Chasmalim seems like the second visit from Enlil may be bugged - unless we're also somehow missing the step to force the trigger (hint says it will happen automatically).
Side note: I LOVE the re-work, the story has come together really well, and your artwork is superb as always (really dig the massive futa loads - keep that up). There is a minor story discrepancy that I noticed (aside from the bug):
At the beginning of the game when the MC gets their cherry popped by the mysterious stranger, and your sister/roommate wakes you up the next day; you have her mentioning that she herself is a virgin. And then later on when she meets Delyla the MC says something along the lines of her sister/roommate having multiple dicks already but probably not a horse-cock. Like I said, something minor, but it's an opportunity to straighten the story up, or sell it that the MC gets to watch Delyla pop her sister/roommates cherry etc.