Hey Phil (SLG-Dev),
People have commented on the Jada options scene and you have responded so I'll say no more. I stopped there and have deleted the game. As others have said, maybe wait and come back to the game sometime in the future particularly if you may rewrite that section. One final comment, the conversations are stilted and not natural. It is like they are written in another language then put through a translator (apologies if this issues has been stated previously). Personally this puts me off a game but I will often preserve because even though I may not financially support that developer I recognise they have put in a lot of effort into the game and have far more creativity than I. So good luck as you move forward with your story.
PS I was going to message you through Discord but I needed your 4 digit number and as a noob I didn't know where or how to find it.
Hello,
thank you for the nice comment, and with it you hit the nail on the head.
As most people know, my mother tongue is not english, I am german and I have the following options:
Make the game in german
Means that the text will be more natural or
To write the texts in german and then translate them.
Here often, one or the other thing falls away because I do not really know how I should express myself.
For the next update I'm rewdoing the beginning of the prologue and I'm now also working with someone whose native language is english, but since he doesn't speak german I'm curious how the communication will work
But I think there will be a strong improvement
Of course, the translator can not save everything, which is why I have been working intensively on learning character building since the release of 0.18. Here I will try to work out the individual figures better to breathe more life inside.
to Jada:
Like Mel, Jada is a controversial character. What many don't like, I actually like quite a bit. She is not meant to be liked.
Here I have to work out the options
clearly better, and I will, when I revise Mel's first chapter.
In the last 2 weeks I've made good progress, the new graphics card lets me implement much better what I have in mind. I've attached a few pictures here maybe you can see the improvements
Something that may not be noticeable to you but was very important to me was Victoria ported from a Genesis 3 char to a Gensesis 8.1 char
I will be online all day today so if you have more questions or ideas, just let me know
Greetings
Phil