- Jul 20, 2021
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Looking at Jack's face, makes me want to punch him right in the face. As the dev nailed the d-bag look on Jack's face.
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- Aug 31, 2019
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IDK man, it's called Sullied Love not Love*sigh*
I-is NTR....
Avoidable?!
- Feb 23, 2023
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SulliedLove-0.15
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There is zero content. Playtime is 5 minutes.
Wait until version 25.9.9 or something before you play. Maybe then there will be some content.
Wait until version 25.9.9 or something before you play. Maybe then there will be some content.
- Jan 13, 2018
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Sending positive vibes to the dev. Good luck!
- Jun 22, 2019
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I figured out who Jack reminds me of
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- Jun 10, 2017
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Verry good update and story goes well but toooooo shorttt bro btw Jack is designed well for to be Bull
btw Jack is designed well for to be Bull
- Nov 1, 2017
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Jack's model is very common in NTR games but it is weird to see him with hair because he usually is bald as Lex Luthor.
110+ renders means that it is 110+ renders. Renders are images. So this tells you something about the length of the update. Say you spend 3 seconds per image, that makes for a bit over 5 minutes.
I am a solo dev new to developing VNs. So I am still getting used to the workflow while juggling with my daytime job :/ But happy to hear you liked itVerry good update and story goes well but toooooo shorttt bro
- May 3, 2018
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Initial takes:
This is a demo, not much content, which is fine. That being said, your pacing is a bit off. It feels like you are going at lightspeed. Slow it down. You're doing what a lot of newer writers do and are having the story told in big info dumps and internal dialogue.
The old saying is show, don't tell. You're telling. Introduce us to the characters more naturally. Show us in their lives.
Example - You straight up tell us the wife was a work driven woman prior to marriage. Instead, maybe have a scene of her and her husband at the café she used to work at. Chatting with her friends, waxing about the good old days, seeming a little disappointed when leaving, being more animated while they are there and more quiet when home, ect.
You can still have a discussion about her having always wanted to keep working, but then we have these prior clues to ready us for it. The information feels earned.
I'll leave off other examples, but you can do something similar with the different PoVs - showing the husband at work, not thinking of his wife left at home, and her PoV is bored, sitting at home, wondering what to do, missing the social interactions of work, ect.
Point being, you go from introducing the MC, to dropping a bunch of info, to meeting the antagonist, to him living there, ect, in about 5 min flat.
That's simply too fast for a good NTR story. You want to introduce the antagonist fairly quick, but not this fast. Build more of a character foundation, then bring him in.
For story stuff, if you've not seen it, I highly recommend checking out sites like Plotrr or Snowflake Pro. These will help you dive deep into the characters and story, plot it all out, and give you pacing recommendations and such.
Anyway, good work getting this out. It's an achievement of it's own to do this much. If you work on the story a bit, I'll def keep an eye on it.
This is a demo, not much content, which is fine. That being said, your pacing is a bit off. It feels like you are going at lightspeed. Slow it down. You're doing what a lot of newer writers do and are having the story told in big info dumps and internal dialogue.
The old saying is show, don't tell. You're telling. Introduce us to the characters more naturally. Show us in their lives.
Example - You straight up tell us the wife was a work driven woman prior to marriage. Instead, maybe have a scene of her and her husband at the café she used to work at. Chatting with her friends, waxing about the good old days, seeming a little disappointed when leaving, being more animated while they are there and more quiet when home, ect.
You can still have a discussion about her having always wanted to keep working, but then we have these prior clues to ready us for it. The information feels earned.
I'll leave off other examples, but you can do something similar with the different PoVs - showing the husband at work, not thinking of his wife left at home, and her PoV is bored, sitting at home, wondering what to do, missing the social interactions of work, ect.
Point being, you go from introducing the MC, to dropping a bunch of info, to meeting the antagonist, to him living there, ect, in about 5 min flat.
That's simply too fast for a good NTR story. You want to introduce the antagonist fairly quick, but not this fast. Build more of a character foundation, then bring him in.
For story stuff, if you've not seen it, I highly recommend checking out sites like Plotrr or Snowflake Pro. These will help you dive deep into the characters and story, plot it all out, and give you pacing recommendations and such.
Anyway, good work getting this out. It's an achievement of it's own to do this much. If you work on the story a bit, I'll def keep an eye on it.
I mean, all the characters kinda look like they're actually aliens in barely-convincing human masks. Sorry, but it's true.
Yeah that is how I really wanted to do. But as you can see how most of them are complaining about the slow pace, I decided to skip all that and introduce all of the stuff, especially since there is only so much I can push in a single update alone.
Maybe it was a bad idea but now that we are already here, I decided to make the rest of the story as natural as possible. Still, thank you for the feedback.
- Dec 21, 2019
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2 months for 40 renders and a tickle fight?
Guess I'll check back in a few decades. Hope I can still get it up by then!
Guess I'll check back in a few decades. Hope I can still get it up by then!