- Apr 1, 2019
- 518
- 995
I was going to give 10, uh, 5 stars to this VN but I take one off because of the MC's face, or rather his hair. Would he have put his fingers in a 400V outlet? Would he have a micro tornado above his head that follows him constantly? How does he comb his hair (or not) in the morning when he wakes up? In other NVs, MCs look a lot more believable and a lot less wacky. Why does the DEV massacre this poor MC, who is otherwise very well made of himself? Why don't the females around him shear him while he sleeps? DEV, please, without styling him like a Marine, give him a haircut that isn't so ridiculous ...




