VN Ren'Py Tales of a Dream Life HAREM [Ch. 2 pt 1] [Kraguto games]

[Jakep17]

guys ı can't here sounds this game ı checkout settings but sounds are full ?

As far as I know there are only 2 moments that have sound. One involving a tree and one involving a cell phone. Other than that it's a mute game until Kraguto decides he wants bgm for every scene

 

[Ive-11]

kraguto cn u fix this?

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i know thats not bothering me but, if cn fix it that will be looks great

also this

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im totally easy man, but idc its just game

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Naruto x Sasuke

 

[Ive-11]

guys ı can't here sounds this game ı checkout settings but sounds are full ?

is this ur first time playing renpy game? cuz theres no possibilty all scene got sound, if u want a game with full sound check on my sign

 

[beanlord]

Can you give me an example of which part you think needs a better translation? Like is it spelling errors, weird phrasing, or does it just seem out of place?

not really that it needs a better translation, just a few spelling errors or random wrong word or 2. i just woke up i can do a speedrun and recheck some text for you and come back later but one of the funny ones i remember was MC saying "Que the fuck" instead of "What the fuck" don't know if that's extra humor or not, but if i made it sound like the english is bad that's not what i meant just random tiny spelling errors its overall good

 

[kraguto]

Yeah, really liked the game.. there have since been a lot of games like this recently (with girls from animes) but this is the most funniest by far xD Also girl on your pic is unique right? Forgot her name since it has been a while (and I’m not really good at remembering names that I’ll probably forget someone‘s name in 1 or 2 days of not interacting with them if I haven’t known them for atleast a month xD)

Edit: Also only Centorea from Monsume?

the girl's name is Valeska and if she is an original character and main girl of the story, which allows the story to flow (let's be honest, putting women from so many anime is a bit difficult in terms of history, so it is He needs a separate protagonist. Besides, if he had placed a girl from any anime as a female protagonist, it would have been a difficult decision)
As for Centorea, it currently has an nsfw scene.

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you just won me over with having Charlotte rep. Piece of advice, even if you do want to use some characters that might be considered "loli" you can get away with it if you age them up a little; make them a bit more shapely and list their age as 18. The worst you'd have to do is have that content be in a separate patch that is hosted on lewdpatcher instead of here. (see games like Ecchi-sensei or parental love for examples)

Even if I try, poor Kokonoe could not appear, it is impossible to pass her off as someone older xd. anyway all the girls in the game world are over 18. I mean a world full of girls and over 18. give thanks that the mc is not a Catholic priest, if not, then he would have committed suicide (I am Catholic, more or less, I believe in God, but I will not avoid making fun of the pedophiles that the priests are)

If anyone notices any mistakes in the english dubbing of this hentai, let me know. I'll try to fix it in time for the next episode.
I did already fix an "of pf" mistake and a missing word here and there after Kraguto posted this version but yeah... let me know and I'll tell Chika Fujiwara to give you a cola

I think I could include this girl (I have not seen the anime, so I will have to see it, before including her. Because the first rule of this story is. All girls will end up naked ........... ..I say all the girls that appear in this story are from anime that the creator has seen (so Sazae-San girls will not be included, that anime has more than 8,000 episodes, so if you wanted a girl from that anime, donate two million dollars or hold out the urge)

 

[Jakep17]

not really that it needs a better translation, just a few spelling errors or random wrong word or 2. i just woke up i can do a speedrun and recheck some text for you and come back later but one of the funny ones i remember was MC saying "Que the fuck" instead of "What the fuck" don't know if that's extra humor or not, but if i made it sound like the english is bad that's not what i meant just random tiny spelling errors its overall good

The que the fuck was in intentional because the spanish version has the inverse so i thought i should leave it in the same style to show how shocked MC was. There's no need to speedrun, i can look through it, just if you notice something during regular play, post it here please and thanks

 

[kraguto]

yo i never actually give much feedback on games i usually just lurk/download random games here over the past few years but let me just tell u... im writing this as soon as i just finished the current build and MAN i love this shit. there are some obvious accidental bad english translations but that's easy fix, great animations/camera angles and seriously love the dark humor its respectable u put the warnings for sensitive people. also you're smart for going the mommy complex roleplay route to not have a straight game around incest but also just including that in general for the audience to maintain a wide variety. can't wait for those scenes particular also curious how the giantess will turn out lmao. idk how i haven't seen this game way sooner, keep it up homie.

I'm glad you like this visual novel, I hope above all you enjoy the story. (since visually it is not bad, but I know it should improve)
As for humor, I was afraid that perhaps that would not like, since being a game for adults, most prefer the nsfw action more.
But as I write the story, I can think of crazy things like that of the scene of the blonde girl and the black boy (everyone hears the words black cock and the first thing they imagine is something huge, so the normal thing would be to show that girl next to something huge. but what if instead of being something huge, is something small?) I just hope that part does not bother anyone.


You must thank Jakep17 (Kudoshin) thanks to him we have an English version, before his help, English was machine, so, well, it was just as bad as English for the answer I'm writing (my only language is Spanish, hardly, is more I think my Spanish is worse than snow white when he made an apple pie to the dwarves)

the theme of "incest" with Catleya, she did not know whether to carry things that way, but in the end she decided she wanted to put something like that. at times our character still gets into the role that this is "incest" which generates what I consider someone should feel when they really have sexual contacts with their mother (I like visual novels of incest, I do not deny it. but they are totally unreal, I don't think a person after his mother masturbates him, remains normal, something must be broken, something must feel, it's not just a straw that your friend's mother gave you, it's your mother who just masturbate, although it may not be so and most of them fuck their mothers ...

Game would get Chika? xD

Edit 1: Also game name on player is {color=000033}tales of dream life. Rebirth, chapter 1{/color}

Edit 2: Feels awkward that MC says he’s fat when his model is clearly... moderate.

Edit 3: F.. the bgm music with the tree startled me xD

Edit 4: Wow, this update was pretty action-packed like a porn version of the end game, but shorter...

I'll see the anime and the future will include Chika

-I will correct it when I find it xd (barely turning on a pc so sadly it is normal one or another error. I apologize in advance for my stupidities

-is not fat. but he does not have the body of a quarterback and thanks to this he feels the typical insecurity, but if it is not to the liking of the people, I will avoid the character mentioning it.

-I noticed that there were two songs xd. It was an epic moment, I needed an epic song.

-I want the updates to please. So I try to make an effort to include as much as I can. also considering that it is not a sandbox game. I have to put in fun and action.

guys ı can't here sounds this game ı checkout settings but sounds are full ?

There are only two scenes with sound, the one against the tree and the one when Valeska calls us.

I'm just the translator so I can't confirm or deny any characters, that was just me referencing an anime I like
I think the MC has some subconscious body issues, that or we were just trying to make a self deprecating joke that i guess didnt work as intended
As for the music, I think Kraguto wanted to show the tension between the you and the tree

you are the one who improves the story for those whose language is english.
It was the battle against the tree. what better than the song The ride of the Valkyries

 

[Ren Masters]

Very good game, i can't wait to see future updates

 

[kraguto]

As far as I know there are only 2 moments that have sound. One involving a tree and one involving a cell phone. Other than that it's a mute game until Kraguto decides he wants bgm for every scene

It could include a lot of music, but the safest thing is that after that, he would receive copyright claims, the game would suffer the same fate that Glen suffered at the hands of Lucille. So for now the music will only go at specific times.

kraguto cn u fix this?

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i know thats not bothering me but, if cn fix it that will be looks great

for the next update I hope to correct this error

also this

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im totally easy man, but idc its just game

We are in an era where there is a certain group of people who offend you all. This visual novel was not created by Disney. so it is better to warn. and if after that warning people continue and something offends them. well it's not my fault

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Naruto x Sasuke
that the Naruto Shippuden story was not about the search for true love. a love without borders or gender? the story of the hero looking for his beloved ...

not really that it needs a better translation, just a few spelling errors or random wrong word or 2. i just woke up i can do a speedrun and recheck some text for you and come back later but one of the funny ones i remember was MC saying "Que the fuck" instead of "What the fuck" don't know if that's extra humor or not, but if i made it sound like the english is bad that's not what i meant just random tiny spelling errors its overall good

they must thank the translation. the poor people who play in Spanish have to read something that a Hamster corrected. so every time you see an error think. At least I read this. See how the poor Latinos have to put up with the spelling of a hamster

 

[kraguto]

kraguto cn u fix this?

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i know thats not bothering me but, if cn fix it that will be looks great

also this

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im totally easy man, but idc its just game

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Naruto x Sasuke

Do you mean the letters that appear on the menu?

 

[Khaitoh]

I'm glad you like this visual novel, I hope above all you enjoy the story. (since visually it is not bad, but I know it should improve)
As for humor, I was afraid that perhaps that would not like, since being a game for adults, most prefer the nsfw action more.
But as I write the story, I can think of crazy things like that of the scene of the blonde girl and the black boy (everyone hears the words black cock and the first thing they imagine is something huge, so the normal thing would be to show that girl next to something huge. but what if instead of being something huge, is something small?) I just hope that part does not bother anyone.


You must thank Jakep17 (Kudoshin) thanks to him we have an English version, before his help, English was machine, so, well, it was just as bad as English for the answer I'm writing (my only language is Spanish, hardly, is more I think my Spanish is worse than snow white when he made an apple pie to the dwarves)

the theme of "incest" with Catleya, she did not know whether to carry things that way, but in the end she decided she wanted to put something like that. at times our character still gets into the role that this is "incest" which generates what I consider someone should feel when they really have sexual contacts with their mother (I like visual novels of incest, I do not deny it. but they are totally unreal, I don't think a person after his mother masturbates him, remains normal, something must be broken, something must feel, it's not just a straw that your friend's mother gave you, it's your mother who just masturbate, although it may not be so and most of them fuck their mothers ...

I'll see the anime and the future will include Chika

-I will correct it when I find it xd (barely turning on a pc so sadly it is normal one or another error. I apologize in advance for my stupidities

-is not fat. but he does not have the body of a quarterback and thanks to this he feels the typical insecurity, but if it is not to the liking of the people, I will avoid the character mentioning it.

-I noticed that there were two songs xd. It was an epic moment, I needed an epic song.

-I want the updates to please. So I try to make an effort to include as much as I can. also considering that it is not a sandbox game. I have to put in fun and action.

There are only two scenes with sound, the one against the tree and the one when Valeska calls us.

you are the one who improves the story for those whose language is english.
It was the battle against the tree. what better than the song The ride of the Valkyries

Haha, don’t worry about it... just feels weird since MC has an avatar...

Hope more would like this and be your patron or something... I played a bit of games here and I can say this is pretty humorous xD and hot... grrrrr..

 

[beanlord]

I'm glad you like this visual novel, I hope above all you enjoy the story. (since visually it is not bad, but I know it should improve)
As for humor, I was afraid that perhaps that would not like, since being a game for adults, most prefer the nsfw action more.
But as I write the story, I can think of crazy things like that of the scene of the blonde girl and the black boy (everyone hears the words black cock and the first thing they imagine is something huge, so the normal thing would be to show that girl next to something huge. but what if instead of being something huge, is something small?) I just hope that part does not bother anyone.


You must thank Jakep17 (Kudoshin) thanks to him we have an English version, before his help, English was machine, so, well, it was just as bad as English for the answer I'm writing (my only language is Spanish, hardly, is more I think my Spanish is worse than snow white when he made an apple pie to the dwarves)

the theme of "incest" with Catleya, she did not know whether to carry things that way, but in the end she decided she wanted to put something like that. at times our character still gets into the role that this is "incest" which generates what I consider someone should feel when they really have sexual contacts with their mother (I like visual novels of incest, I do not deny it. but they are totally unreal, I don't think a person after his mother masturbates him, remains normal, something must be broken, something must feel, it's not just a straw that your friend's mother gave you, it's your mother who just masturbate, although it may not be so and most of them fuck their mothers ...

Well thank you Jakep17 for helping with this project so a pleb english only speaker like me can enjoy it XD i just saw ur post earlier too about the Que the fuck and it makes sense, its more humorous when u explain it that way too lol. and yea as far as incest i just think it was an interesting twist with the genre it probably helps you with patreon since its not true incest and i often get bored of the basic incest visual novels(though i still will play them regardless as long as there is some huge tiddies) so your variety really helped me actually not get bored reading all the text. but you really made the 'incest simulation' or mommy complex seem legit and get the vibe across by the dialogue and body language so 10/10 for that, so everything you just explained to me makes a lot more sense now that i see things the same as you do. the black dude with small dick actually made me think 'was that intentional?' because i definitely got a chuckle out of that one lol. I guess all i have to say here really is you have a interesting way of thinking and cant wait to see more of it x) just dont overwork yourself and have fun with it like it seems you have been already lol

 

[kraguto]

Haha, don’t worry about it... just feels weird since MC has an avatar...

Hope more would like this and be your patron or something... I played a bit of games here and I can say this is pretty humorous xD and hot... grrrrr..

To see only sex, this page of PH, also if I wanted to create something with koikatsu, I had to add a nice story and it was to put humor or put images of Krillin dying. Sadly, the model I designed for Krillin was horrible, so I had to choose the option to add humor.

As for the patreons thing, I wish an Arab sheik appeared and donated half a harem to me. But since that is difficult and there are also many fun games that take the money, I am satisfied with the comments of the people who enjoy the novel.
although money will always come in handy. Imagine how fun the game would be if I created it from a yacht in the middle of the ocean, surrounded by 10 models of different nationalities .... well, I think there would be no game, not because I was distracted by the models, if not because I can't stand the heat, so I would surely die.

 

[kraguto]

Well thank you Jakep17 for helping with this project so a pleb english only speaker like me can enjoy it XD i just saw ur post earlier too about the Que the fuck and it makes sense, its more humorous when u explain it that way too lol. and yea as far as incest i just think it was an interesting twist with the genre it probably helps you with patreon since its not true incest and i often get bored of the basic incest visual novels(though i still will play them regardless as long as there is some huge tiddies) so your variety really helped me actually not get bored reading all the text. but you really made the 'incest simulation' or mommy complex seem legit and get the vibe across by the dialogue and body language so 10/10 for that, so everything you just explained to me makes a lot more sense now that i see things the same as you do. the black dude with small dick actually made me think 'was that intentional?' because i definitely got a chuckle out of that one lol. I guess all i have to say here really is you have a interesting way of thinking and cant wait to see more of it x) just dont overwork yourself and have fun with it like it seems you have been already lol

I tried to write down what I thought it would feel like. When I write the novel, I try to get into the role of the character, I am doing what the character is doing, it was difficult because I got into the role that she was a catleya, but at times she was my mother. but enjoy creating such a scene. I think that the only scene I did not enjoy was when I had to imagine that a rabbit / wolf was going to devour me. luckily diane saved me. (Now they will surely think that I am a pervert who imagines everything perfectly ...... I think I should say that I stole the stories from the internet, that I am a pure soul and that in heaven they consider me a saint. the truth is that if it is true everything I write is recreated in my mind and I always get into the role of the protagonist, so yes, it almost gave me a heart attack when I saw tsunade with a strapon, shit I thought my mind would lead to an anal sex scene, but the one that hurts would sit for weeks)
As for the topic of supporting me, if you do I appreciate it. But the main thing I want is for you to enjoy this humble story, that makes me happy (of course if you intend to donate an old parchment that allows me to make my thoughts come true, come on, it takes you a long time to deliver it to me)
in advance a thousand apologies for the strange things that this answer contains. are written with the google translator

 

[RandyPhoenix]

I realy love that phone song can someone tell me name?

 

[kraguto]

I realy love that phone song can someone tell me name?

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I thought that the song was better known XD. It was between YMCA and Locomia, but knowing the background of the first one, it seemed more appropriate.

 

[RandyPhoenix]

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I thought that the song was better known XD. It was between YMCA and Locomia, but knowing the background of the first one, it seemed more appropriate.

I know song actualy but i cant remember name i tried remember but i cant Thanks

 

[kraguto]

I know song actualy but i cant remember name i tried remember but i cant Thanks

the song sounds great.
a and I wanted to thank you for the review. Little by little I hope to improve the animations, those of the first update were sequences of 7/8 images, in those of the second I included animations of around 30 images. Although I know that I must improve and I will give of myself to achieve it.
As for the MC, there is no doubt, since, perhaps, all the games do not include a MC with a quarterback body. Does that mean that girls are only interested in gorillas? Although I think I should submit it to the public. the main character should I exercise?

 

[Ive-11]

Do you mean the letters that appear on the menu?

no i mean the title on ur game, like when u play window ver not the fullscreen,

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n also u prefer picking "orihime x rangiku" rather than "rukia x orihime",

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is that cus ur more loving to the blonde n big boob fetish? not to loli char with short black hair

 

[Ive-11]

the theme of "incest" with Catleya,

looks like im missing something in the game,, i cuz ive played the game but like im forgot where the incest one?