- Dec 7, 2023
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My only complaint about the update was I guess a plot/writing issue. The MC's reaction and choices thereof when Ms Hill tells him she's sending him home are severely lacking. I guess the dev decided to do it this way just to move the plot along, but seriously. The MC was brought to the strip club, not quite against his will but certainly not by choice. The other "responsible adult" told him to come, and then -abandoned- this underage male in a fucking strip club, where an off duty cop (also a "responsible adult") and a hot blonde chick fed him drinks. The thought that Ms Hill could try to place any blame on the MC is rediculous. We should have been given the choice to laugh in her face and reverse the threat. Not neccessarily maliciously, but they'd be in so much more trouble if the MC wanted to make an issue out of it.
There should have been an option to just negate her threat with a counter-threat of NOT shutting up about what happened. I'm sure in the next update or the one after there'll be some other plot reason to not send him home because this was just a plot device, its just not a well reasoned one. But it annoyed me enough that I was further annoyed by not being given choices later to refuse to participate in the class and afternoon activities. If I was in that situation (and for some reason I was keeping my mouth shut about it, but as it is written now I wouldn't be) I'd be a pile of sandbags on the couch, fuck your activities if I'm being sent away for a situation that I was in no way responsible for or had any control over.
There should have been an option to just negate her threat with a counter-threat of NOT shutting up about what happened. I'm sure in the next update or the one after there'll be some other plot reason to not send him home because this was just a plot device, its just not a well reasoned one. But it annoyed me enough that I was further annoyed by not being given choices later to refuse to participate in the class and afternoon activities. If I was in that situation (and for some reason I was keeping my mouth shut about it, but as it is written now I wouldn't be) I'd be a pile of sandbags on the couch, fuck your activities if I'm being sent away for a situation that I was in no way responsible for or had any control over.