- Thread starter PropaJack
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I thought it was something like that. I can understand the writing but it sounds really strange to a native speaker. You could maybe try looking for a proof reader on the recruitment section. https://f95zone.to/forums/recruitment-services.117/
I look forward to seeing what you guys do some of the routes for Raven. She sounds quite interesting going with what the other characters mention about her. The Idea of the MC dominating someone as dangerous as her sounds really sexy to me.
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I am happy for both of you. Make the game you like and you will eventually get the support you need
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Sorry, but no, that line is in Latin. Why? No clue.
On the rest of your review I agree 100%.
PropaJack this user's review is quite good, it should be taken in account.
Also: Muito bom de ver conteúdo em Português. (Very nice to see content in Portuguese)
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Sure, why notNice
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Futa ntr finally! these two fetishes together are harder to find than diamonds!
On all seriousness really looking forward to the futa banging the girls on the ntr route I always love me some futa on female action plus she got a nice cock size I like it.
On all seriousness really looking forward to the futa banging the girls on the ntr route I always love me some futa on female action plus she got a nice cock size I like it.
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To clarify, will there also be a path with just male on futa? I'd rather not be on the receiving end
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There will be a futa free path(free of sex I mean. The character will be there, but she wont fuck the MC).To clarify, will there also be a path with just male on futa? I'd rather not be on the receiving end
Edit: read post #74
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Thank you so much for the feedback! that's what I want, things to help me to make it better!
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Looks like some people wanted the mc fuck Raven. Well, we can do it on the vanilla route.
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your explanation for the writing i can see it making sense now. i understand the risk in making things too boring at the start but there are creative and fun ways of getting that needed context across without a long introduction/backstory. you seem to have a lot of lore and hidden plot behind your characters so you just need to know how to insert it in an interesting and engaging way.
thanks for such a sincere response as well
take your time and it will all come together, there seems to be a few who like the game already - and continue to make it how you want without feeling like the players are pressuring you to change things you like (of course within reason you can listen). good luck
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Writing and translation is rough but passable. Lighting is terrible in some scenes.
Why put shots on the OP that are so dark we can't see anything? Way too little or way too much light, seems to be the theme so far.
Why put shots on the OP that are so dark we can't see anything? Way too little or way too much light, seems to be the theme so far.
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I'm happy it will be an option. While I like futa I only like male on futa. Right now Raven seemed the most interesting character to me. I like how the other prisoners are terrified of her and she is obviously really dangerous. While at the same time she seems to have a softer side, since she mentored and looked after the MC. I like characters that have those kind of differences.
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She does indeed, but is hidden after a terrible life of isolation and abandoned. On the vanilla route, she will be more open and more kind to MC and girls.
There will be 3 ways to experience sex scenes on the vanilla route:
Without Raven entirely if you dont like futa, with her fucking MC but in a romantic way instead of dominant one, and with MC fucking her.
For those who are going to think that is too much, the vanilla route will be almost identical in every one of this options regarding plot(maybe some very small variations), is just the sexual part that will be different.
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The same goes to the domination route, just some small differences on plot depending on where the story is.
With Raven(futa on male), and without her(but there will be futa on female, just no futa on male).
Her character will always be around because of how important her character is to the overall plot, but sexual content will be choosable.
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Thanks for clarifying. I can't tell you how disappointed I was when I first saw your post. She was by far the most interesting character to me. You don't really have those kind of options with futa characters like Raven they are usually always dominant tops with no other options. Astrid from Exiles is the only other futa character I can think of that, has options to be either a top or a bottom.