The pacing is bad and the MC is awkward and has no personality. Despite that the game is good overall.
Mike is obnoxious as hell though. I can't stand the guy as it is, I'd gladly shut him up if I could.
Also, Miller helping out the MC with the girls is weird and unwarranted. He's the father figure the MC needs I guess, which is lame, but whatever. I'd rather have Miller leave the MC to his own devices or be able to decline his help. I'm more into independent protagonists who don't need or want help myself though, so maybe that's just me.
Not sure if anyone has addressed this already, but something which makes little sense is how quickly Eve opens up to the MC.
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Mind you, this is their second time talking (the first one shouldn't even count). Sure, Eve is awkward and pretty direct, but you don't disclose that stuff so lightly to a stranger. Maybe she wanted to get it off her chest and she felt like she could trust him. I don't know, just another example of poor pacing to me.