VN Ren'Py STWA: Unbroken [Pt. 7] [STWAdev]

[MrFriendly]

But do you really think that the developer is going to keep the MC as a dumbass throughout the game? I seriously doubt that is his intent. So, IF there is a pathway to the MC remaining a dumbass, which may not even exist, YOU will have to choose it.

As for not knowing how choices will affect the outcome of this game, that is the conundrum we face with most games, especially the goods ones. But that's why saves were invented. [Or you could wait till the game is completed and read the script to get the outcome you want.]

LOL, maybe. But we don't know that fucking Rena, flirting with everyone in the MC's life, and being the ladies man that everyone expects him to be is the right answer either. If the MC is trying to change then continuing on the same course he has always taken doesn't make much sense. It's the first installment of the game, as you've said we don't know what the right answer is until the end. It sounds like you just seem to think that, because it is "a porn game", the best answer is to play the character as a slut. In my opinion, when playing a game that isn't going to have a harem, it is best to be cautious about who the MC goes after until we actually know something about the characters. I don't want the MC to end up losing friendships because he fucked the wrong one in the beginning.

 

[Skylaroo]

Tried this game and god damn it this is just like the first game again. It's impossible to choose which girl to pursue because everyone is so damn lovable can't wait to see where this game goes to.

 

[ReaperDie]

I want to thank STWAdev For writing this VN. As a Veteran myself, the beginning of this story has hit home. I love that the characters have started a Centre for the Vets and have brought that into the story as well. I have lost a good few of my friends during my time in the military. Including one that was my best friend during childhood. We also joined the Army together and was stationed together for a few years. We lost him after he got home from Afghanistan to a car jacker. Keep writing this phenomenal piece of work for all of us Vets that have lost so many friends and to those of who are still here. Thank you also UncleVT for uploading this for us.

Slàinte Mhath!!!

 

[Walter Victor]

LOL, maybe. But we don't know that fucking Rena, flirting with everyone in the MC's life, and being the ladies man that everyone expects him to be is the right answer either. If the MC is trying to change then continuing on the same course he has always taken doesn't make much sense. It's the first installment of the game, as you've said we don't know what the right answer is until the end. It sounds like you just seem to think that, because it is "a porn game", the best answer is to play the character as a slut. In my opinion, when playing a game that isn't going to have a harem, it is best to be cautious about who the MC goes after until we actually know something about the characters. I don't want the MC to end up losing friendships because he fucked the wrong one in the beginning.

All I can say is that in the previous game there were a fuckton of choices, that could have the MC going in one direction or another. But at the end, our MC's all ended up at the same place, with the only meaningful choice being, which girl will our MC wind up with. Of course, all those choices along the way had an influence on the set of girls we could choose from, but the point I'm attempting to make is that the developer had an immutable arc for the MC to follow. There was just an illusion of real choice for how he would wind up. If you play (or just read) all the endings, it is remarkable how similar they are. The girls change according to your choice, but nearly everything about the girls you don't choose and the success and growth of the MC is uncannily similar.

I'm not complaining, mind you. In fact I've always admired a developer who had a plan for the game and stuck to it. I believe that one thing for sure we can say about this developer is that he not only had a plan for his last game, but also for this one and the next one. And I say, "Hurray!!!"

 

[Arigon]

So just like the last installment/game, this is off to an amazing start.
I think that since Mr. Valentine has a rep as a womanizer, that in my playthrough, which is admittedly influenced by the previous game, I will attempt to break that pattern. The love interests are shaping up earlier than I expected, at least I suspect that they are, and while the jury is still out, I know that Me personally has a couple of favorites already, but love all the girls already. Also, this author does a great job of making the MC someone who is capable of being a decent human being. We are not going to have a harem, but in the last game I did score the pair for the win for myself. I am not necessarily looking for that here, and besides, our path forward eventually leads towards working for Aiofe's mother/aunt, and the auntie has a lot to do with this, so I am guessing we have a fiery future ahead.
Congrats and looking forwards to more!
Peace

 

[Dripping]

First one is one of my fave games, may as well add a second.

Also means now I gotta fuck around with my sig again to get this added..... then again on his third.

Making my life difficult for 5 whole minutes here hunni.

Just admit it, your secret plan is to have at least one developer make a game revolving completely around a foulmouthed red headed submissive-inclined pixie being taken care of by a tall and just somewhat but not overly buxom Jessica Rabbit inspired amazon.

 

[Vendo19]

after The Author another good game from you. I recommended.

 

[UncleFredo]

Stwadev:
Awesome start to your new game. A lot of content for an initial release and the quality of renders, women, writing and plot are exceptional more than exceeding expectations you set in your first game. Thanks so much for your amazing work.

LI choices:
Two are competing and I have no doubt that will not change unless we get thrown a very ugly personality curve later in the game. That said, just as in his first game, while I know who interests me, each of the girls/women we've met so far are someone for whom I feel that "draw".

 

[HornyyPussy]

Fantastic start STWA!!!! Interesting story that hooks you in and some AMAZING girls that i can't wait to get to know better!
Very good amount of story for a first release (well, you being a veteran Dev now so I guess I shouldn't be surprised)
And I got to see my Aoife again

I see the lack of a harem is gonna hurt as much here as in your previous endeavor

Gonna wait patiently(ish) for future updates!!!

 

[SecretSal]

Oof, way to come out of the gate swinging. The girls are great, but the writing steals the show. And that was huge for a first update, really raising the bar for other devs here. Nice cameos from The Author, wonder how much of a role they'll play. Conversation choices seemed to be fairly obvious, but maybe I'm overestimating my understanding of the characters. Very much looking forward to more. Godspeed!

 

[monksims]

I decided to check out each Author ending in this VN and I found a wrong tag in the scene MC meets Kim. There's a line that indicates taking medicine at noon and it feels weird because MC knows about Kim's medication needs instead of AuthorMC. Impressive story so far, STWA! Also, awesome cameo for Joe Rogan.

 

[NukaCola]

There is a girl named Armpit?

 

[Shyguy1369]

There is a girl named Armpit?

Nope.
Amrit.
Meaning - The nectar of the immortals

 

[Walter Victor]

Nope.
Amrit.
Meaning - The nectar of the immortals

Well, that brings to mind some interesting visuals!

 

[cxx]

Tried this game and god damn it this is just like the first game again. It's impossible to choose which girl to pursue because everyone is so damn lovable can't wait to see where this game goes to.

all at once or each with their save (and hope that saves work from 1 version to other).

 

[OutOfAshes]

my first try on Amrit

 

[cxx]

not quite.

 

[kimjea]

thanks~

 

[Canto Forte]

Yup .. I am picking my jaw off the dungeaon floors and going in to sip happyness from those serene endless eyes of this babe.

"I'm not sure if you've noticed but I'm pretty fucking hot."

Serena fan art ​

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[Deleted member 111545]

Does anyone know the approximate date for the next release?, he recently posted in patreon about the status for the next update
did he announce any dates in the check in?