I think our experiences might be a little bit different in that case, but I think there are arguments for both sides and I agree with your point to an extent. Either way, it turns out that the writers are native English speakers, so I have no idea why they wouldn't be able to write more natural sounding dialogue.
Don't mind as long as he will not touch my "Sis" I'll even give Nicole to him for that in exchange for Step-mom and SisConsidering the father is getting more action (if you got the flashback this episode), it should be called "Watching my Father"
This would also prepare us for the reason that Ashley left, and what Nicole is up to.
The problem lies in the writing skill in general more than the lack of language skill imo, something that is common when it comes to a Dots game.
Well I do like the art, fetishes should also be right in my wheelhouse, but still I get the feeling this game will not be for me after playing the start. It does not feel like this game will have any burn, just adding and removing roadblocks whenever the teams want to remove them and adding new ones likely with a stairway to heaven progression to sex when finally there. Most likely I will be bored out of my mind when get there, for a slow burn you need development in characters that make sense over time and I see no characters to be developed here, only typecasted roles. Pity.
Some text issues from the early scenes for Jeff Steel et al.
These games are supposed to be erotic visual novels, you know.
Likely just a difference in preferences.
Like I said, I also get the feeling there are just typecasted chars in the game instead of characters and drama overkill just to keep things slow. There is actually no reason within the game or the characters that means bro and sis could not have slept together in the very first episode if MC just would have admitted to remembering the promise. Now we all know that first at least 4 or 5 unnecessary drama plots will have to be taken away before they will, but that has nothing to do with the characters or their story. Too many unneeded blockers instead of real development, where the BF and the GF are two major examples of and neither plays a real meaningful role in the game. The GF is just a bit more loving and better looking version of the father and Brody ....... It is like watching a soap and getting back to it three years later, all kinda things have happened but nothing really happened except the chars are three years older and you missed nothing and can get back into it in 5 mins.
