wordwolf

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I love Mr Dots' games, but this was his crappiest update ever. There's too many girls in this game, and that leaves too many opportunities to be bogged down with girls/subplots you have no interest in whatsoever.

Its GREAT that his games take it slow, I enjoy the buildup and "tease", but there was barely any of that at all between the main characters this chapter. Dreams and Fantasy scenes and Voyeur Vision dont cut it. I'd have been fine if there wasn't any "action" if there was at least more tension building between the two characters, but I swear I spent the whole update text skipping with the control button and then the one scene with any content was a tertiary girl that I have absolutely no interest in.

Here's hoping he narrows the focus going forward to Sis, Ashley and the cousin
 

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Well she definitely wants to do it with someone else
Well shit, I’m a few hundred miles from any computer and was initially excited for this update. Seeing that I guess I’m done until we can break up with her. I’m not anti-open relationships in a game but this comes across as her way of justifying having sex with someone else. I’d much rather that we were given the option of a clean break.
 

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Well shit, I’m a few hundred miles from any computer and was initially excited for this update. Seeing that I guess I’m done until we can break up with her. I’m not anti-open relationships in a game but this comes across as her way of justifying having sex with someone else. I’d much rather that we were given the option of a clean break.
Other than that, is the game ok? Even for a picky fuck like me?
 

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Well shit, I’m a few hundred miles from any computer and was initially excited for this update. Seeing that I guess I’m done until we can break up with her. I’m not anti-open relationships in a game but this comes across as her way of justifying having sex with someone else. I’d much rather that we were given the option of a clean break.
I'm starting to feel the same way.
This forced open relationship just seems like a way of avoiding a NTR tag. (if people want an optional open relationship, that is fine, but we have no choice, unless we want to remain faithful)
 

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I may remind: Even Nicole mentiones as rule "not to inform ANY details" - so there is also no way to "hide" NTR behind that.
 

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Other than that, is the game ok? Even for a picky fuck like me?
Too early to say, honestly. The dev splits his time between two games and though they are both very well done this one feels more like it is stalling and less like it is developing the characters. I’m still interested in seeing where it goes but my initial excitement has begun to wane. Perhaps in a couple more updates, this doesn’t grab your attention as much as other games I like better.
 
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Joshua Tree

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Wait. What? So, the dev is hiding NTR by calling it something else?
Well you can agree with her terms, or you can disagree. So the choice is all yours. If you agree to a open relationship, you can't very well go rage about ntr on top...
 
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I love Mr Dots' games, but this was his crappiest update ever. There's too many girls in this game, and that leaves too many opportunities to be bogged down with girls/subplots you have no interest in whatsoever.

Its GREAT that his games take it slow, I enjoy the buildup and "tease", but there was barely any of that at all between the main characters this chapter. Dreams and Fantasy scenes and Voyeur Vision dont cut it. I'd have been fine if there wasn't any "action" if there was at least more tension building between the two characters, but I swear I spent the whole update text skipping with the control button and then the one scene with any content was a tertiary girl that I have absolutely no interest in.

Here's hoping he narrows the focus going forward to Sis, Ashley and the cousin
I agree, i barely ever start text skipping unless the game im playing is a borefest but the amount of text in this is absurd compared to the "action scenes". Story is just developing way too slowly IMO.
 

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You guys notice the game said Sophia was marrying Melody? Dude just wrecked two games with this update lol
READ correctly:
Sofia, a friend of Melody, is marrying a woman - there is nowhere told that she marries Melody
 
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I finished the update. Standing by my original point that whoever is writing this has no idea how normal people actually talk to each other. Also, there's an INORDINATE amount of stalling. This game is dragging its heels everywhere it goes, and with the amount of characters that've been introduced it could take years before we get anywhere. That's not even mentioning how the dev splits their time between two games.

I wasn't impressed with Melody for how much pointless dialogue there was. This one looks like it's going the same route, only with 5x more characters.

Not holding my breath on this one, tbh.
 
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