies and one night stands. For all we know the dumbass is already a daddy. He needs to grow up a bit and I believe that's what we will see in this story, the MC becoming more responsible and mature.

 

[Avaron1974]

These things are all about character growth. The MC from the first one went through it. Kimmy arguably had the biggest growth arc.

They all have things to improve on and get over.

 

[Shyguy1369]

These things are all about character growth. The MC from the first one went through it. Kimmy arguably had the biggest growth arc.

They all have things to improve on and get over.

Kimmy's arc hit me the hardest in The Author. And I fully expect STWAdev to once again take my emotions on a massive rollercoaster.

 

[MrFriendly]

Kimmy's arc hit me the hardest in The Author. And I fully expect STWAdev to once again take my emotions on a massive rollercoaster.

As long as it's not one of those old wooden ones that constantly shake and make click clack sounds as you ride them... Drive me mad.

But yeah, I expect STWAdev to cruelly play with my emotions. So so cruel to me when I am just a sweet, innocent grouch looking for a good time with a hot redhead.

 

[Shyguy1369]

As long as it's not one of those old wooden ones that constantly shake and make click clack sounds as you ride them... Drive me mad.

But yeah, I expect STWAdev to cruelly play with my emotions. So so cruel to me when I am just a sweet, innocent grouch looking for a good time with a hot redhead.

Oh yeah, no way I don't come out of one of these chapters a blubbering mess. I remember, I think it was the second last chapter of The Author, when you take Kimberly to the hospital... that whole scene playing out in her apartment and leading into actually checking in... man, I could not stop crying. I expect more emotions to be reached deeply here too.