VN Ren'Py Abandoned Summer's Gone [S1 Steam + DLC] [Oceanlab]

[Ottoeight]

Vic does says Maja thought Melanie was behind the accident. So perhaps that's how people reached the conclusion Maja was referring to Melanie during the hospital scene.

And that's the final word on this quarrel: Maja was talking about Melanie.

She wasn't referring to Marla, because:

1) when she said those words, she didn't know anything about the car accident, except that an accident happened and Vic was injured; after she tells it, she asks MC what happened.

2) Maja told it herself Vic later.


Anyway, Ocean said he's going to rewrite the "gun accident" scene with Marla. You can bet your ass that Marla will NOT draw a gun anymore. Not sure whether it's in this upcoming 0.5 beta or in the full 0.5 update.

 

[Ottoeight]

So... when you get that person asking a question that was answered 3 posts before, I'll think of the above and I remember a favorite response from a roommate in college when someone would do something Very stupid or ask him a Very stupid question:

Did your mother have any children who lived?

What a nice fellow. I bet he/she/it has a lot of friends.

 

[Capt_Kirk]

This is the whole problem that Ocean cannot fix. The only way is to remove all the options from Wiab, but then it will no longer be a game, but comics. By the way, this is one of the reasons why people tell Ocean to make games one at a time; he can’t handle 2 at the same time.

Ocean is committing a writers cardinal sin !.
he's writing 2 intertwine stories without establishing the world and rules and which both stories lives on .
for me he has a few options to get out of the corner he's getting into:
#1 he puts SG on hold and finish WIAB ,so he can establish the world and characters and decisions that will affect SG.
#2 he make SG as it's own thing , without any attachment to WIAB .

and please for the love of any mythological being ! , stop rewriting SG ! .
since Ocean started SG , he's going thru the third iteration of SG (original writing , remake writing , rewriting) .

 

[Uriel ☁]

It seems quite clear to me Maja was talking about MC's ramblings when Vic was on the ground.

Marla heard them and pulled a gun on him. Afterwards he fled the scene, Marla had to explain what happened to the police and the police told it to Maja.

 

[Ottoeight]

It seems quite clear to me Maja was talking about MC's ramblings when Vic was on the ground.

Marla heard them and pulled a gun on him. Afterwards he fled the scene, Marla had to explain what happened to the police and the police told it to Maja.

What can I tell you, I guess F95 users love imagining scenes and events in VNs that never happened. Just tell me what makes you think that the police talked to Maja before MC and Nami entered Vic's hospital room.

 

[Alexanderson037500aa]

What can I tell you, I guess F95 users love imagining scenes and events in VNs that never happened. Just tell me what makes you think that the police talked to Maja before MC and Nami entered Vic's hospital room.

Why wouldn't the police talk to Maja? I mean, how do you even think Maja got informed about Victoria's accident?

 

[F.L.HX99X]

Do you guys think this is Melanie? Her skin tone and hair seems familiar from the little girl in the flashback story Mila told us.

 

[Uriel ☁]

What can I tell you, I guess F95 users love imagining scenes and events in VNs that never happened. Just tell me what makes you think that the police talked to Maja before MC and Nami entered Vic's hospital room.

Such a weird hill to choose to die on.

First of all panicked Marla calls the police instead of an ambulance.

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It's then the police that actually calls the ambulance. So the police is already involved and they'll take Marla's version, which will certainly include the weird kid that she perceived threatened Vic.

After the incident MC goes home, Nojiko tells him to bring Vic's wallet to her at the hospital during breakfast. Then he goes sleeping and only after he goes to the hospital with Nami.

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So there's plenty of time for Maja to reach the hospital and be informed of what happened. Because that's the first thing people ask in that situations and there'll be the police there to explain it to her.

 

[Ottoeight]

Why wouldn't the police talk to Maja? I mean, how do you even think Maja got informed about Victoria's accident?

So there's plenty of time for Maja to reach the hospital and be informed of what happened. Because that's the first thing people ask in that situations and there'll be the police there to explain it to her.

Did you see it?
does any character talk about it?
do you see any cop somewhere after the accident?
isn't MC a witness?
do you see any cop questioning MC about the accident?
does anyone in the story ever talk about the cops questioning anyone about Vic's car accident?

The only thing we know is that Maja asks MC what happened.

This is not reality. This is a work of fiction, guys: if you readers/audience don't see a thing happen / don't see a character tell a thing happened, IT DID NOT HAPPEN.

 

[Alexanderson037500aa]

Did you see it?
does any character talk about it?
do you see any cop somewhere after the accident?
isn't MC a witness?
do you see any cop questioning MC about the accident?
does anyone in the story ever talk about the cops questioning anyone about Vic's car accident?

The only thing we know is that Maja asks MC what happened.

This is not reality. This is a work of fiction, guys: if you readers/audience don't see a thing happen / don't see a character tell a thing happened, IT DID NOT HAPPEN.

So do you have any proof that the police didn't talk with Maja?

 

[BobTheDuck]

What can I tell you, I guess F95 users love imagining scenes and events in VNs that never happened. Just tell me what makes you think that the police talked to Maja before MC and Nami entered Vic's hospital room.

Well, because the police were there because Marla called them instead of the ambulance. At that point Vic has lost consciousness, Nika takes her purse with her ID. So Vic has to have regained consciousness to even mention who they can contact. Nika gets home and goes to sleep before going to the hospital, and Vic is already out of emergency:

As Vic pretty much has to be conscious for anyone to tell Maja where she is because she doesn't have id, who knows if it was while the police were on the scene and they contacted Maja? If Vic regained consciousness at the accident, they'd probably ask about a contact or address. It's not unlikely and no more likely than the hospital having recognised Vic by her dental records while she's unconscious, especially as it's later that day after Nika has slept. If it was the police were who informed Maja to go to the hospital, they definitely spoke with Maja before she got there.

The scene's being reworked anyway, so who knows if that dialogue is even relevant, once the cinematic replaces it. My feeling is this wasn't a who dunnit moment, it's just a way to show that Maja is intensely stressed by the situation.

 

[Acsuka]

 

[rudy007]

Brothers, I've been holding off on playing the game because of the reworks, and stuff...Just to check: Can I come back and replay the whole game as of yet, or are there going to be more reworks to previous chapters still?

Not yet. Wait for chapter 5 full (not beta, in beta rework isn't finished)... There will be only new episodes after that. This is last rework...

 

[JJ1960]

Did you see it?
does any character talk about it?
do you see any cop somewhere after the accident?
isn't MC a witness?
do you see any cop questioning MC about the accident?
does anyone in the story ever talk about the cops questioning anyone about Vic's car accident?

The only thing we know is that Maja asks MC what happened.

This is not reality. This is a work of fiction, guys: if you readers/audience don't see a thing happen / don't see a character tell a thing happened, IT DID NOT HAPPEN.

Also, every character is going to die soon because we don't actually see them ever piss or take a dump. Eventually they will each swell up and up until there is a catastrophic and horribly messy explosion. Maybe that's what actually happened to Summer and MC witnessed it, thus his emotional trauma.

 

[m111m123]

Ocean is committing a writers cardinal sin !.
he's writing 2 intertwine stories without establishing the world and rules and which both stories lives on .
for me he has a few options to get out of the corner he's getting into:
#1 he puts SG on hold and finish WIAB ,so he can establish the world and characters and decisions that will affect SG.

I agree with you. I think Ocean should have made Wiab and after it was completed, started making SG. If we pause work on the SG and focus only on Wiab, then this option has 2 serious problems. The first problem is that SG has a completed story, but Wiab does not. Then Ocean will have to do 2 times more work; in the beginning he will have to do Wiab and then redo the SG. The second problem is money, SG gives 3.5 times more money than Wiab. Without SG, Ocean will lose almost all his money.

#2 he make SG as it's own thing , without any attachment to WIAB .

I think Ocean will try to implement this option if it is not possible to combine these 2 games.

and please for the love of any mythological being ! , stop rewriting SG ! .

Ocean said that there would be no more rework. There are a couple of characters in the game that will be remade anyway.

 

[BobTheDuck]

Also, every character is going to die soon because we don't actually see them ever piss or take a dump. Eventually they will each swell up and up until there is a catastrophic and horribly messy explosion. Maybe that's what actually happened to Summer and MC witnessed it, thus his emotional trauma.

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[PickerLewd]

Also, every character is going to die soon because we don't actually see them ever piss or take a dump. Eventually they will each swell up and up until there is a catastrophic and horribly messy explosion. Maybe that's what actually happened to Summer and MC witnessed it, thus his emotional trauma.

You can actually take Vic to the toilet and stay while she pees, so she lives .

 

[Ottoeight]

You can actually take Vic to the toilet and stay while she pees, so she lives .

They have shower, too. Lots of showers. Maybe when they're in the shower...

 

[yossa999]

Also, every character is going to die soon because we don't actually see them ever piss or take a dump. Eventually they will each swell up and up until there is a catastrophic and horribly messy explosion. Maybe that's what actually happened to Summer and MC witnessed it, thus his emotional trauma.

Now it's getting more and more suspicious. I mean, before the rework, Nami peed once and the MC witnessed it. But after the rework, she performed a strange dance instead of peeing. Something is happening.

 

[soprano31]

I miss Nina !!!

you misspelled the name of the one and only,
most important,cutest redheaded love angel !!