Ren'Py Abandoned Supervillainy [v0.4.1] [Pupsi]

[King_222]

A promising game!
I love this "super heroine corruption" genre, so I can't wait for the next release.

It's a bit confusing at first, but once you understand you have to actually roam the city every hour to get events, it's dead simple ! Albeit a bit monotonous imo but this isn't the biggest issue I have with this game.

The biggest issue right now is just how petty the initial trigger event is.
It's hard to feel empathy to a guy that became a vilain simply because he applied to the wrong university.

If Dev would be to re-do the opening so the MC gets a real reason to rebel...

Spoiler: in-game event

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it would be a lot more appealling to everyone, I'm sure.

Cheers!

 

[idshadow]

yeah underage boy protagonist i don´t understand why this is a thing but maybe this is popular

 

[AlisaB]

I only hope that the Mind Control doesn't end up as a cheep gimmick to get sex, and then its quickly forgotten once the protagonist gets what he wants.
There are few stories where Mind Control is properly used in stories, where its a constant element in the plot, and a integral part of the tale, I hate when Mind Control is used as just a cheep easy way to get a sex scene, it can be so much more than that, hell, any competent villain can rule over a city with such power if used correctly.

Seems like your typical "mind control-as-easy-way-for-sex scenes" type of game without any nuance. Actually it might be worse since brainwashing makes them dumber.

yeah, but the issue with that is that it requires a lot of time and good writing skills, mind control is usually the "easy" way out of any situation, unless he has a really creative writer and doesnt want to go the also simply "blackmailing" route, it doesnt really matter tbh

Mind control genre allows for some of the most creative scenarios imaginable and require decent writing to execute well. Its just that most most Patreon porn devs go for the easiest, most braindead variant of mind control - *ZAP* "Youre my slave now! Lets have normal, vanilla sex while you act like mindless doll/crazy slut!"

 

[whiite]

Are we counting inanimate objects as NTR now?
What's next, feeling NTR'd by a girl masturbating because it's not the MC's fingers?

My right hand sometimes gets NTR'd by my left hand

 

[Fear375]

Superheroes are always cool! How can you not love girls wrapped in latex, and even with super strength. A win-win option))

 

[Roosta]

Looks great, I'll keep an eye on it!

Also I would like to see Raven on this one!

 

[whiite]

Spoiler: My rant on Demo version of the game.

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I won't review this before it has had more updates, since this is just a demo, but I really hope this gets better and more streamlined and requires less than 10+ annoying clicks between each scene. And that the protagonist becomes less of an idiot. Currently this is the worst kind of "open world" or "sandbox" game. Dumb grinds. Dumb time system. Etc.
I like the premise and the models of the girls, so I wish the Developer luck.

 

[Londo_Mollari]

Wow, that looks so extremely promising ... there are sooo few game that feature humiliation / rape of powerful heroines ...

 

[asdcv]

Lotta negativity here, but this is the best 3d mc game since due process (hopefully this won't be canceled like that game).

 

[Ruff Ryder]

Is that a reference on Ray Allen?
You know... "If you can't beat them, join them" just the opposite.

 

[dolfe67]

Spoiler: My rant on Demo version of the game.

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I won't review this before it has had more updates, since this is just a demo, but I really hope this gets better and more streamlined and requires less than 10+ annoying clicks between each scene. And that the protagonist becomes less of an idiot. Currently this is the worst kind of "open world" or "sandbox" game. Dumb grinds. Dumb time system. Etc.
I like the premise and the models of the girls, so I wish the Developer luck.

The MC is a kid, what did you expect ?

 

[paust.alex]

The MC is a kid, what did you expect ?

That doesn't excuse him from being stupid.

 

[whiite]

The MC is a kid, what did you expect ?

If he was acting like a kid all the time, it would make sense and be believable.

But he is literally an omega genius. Like Tony Stark or something.
Building all those scifi gadgets in a single day.
Making AI and robots from scratch.
Inventing a super-power nullifying chair.

Yet he is written like a moron in dialogue. He couldn't even see that a 4-5 meter drop was too far. I mean, it just doesn't make sense, and ruins the immersion.

 

[Dipsode]

If he was acting like a kid all the time, it would make sense and be believable.

But he is literally an omega genius. Like Tony Stark or something.
Building all those scifi gadgets in a single day.
Making AI and robots from scratch.
Inventing a super-power nullifying chair.

Yet he is written like a moron in dialogue. He couldn't even see that a 4-5 meter drop was too far. I mean, it just doesn't make sense, and ruins the immersion.

This is usually called Asperger's syndrome.

 

[pbam]

Looks really promising. Guess I'll see you guys in a year or two when or IF there's more content.

 

[whiite]

This is usually called Asperger's syndrome.

If it is explained that he is suffering from that, then fine.

 

[Dipsode]

If it is explained that he is suffering from that, then fine.

A priori, most superheroes and super villains are Asperger's... Very gifted in one area and almost incoherent in the rest... Otherwise he wouldn't be so successful, I think, you don't get attached to someone who is perfect .

But is this the place to discuss psychology and psychiatry?

 

[paust.alex]

If he was acting like a kid all the time, it would make sense and be believable.

But he is literally an omega genius. Like Tony Stark or something.
Building all those scifi gadgets in a single day.
Making AI and robots from scratch.
Inventing a super-power nullifying chair.

Yet he is written like a moron in dialogue. He couldn't even see that a 4-5 meter drop was too far. I mean, it just doesn't make sense, and ruins the immersion.

I think it's a cliche to stretch the plot - a dumb genius. For example, there is the anime "Death Note", where the main character is a real genius, the best student of Japan, but he is stupid as a fuck, but if he wasn't so stupid, the anime would have ended in 1 episode.

 

[Ruff Ryder]

I'd say solid start.
The MC is too dumb, annoying and childish to be a real villain.
A villain's biggest strength are his intelligence and his brutality. Right now MC lacks both, even though he raped Stardust.

Since this is a demo, then you better change the MC to a more mature (both looks and mind, around 25 and not 15) person and to make him mor intelligent. I know good grades don't tell you much about our intelligence but how can he be this dumb and ask Bat Girl about the Batcave and her real name? It would be possible to ask her that once he corrupted her. Or the fact that he jumped from the second floor to fight Stardust.

And since this is an open world game, you'll have to rely on ingame hints, since there'll be too many actions to do.

So basically:

More mature MC in both his body and his behaviour.
Make him actually intelligent. The more the better, to make him even more dangerous and serious.
Keep the in-game hints, to make it easier for the player to know what to do.

Also why did we have to buy that many extra rooms if we didn't have a use for them. It's better to only buy a new one if we need it.

I'll keep that game in mind and if the first update of the real story gets an improvement at least on the intelligence and behaviour of the MC, then I'll definetily support you dev! Because even though there were many issues, the game still looks very good in terms of graphics and interface. The animations are solid. They're 'aight. Also I like all the heroines, although I'm afraid there could be some cpyright issues since you obviosuly used real DC and Marvel heroes and heroines.

 

[abiorigins]

It has been long since i played such as this game. gonna keep my eyes on it.