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Ahh, now I understand. Let me explain my logic a bit for the redo. The futa that the MC get's banged by is not a demon, but she is also not human. The player and the MC won't find out till later that her name is Iblis, yeah "that" iblis. And iblis is responsible for all this stuff. Aleister Crowley getting the original book, the queen getting turned into a demon and the events to come. The idea is that she doesn't like humans and has been finding creative ways to pervert the species since the beginning of time and has been working behind the scenes the whole time. The demons don't even realize they are being manipulated here either. but that's the reason for the change, just adding a little bit of character and complexity to the story.I mean in the original she was into occult stuff and that got her into trouble. The randomness of the initial encounter and MCs lack of connection with occultic is in my opinion less interesting. She feels like a victim this time rather than an adventurous person who got into trouble because she was too curious. I can see you've put in a lot of effort though and all props to you plus a lot of great additions i just like MC's to have a bit more agency. Also no way don't tone down the language that shit is hilarious.
Sorry should have warned you guys, "Spoilers". lol.