VN Ren'Py STWA: Unbroken [Pt. 7] [STWAdev]

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Walter Victor

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Check In 03/22/2022

Howdy,

Hope everybody is doing well. I believe I mentioned a few weeks ago we'd exceeded 300 patrons over here . The above render is just a little thank you render for getting me to that point. Love y'all. Now on to business.

Have about 27,000 words converted. That's about where I was hoping to be, the goal is to have a first draft entirely finished by then end of the month, then have a few weeks of punch up work. Hoping not exceed 40,000 words this update, but we'll see.

The first 170 or so renders are posed. 93 rendered and about 60 completely done with post.

Nothing else worth noting gamewise this week. I'm going to take a few days and focus on customs and some other renders I need to finish and then hop back into full development this weekend refreshed.

Alright that's it for today. Hope you all have a lovely rest of your week! Thanks as always for the support.

Sláinte!
 

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Sneak Peek 03/27/2022

Just a little look at scenes from this upcoming update. As script begins moving into the final stages it'll be time to move into the more complicated renders. I'm incredibly excited to show you some of the new things I've been working on, but for now these images will have to do.

Thank you as always for the support and I hope you have a safe and lovely upcoming week.
 

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Check In 03/30/2022

Yo,

It's that time again, title screen reveals. This one is a modified version of another render I did that I just loved. So it gets to be included in official capacity.

Have about 35,000 words converted. I'd say that's a pretty passable first draft. Now I'll be spending time looking through seeing if I need to add or cut anything, fix flow. The usual editing nonsense.

Sitting at about 250 renders posed,177 of them completely rendered and put through post. Now that I've finished my first draft I'll be hitting the posing harder. Very excited to get some of these scenes started. This chapter has been one of the ones I've been looking forward to doing since before the game started. I don't want to spoil too much, but I think no matter your waifu there's a little something you'll enjoy.

Nothing more for me today, gonna spend the rest of today finishing up my special render sets and customs for the month.

Hope you all have a lovely rest of your week! Thanks as always for the support.

Sláinte!
 

Walter Victor

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Cosmetic Poll 04/03/2022

An easy little cosmetic poll for you this week. Not going to spoil what for, but you're smart, you can probably figure it out.
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Cosmetic Poll 04/03/2022

An easy little cosmetic poll for you this week. Not going to spoil what for, but you're smart, you can probably figure it out.
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Definitely B that shit screams Amrit
 

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yea b too, c is like she's gonna go jogging on underpants and a isn't bad but looks more beach attire.
 

Crimsonfiend76

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Just finished playing ch.3 and I thought it was excellent except for all the cockblocking between Vi and the MC. Even that shared kiss at the end ultimately was frustrating as it was easily blamed on the alcohol. I honestly hope we can manage to date more than 1 girl at a time because as gorgeous as all the LIs are in general, I cannot choose between Vi and Els. Fingers crossed our dense MC will finally make some real progress with either or both of them in the next update.
 

NukaCola

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Just finished playing ch.3 and I thought it was excellent except for all the cockblocking between Vi and the MC. Even that shared kiss at the end ultimately was frustrating as it was easily blamed on the alcohol. I honestly hope we can manage to date more than 1 girl at a time because as gorgeous as all the LIs are in general, I cannot choose between Vi and Els. Fingers crossed our dense MC will finally make some real progress with either or both of them in the next update.
Kana is more my style. While I like Els appearance the most out of all the girls but I absolutely hate pacifist and vegetarian so she got a big negative point. That leaves Kana and Vi.
 
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Arigon

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Kana is more my style. While I like Els appearance the most out of all the girls I absolutely hate pacifist and vegetarian so she got a big negative point. That leaves Kana and Vi.
Kana and Vi are number 2 and number 1 for me!
 
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Arigon

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Addendum. I agree that Els is absolutely fantastic. Rena as well. Ines.. spectacular. Amrit... how can you not love? It is definitely shaving the cat to get to my favorite here lol.

Now..... I think Charlotte (is that her name? from the author one-best friend of the Author, red head gorgeous buxom Asian doll baby, I think she had Landers as hers in the split of friends... if SHE makes an appearance, fuck.... that is going to make all choices very difficult again, because I adored her in the Author AVN)
 

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Honestly I wasn't aware Els was a vegetarian, which while disappointing isn't a deal-breaker for me...honestly adorable Amrit is right up there with Vi and Els as my favorite LIs...not sure what the possible throuple combinations will be, but I'm already dreading having to choose between my favorites at this point. Given how many times Vi has shot down Ines's offers to share the MC, the only one I can see her possibly share him with would be maybe Amrit, however she does not seem interested in sharing him at all with anyone if possible.

In contrast, Amrit, with all her girl love points would probably be the most obvious willing to share him with another potential girlfriend of her own...who that is remains to be seen, but I don't think Kana's the obvious choice since she clearly has a crush of her own on the MC and her own complicated background... and may prefer a more traditional one-on-one relationship.
 

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Almost a year late to this game but Amrit is my baé, but my waifu aside.
This is an amazing game. Good story telling with good plot with gripping atmosphere and dialogue, Hopefully is stays like this for a long long time. One thing that can be abit overwhelming is the choices.
I must admit without a Walkthrough ill be completely lost, like every couple of lines there is a choice (that I love makes me immersed) but also would had given me anxiety if i didn't know what to pick to go the route i wanted.

But other than that. 10/10
 

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Check In 04/06/2022

Check In time.

This week the star of our title screen is the lovely Amrit, isn't she just a cutie?

Have about 37,000 words converted. Ended up with 42,000 at first, but I've done some trimming to get back down, still want to lose a little more weight on this update, but not too much. Trying to trim to a final draft of 34,000. We'll see.

About 367 renders posed, 350 of them completely rendered and put through post. Wasn't as productive as I'd hoped the past week, but sometimes that happens. Planned myself buffers this dev cycle for just such an occasion so we're doing okay.

Sat down and took a look at what I'll need animation wise this update. Still not 100% sure but looking like I'll have 25-30 animations, depending. We'll see how that looks after we have a final draft.

Alright back to work. Appreciate you all reading my rambling. Thanks as always for the support.

Sláinte!
 

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A full 5-star game, out of 40+ reviews.

That must be some kind of record.
Reviews of games early in their cycle tend to trend positive. I'm sure this has happened in the past. That said I think that this VN easily has earned its reviews and I expect that quality to continue. Honking good VN, I have nothing other than positive things to say about it.
 

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Reviews of games early in their cycle tend to trend positive. I'm sure this has happened in the past. That said I think that this VN easily has earned its reviews and I expect that quality to continue. Honking good VN, I have nothing other than positive things to say about it.
Yes, they do tend to be positive.
But we're not talking 4.7 out of 41 reviews. That's a 5. Perhaps there's one or two 4-star reviews in there but... it's 41 reviews man, not 8. This is spectacular rating for a spectacular game.
 
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