I think our experiences might be a little bit different in that case, but I think there are arguments for both sides and I agree with your point to an extent. Either way, it turns out that the writers are native English speakers, so I have no idea why they wouldn't be able to write more natural sounding dialogue.Being all formal and correct is a sign of not being a native speaker usually. You get an education with all the rules and formalities, and you'll be sticking to that unless for some reason the less formal version of the language influenced you. Whenever I met with native speakers, what I was taught, and what I experienced with them was vastly different. This also happened with me when I exchanged official business letters with a dude from Texas, I was thought how to write a proper business letter in school, and yet those letters looked nothing like that. If I were to give it as a sample to my teacher, I'd probably gotten a C minus for it.
Don't mind as long as he will not touch my "Sis" I'll even give Nicole to him for that in exchange for Step-mom and SisConsidering the father is getting more action (if you got the flashback this episode), it should be called "Watching my Father"
This would also prepare us for the reason that Ashley left, and what Nicole is up to.![]()
The problem lies in the writing skill in general more than the lack of language skill imo, something that is common when it comes to a Dots game.I think our experiences might be a little bit different in that case, but I think there are arguments for both sides and I agree with your point to an extent. Either way, it turns out that the writers are native English speakers, so I have no idea why they wouldn't be able to write more natural sounding dialogue.
Melody really wasn't better after two updates ...Mrdots is getting soft lately... Melody was way better... i hope this is just the beginning and it's gonna change soon.
Well I do like the art, fetishes should also be right in my wheelhouse, but still I get the feeling this game will not be for me after playing the start. It does not feel like this game will have any burn, just adding and removing roadblocks whenever the teams want to remove them and adding new ones likely with a stairway to heaven progression to sex when finally there. Most likely I will be bored out of my mind when get there, for a slow burn you need development in characters that make sense over time and I see no characters to be developed here, only typecasted roles. Pity.Melody really wasn't better after two updates ...
Some text issues from the early scenes for Jeff Steel et al.HearszAM and whoever proof read this must have been having an off month, because alongside some stilted writing the text is riddled with errors...
Story & dialogues boring as hell. No sex and no erotic engagement. I'm supposed to be aroused, not bored, damnit!
Big failure.
These games are supposed to be erotic visual novels, you know.
I think you don't know what erotic is, this ist not only fuck theThese games are supposed to be erotic visual novels, you know.