I like this game but some of the writing is a bit hard to understand. I assume you are writing in Russian then translate it to English? maybe ask some to proofread. also during the 3some with Avi her name changes several times in 1 scene, it says ivy and in another Evie. and the constant flip-flopping between he and she is a bit weird.
I do like the story and art however Agnes top looks silly like it's painted onto her oversized boobs. i do like that you brought back the cute blonde this far she is the cutest next to Cody. i could do without the nosering but she is still cute. would happily trade in Wilson or Avaria for her. and this versions ending is such a tease.