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VN Ren'Py Summer Scent [v0.6.4a] [The Naughty Captain]

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The Naughty Captain said:
They accepted the invitation out of curiosity but they were ready to endure a rather unpleasing evening.
And they're not really forgiving her. They accept to talk to her but they won't trust her any soon.
Maybe I wasn't clear enough on these points.
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I don't know. I guess it's down to a few things for me.
1. This happened so soon after the whole drugging thing. You'd think they'd be a little more reluctant to put themselves in that kind of setting. Especially given that the host of the party is supposedly the main instigator of all their school troubles, which means that those present will be people from her clique (aka. people that bullied them, their friends, guys that viewed them as sluts/whores, etc.). It would be slightly more understandable if they had their own small group of friends that would be present (a sort of safety in numbers thing), but from what I gathered, the only friends they had were each other. It just feels risky and potentially dangerous.
2. A "friend" of the girls gave Luke and his brother their address and then suddenly their greatest nemesis invites them to her party (red flags and alarm bells all over the place for me).
3. The "attempted rapists" happen to show up at the party of the nemesis who had been apologizing to them before they showed up (more red flags and alarm bells). It's like the apology was a preemptive strike to avoid any possible suspicion of involvement/conspiracy.

Maybe there's some curiosity to hear this person out, but it being at a party, the whole thing feels staged and insincere. There would be no chance of forgiveness nor a desire to ever associate with that person in the future. I'd try to put the whole thing behind me and move on, going separate ways.

Basically, the timing of events and all the coincidences are just far too coincidental to actually be a coincidence (at least to me).

Then we have this Kelly girl that contacted the brother. She's at a party (undoubtedly the same one the sister is at). He doesn't remember her, yet thinks she's cute (how is this possible. Even if you don't remember or never knew her name it's impossible to forget those you found attractive, lol).
There are a couple of issues here too
1. Why hasn't the brother asked the name of the main instigator(s) of the bullying?
2. Why would the brother not ask them if they remember some girl called Kelly (if the answer to 1 isn't Kelly). If he rejected her, then he could also show them the picture (maybe it's a fake name. It could be a fake pic too, but worth a shot), but if he's going to meet her then he could ask in a sly manner.

Perhaps I'm just reading way too into things.
 
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spooge_nugget said:
I don't know. I guess it's down to a few things for me.
1. This happened so soon after the whole drugging thing. You'd think they'd be a little more reluctant to put themselves in that kind of setting. Especially given that the host of the party is supposedly the main instigator of all their school troubles, which means that those present will be people from her clique (aka. people that bullied them, their friends, guys that viewed them as sluts/whores, etc.). It would be slightly more understandable if they had their own small group of friends that would be present (a sort of safety in numbers thing), but from what I gathered, the only friends they had were each other. It just feels risky and potentially dangerous.
2. A "friend" of the girls gave Luke and his brother their address and then suddenly their greatest nemesis invites them to her party (red flags and alarm bells all over the place for me).
3. The "attempted rapists" happen to show up at the party of the nemesis who had been apologizing to them before they showed up (more red flags and alarm bells). It's like the apology was a preemptive strike to avoid any possible suspicion of involvement/conspiracy.

Maybe there's some curiosity to hear this person out, but it being at a party, the whole thing feels staged and insincere. There would be no chance of forgiveness nor a desire to ever associate with that person in the future. I'd try to put the whole thing behind me and move on, going separate ways.

Basically, the timing of events and all the coincidences are just far too coincidental to actually be a coincidence (at least to me).

Then we have this Kelly girl that contacted the brother. She's at a party (undoubtedly the same one the sister is at). He doesn't remember her, yet thinks she's cute (how is this possible. Even if you don't remember or never knew her name it's impossible to forget those you found attractive, lol).
There are a couple of issues here too
1. Why hasn't the brother asked the name of the main instigator(s) of the bullying?
2. Why would the brother not ask them if they remember some girl called Kelly (if the answer to 1 isn't Kelly). If he rejected her, then he could also show them the picture (maybe it's a fake name. It could be a fake pic too, but worth a shot), but if he's going to meet her then he could ask in a sly manner.

Perhaps I'm just reading way too into things.
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I'll just say that you'll have to wait for V0.4 to see some of these issues solved. :p
 
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The Naughty Captain said:
There are undeniably some parts I could rewrite to make things more understandable or more plausible. Like the anger of Cassie in the first breakfast scene. I'm thinking of adding a couple more paragraphs in day 1 and day 2 to define characters more precisely. It may help the player understanding their behavior and their decisions.



Just like Eve, Cassie is inexperienced. So we could say that her dom side is also somehow new to her. She's trying it. And it's also something she's hiding.
I have a nice backstory about Cassie that could give some insight on how she became the person she is in Summer Scent but I'm not sure I can find a place to tell it in the game. Maybe in a bonus episode if there is interest in an absolutely no porn, young Cassie, psychodrama.

The surprise was intended, tho :p
I hoped the player would expect a submissive path for Cassie.
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I'm not trying to tell you how to do anything and I apologize for that if it sounded that way. I maybe am the one in the dark about something involving the characters that others may know? It just feels really unlikely that a scenario like that would play out how it has. I do like it so far, I'm just having a hard time believing events unfolding like this with no context as to how we got to the point we do in the game on the girls side of things. I don't know, maybe I'm being a bit overzealous about how the brother is only pushing through while the girls kind of just are? Thanks for responding though! :D
 
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The Naughty Captain Eh apologies if asked, but will lust path lead to only superficial sex or permanently being with a girl or is love path for that only? Also will lust path have more naughty moments than love path?
If you can divulge this to us of course.

Thx
 
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a1fox3 said:
The Naughty Captain :love:

Since I been on this site a little over 2 years 4 months this is the 2nd time a VN has brought tears to my eyes.
The first one was Katawa Shoujo on the Emi path https://f95zone.to/threads/katawa-shoujo-four-leaf-studios.4276/page-14

Romance path for the sister.:love:(y):love:

Please keep it up.

My 3 main fetishes are:
Incest.
Kissing.
Pregnancy.

hope to see all in this one.
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I'll do my best :p


aidenboy said:
I'm not trying to tell you how to do anything and I apologize for that if it sounded that way. I maybe am the one in the dark about something involving the characters that others may know? It just feels really unlikely that a scenario like that would play out how it has. I do like it so far, I'm just having a hard time believing events unfolding like this with no context as to how we got to the point we do in the game on the girls side of things. I don't know, maybe I'm being a bit overzealous about how the brother is only pushing through while the girls kind of just are? Thanks for responding though! :D
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You don't have to apologize.
My story certainly needs some suspension of disbelief but it could also use some more details on some points, to make it more believable and more understandable. I'm taking notes of things to improve and I'll probably rewrite some parts in a future half update. It may not make a big difference for you who have already played the game, but I hope it'll make the game better for players to come.


Qmil679 said:
I played with a love patch and had no sex. Which patch is sex in?
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There is no "sex" for now.
But Eve Sub path is probably what you're looking for.

MrKnobb said:
The Naughty Captain Eh apologies if asked, but will lust path lead to only superficial sex or permanently being with a girl or is love path for that only? Also will lust path have more naughty moments than love path?
If you can divulge this to us of course.

Thx
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I won't spoil.
But I don't think submission is necessarily superficial.
I'll try to have an equivalent amount of H-scenes for each path. If one path sees more action, it won't be by much.
Of course, it also depends on your definition "naughty moments" :p
 
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a1fox3 said:
My 3 main fetishes are:
Incest.
Kissing.
Pregnancy.
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Yes and Yes again. It's really frustrating how kissing/making out is so lacking in a lot of games and a decent game with incestual pregnancy is a rare thing indeed (compared to the number of incest games).

Vainglorious said:
Is kissing a fetish now?
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Funnily enough, with the amount of focus that kissing/making out has in a lot of games it could be considered a rather marginalized one. I've played a few where the MC is banging the girls without ever having kissed them and they're not even prostitutes.
Don't get me wrong. I'm all for the banging (I wouldn't be on this site otherwise), but I like the relationship building, kissing/making out, etc., as it gives at least a little realism to it (I'm one of the ones that's interested in/reads the story and not just focused on the payoff). The relationship building can also be massively overdone and some devs just keep stringing people along and blue-balling them to milk it for all it's worth. It can be difficult to find a decent balance.
 
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Damn! Really nice game so far... I really like the dominace stuff hehe and when each choise has an effect on the game and the personality of the girls are really well made too :)
 
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