VN Ren'Py STWA: Unbroken [Pt. 7] [STWAdev]

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maroek said:
Speaking of popular LIs... I'm not the only one who thinks Elspeth is just redhead and frackled Ines, with long hair right? Their body types are different, but facial features are almost exactly the same, and drop dead gorgeous. I know I confused them for a moment once or twice, when they are wet.


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This picture made me think that Els's work wasnt just regular stuff but more like 'assassin work' for the gov

And yeah I see what you mean by Ines/Els being similar, thankgod she has redder/longer hair now (and I told her to keep longer hair too) We already have enough short hairs.
 
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HonoredEx said:
This picture made me think that Els's work wasnt just regular stuff but more like 'assassin work' for the gov

And yeah I see what you mean by Ines/Els being similar, thankgod she has redder/longer hair now (and I told her to keep longer hair too) We already have enough short hairs.
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I don't mind the short hair but it is a little off-putting that they are all the same style. A semi-short to the right combover. The conversation with Vi and Ines didn't really make much sense either. They make it seem like Vi's hair is somehow 8 inches longer than Ines' when they are practically identical. Maybe if Ines had hair like Katie but she doesn't.
 
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HonoredEx said:
This picture made me think that Els's work wasnt just regular stuff but more like 'assassin work' for the gov
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Normally intelligence officers don't go killing people and we already know she's a killer. So no surprise there.

The thing that worry me is "suspicion" stuff. I guess it's about Elspeth though I'm not sure what. I wrote before that it was about Zaina'a death but that was Davis' doing. American Marines don't take orders from British Intelligence, and it's hella improbable to follow the chain of command between the armed forces of two different nations. Way too many red tapes and redactions.
 
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BTW... I found a way for Valentine to fix Amrit's guard dropping issue:

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Just played this for the first time. How often are the updates?
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I'm new here as well, but it looks like Part 6 was last September, and Part 5 was December 2022. So if that trend continues, about 9 months.

But yeah, as mentioned they're pretty big updates. Most AVNs doing 3-6 month updates usually have like 1000-1500 renders compared to the 4,000+ in Part 7 here.
 
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Hello beautiful people. Trying to do this as quick as I can today so you can get back to your days.
Finishing up early dev prep this week. I have one more set to finish building and lighting and one more new character to build. Once those two things are done we should be good to go on the asset front at least on my end, have one custom asset to commission but that's a pretty easy build so things should be quick on that front.
Started some script this week as well, getting our first scene written out. it's one I've had in mind for some time so the flow is pretty easy.
That's about where we're at update wise this week. Thanks to everybody who dropped in for our QnA this past weekend, it was lovely to chat with you. Some things came up that I said I would also mention in this week's update for those who weren't there.
Author Definitive Edition is waiting on a trailer to finish and final page approval from Steam, hoping to get that within the week or so and then the Steam page will be live, I'll let it do it's thing collecting wishlists, build a little hype but the hope is late October or early November for official release. Long term trusted Patrons and a few other folks will be getting the demo in their hands over the next few months and I'll probably pop out a public demo up once we get a bit closer.
With all that coming soon the OG Author downloads will be coming down by this time next week. Letting you know so if you're really fond of it you can make sure you have a version kept for yourself. I'm also not scrubbing it offline or anything silly like that, you'll still be able to get it in my discord if you want, but to help avoid confusion here I'm cleaning things up.
It's going to be a busy rest of 2024 here, I stated in the QnA that I really want to get Unbroken Part 8 out before the year is out so really trying to hit the ground running with this update. On that note time for me to get back to work.
Thank you as always for the support and I hope you have a lovely rest of your week.

Sláinte!
 
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maroek said:
Normally intelligence officers don't go killing people and we already know she's a killer. So no surprise there.

The thing that worry me is "suspicion" stuff. I guess it's about Elspeth though I'm not sure what. I wrote before that it was about Zaina'a death but that was Davis' doing. American Marines don't take orders from British Intelligence, and it's hella improbable to follow the chain of command between the armed forces of two different nations. Way too many red tapes and redactions.
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What I meant was 'intelligence officer' was just the 'Title on the paper' but she was actually part of some 'assassin hit squad' later on, her partner being the 'bike fixing girl that went mia(who we saw gathering info about MC from that hackergirl)'
So its not JUST that she is a killer but a more MESSED UP sort of killer, she did what 'had to do' to get the job done tho.

EDIT: On a side note, it might be just me, but I prefer more static scenes that make it seem the 'sex' was more varied vs 1-2 animations for that 1 shot,
Like around the room or different positions and game def needs to add more kinks( initiated by the MC please)
 
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Hello beautiful people. Trying to do this as quick as I can today so you can get back to your days.

Finishing up early dev prep this week. I have one more set to finish building and lighting and one more new character to build. Once those two things are done we should be good to go on the asset front at least on my end, have one custom asset to commission but that's a pretty easy build so things should be quick on that front.

Started some script this week as well, getting our first scene written out. it's one I've had in mind for some time so the flow is pretty easy.

That's about where we're at update wise this week. Thanks to everybody who dropped in for our QnA this past weekend, it was lovely to chat with you. Some things came up that I said I would also mention in this week's update for those who weren't there.

Author Definitive Edition is waiting on a trailer to finish and final page approval from Steam, hoping to get that within the week or so and then the Steam page will be live, I'll let it do it's thing collecting wishlists, build a little hype but the hope is late October or early November for official release. Long term trusted Patrons and a few other folks will be getting the demo in their hands over the next few months and I'll probably pop out a public demo up once we get a bit closer.

With all that coming soon the OG Author downloads will be coming down by this time next week. Letting you know so if you're really fond of it you can make sure you have a version kept for yourself. I'm also not scrubbing it offline or anything silly like that, you'll still be able to get it in my discord if you want, but to help avoid confusion here I'm cleaning things up.

It's going to be a busy rest of 2024 here, I stated in the QnA that I really want to get Unbroken Part 8 out before the year is out so really trying to hit the ground running with this update. On that note time for me to get back to work.

Thank you as always for the support and I hope you have a lovely rest of your week.

Sláinte!
 
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HonoredEx said:
her partner being the 'bike fixing girl that went mia(who we saw gathering info about MC from that hackergirl)'
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Oh, thanks mate. I totally missed that.

HonoredEx said:
What I meant was 'intelligence officer' was just the 'Title on the paper' but she was actually part of some 'assassin hit squad' later on, her partner being the 'bike fixing girl that went mia(who we saw gathering info about MC from that hackergirl)'
So its not JUST that she is a killer but a more MESSED UP sort of killer, she did what 'had to do' to get the job done tho.

EDIT: On a side note, it might be just me, but I prefer more static scenes that make it seem the 'sex' was more varied vs 1-2 animations for that 1 shot,
Like around the room or different positions and game def needs to add more kinks( initiated by the MC please)
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I am with you with everything you said, including static images. BTW, Els shutting the trap trap door and hiding the safe... Things are becoming more and more suspicious. I really hope that Els hasn't done anything to hurt Valentine personally. For the consistency of the story Valentine can forgive, or even not care about anything Els done to other people. However I don't think he can get over a personal betrayal, for example the killing of Zaina. That might even lead to the demise of Valentine if he's on the Els + Infamy route. Though Els keeps telling "he is too important for me" but who knows. Maybe she doesn't know the tie, she doesn't expect Valentine to put things together, or she doesn't expect Valentine to blame her for something happened before they know eachother. Either way, I really don't expect Valentine to forgive her, which would lead into selfdestructive behavior, probably him being very badly injured or even killed, possible in the ring.
 
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