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Agreed, i assumed that since Aria seemingly only started going outside again a few days ago the MC was being more tolerating, as he did seem aware of it it in the diner after the DDR scene.
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First things first, the scene has issues in general without the Aria/Bella thing. I've already gave my feedback on a previous post. Plot issues take precedence in my mind so that's that.
Regarding the second part, If you ask me personally, it entirely depends on the dude. If I could fuck him too (he needs to be kinda feminine looking though), or I could use the relationship for corruption and humiliation purposes as the MC, I wouldn't mind. There's also context considerations etc. But generally speaking, as long as there's a general sense of a harem conclusion with MC in control, I just don't care. You could argue that the scene made it look like MC is the greatest looser in the world and you could potentially be right (especially if you disregard that while the girls were kissing, MC was fucking a goddess), but if you had to bet money on it, what would your prediction be about the resolution 2-3 updates in?
Regarding your last paragraph, he has already removed the scene completely. And since the game is updated to 1.2 on this site, ntr doesn't exist in any shape or form currently, so it should be removed.
You have to be a prophet or something, divining that someone will use the established counterargument to one of the most common criticisms in harem/polyamory style lesbianism.called it
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Hold up. Am I hallucinating? Am I talking to reflection of myself? That scene isn't in line with that though, which Is why I disagreed with your comment.
I like burgers but if I expect a burger with onions rings and mayo but I receive a cold soggy ass meal, even if I got the extras I asked for, I'm not going to eat it. The food sucks.
Yea thats the problem. No way around that. From their perspective, MC was dead/dying. They "forgor"
Nathan is a real G.
Like I mentioned I have no doubt that they would end up in bed together as is typical, so I would not bet against that outcome even if the dev wasnt changing the scene. But I don't think the ends justify the means. If it's worth doing, it's worth being done well. Certainly, dont do something that is likely to destroy what you want before even building it.
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Not gonna lie, this game was one of the saddest fumbles in porn history, It seems AAA and porn devs have lost the plot together.Hold up. Am I hallucinating? Am I talking to reflection of myself? That scene isn't in line with that which Is why I disagreed with your comment.
I like burgers but if I expect a burger with onions rings and mayo but I receive a cold soggy ass meal, even if I got the extras I asked for, I'm not going to eat it. The food sucks.
Yea thats the problem. No way around that. From their perspective, MC was dead/dying. They "forgor"
Nathan is a real G.
Like I mentioned I have no doubt that they would end up in bed together as is typical, so I would not bet against that outcome even if the dev wasnt changing the scene. But I don't think the ends justify the means. If it's worth doing, it's worth being done well. Certainly, dont do something that is likely to destroy what you want before even building it.
Also the first fuckup is Very hard to undo.
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Let me put it this way:
Aside from his interactions with Aria, MC isn't exactly a pushover. He is more capable than he looks (he went against a sorcerer that Nath couldn't handle), his interactions with Bella and the gym girl can't remember the name are not simp-y at all (his interactions with the goddess were balanced too, factoring his general demeanor).
This is also the first update and there's an obvious attempt from the dev to show that his current situation isn't good. The implementation may not be the best, making him look inconsistent, but if he has the ability to pull his weight, then that's all I need for now.
Take a game like Out of Touch! for example, I can draw a lot of parallels between CJ and this MC, yet after all these updates I don't think anyone can say that CJ is either weak, a simp or a pushover. He is gentle and values freedom. This MC isn't too far off and the way he wins over people is similar, by having a dependable personality.
Someone could easily say that I'm reaching, but factoring in the dev's inexperience and trouble with english, along with the actions scenes that show MC punching above his weight and the plot which sets him up to be "the one", with Aria (the most obnoxious character so far) destined to be his priestess, I think I can safely bet on this turning into a satisfactory power fantasy despite whatever hiccups.
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as a point of general discontent the story has potential. but there are kind of fucked up points that i feel i agree with a number of other people.
1. Aria is clingy as hell to the point of extreme jealousy but the moment bella is back and she just says a few words to aria and she suddenly kisses her over her supposed "new love interest" dead body. really sets the bar for "i hate both of those unappreciative disrespectful selfish bitches"
2. while the main character has his own interesting abilities in a sense of him rising above the "status quo" in his own way he is literally shit on constantly for shit that is not his fault and he just goes along with it at the hopes of either smoothing things over or hoping he gets his dick wet. the very definition of a fucking simp. imo utterly weak sauce.
3. there is too much fluff in between plot points and story explanations. example of while MC was dead vast amounts of info about history and emotional crap, carrying his dead body on a mission (while have been funny to a point but there so much fluff i didnt give a shit by then because speed clicking through it all took forever and most of it was literally nonsensical. some of the stuff with the goddess was cool but it felt overly forced for a narrative point. everyone else was prolly thinking the same as me (what the actual fuck principal, notice and fix the fucker or any other potential plot point like maybe the goddess putting him back instead?) it's just...too damn much.
4. there are other things that i want to pint out but i'll end up writing a novel and to be fair they are all somewhat linked to the 3 tips above.
to this final point, someone said "write your own story" and so on. this does not mean the story is a bad one. its simply how the story was put forward. the characters themselves aren't necessarily bad. its just what you decided to do with those characters at the most inopportune times and some of the excess fluff you added to them. the only thing i'd prolly change character wise is the MC does not need to be such a damned simp and maybe aria tempered a bit so she isn't so...irrational? maybe? even then she doesn't really need a re-write she could just have her character develop some humility from a situation she caused and is forced to realize it and face it or lose everything. i would say Bella needs a HARD Coming to Jeebus moment with the MC. for real. that bitch is way to trifling for my taste atm. she is fine atm but yeah there needs a serious HUGE redemption arc for her.
I hope you don't take these criticisms too hard as it wasn't intended but i personally have just been tired of these same tropes and issues in new AVN's i've seen lately and it just boils over. so in this spirit please take these with the best of intentions and i hope you succeed in your desire and dreams for this game.
1. Aria is clingy as hell to the point of extreme jealousy but the moment bella is back and she just says a few words to aria and she suddenly kisses her over her supposed "new love interest" dead body. really sets the bar for "i hate both of those unappreciative disrespectful selfish bitches"
2. while the main character has his own interesting abilities in a sense of him rising above the "status quo" in his own way he is literally shit on constantly for shit that is not his fault and he just goes along with it at the hopes of either smoothing things over or hoping he gets his dick wet. the very definition of a fucking simp. imo utterly weak sauce.
3. there is too much fluff in between plot points and story explanations. example of while MC was dead vast amounts of info about history and emotional crap, carrying his dead body on a mission (while have been funny to a point but there so much fluff i didnt give a shit by then because speed clicking through it all took forever and most of it was literally nonsensical. some of the stuff with the goddess was cool but it felt overly forced for a narrative point. everyone else was prolly thinking the same as me (what the actual fuck principal, notice and fix the fucker or any other potential plot point like maybe the goddess putting him back instead?) it's just...too damn much.
4. there are other things that i want to pint out but i'll end up writing a novel and to be fair they are all somewhat linked to the 3 tips above.
to this final point, someone said "write your own story" and so on. this does not mean the story is a bad one. its simply how the story was put forward. the characters themselves aren't necessarily bad. its just what you decided to do with those characters at the most inopportune times and some of the excess fluff you added to them. the only thing i'd prolly change character wise is the MC does not need to be such a damned simp and maybe aria tempered a bit so she isn't so...irrational? maybe? even then she doesn't really need a re-write she could just have her character develop some humility from a situation she caused and is forced to realize it and face it or lose everything. i would say Bella needs a HARD Coming to Jeebus moment with the MC. for real. that bitch is way to trifling for my taste atm. she is fine atm but yeah there needs a serious HUGE redemption arc for her.
I hope you don't take these criticisms too hard as it wasn't intended but i personally have just been tired of these same tropes and issues in new AVN's i've seen lately and it just boils over. so in this spirit please take these with the best of intentions and i hope you succeed in your desire and dreams for this game.
Could you say it clearly right now if this is supposed to be a forced sharing poly harem with a lot of lesbianism??? That way people who dont like it can leave already.
I dont think deleting the kissing scene or making Aria less of an asshole would do anything as long as she is still in love with Bella (Mc is so pathetic, his girl is still in love with her ex
). And she is fucking annoying with her lesbianism, even going for the other girls, trying to kiss hem and shit.So just let us know if that will still be part of the game or forced /optional so people who are sick of lesbian garbage can just put this on ignore.
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Yeah, seconding this.Could you say it clearly right now if this is supposed to be a forced sharing poly harem with a lot of lesbianism??? That way people who dont like it can leave already.
I dont think deleting the kissing scene or making Aria less of an asshole would do anything as long as she is still in love with Bella (Mc is so pathetic, his girl is still in love with her ex
So just let us know if that will still be part of the game or forced /optional so people who are sick of lesbian garbage can just put this on ignore.
Gladerine can you just clarify if
A) The lesbian content can be avoided
B) Are we able to reject LI's we don't like, like Aria and Bella
You making her less annoying is nice, but i honestly don't think i will ever like either her or Bella...thought i'd really prefer the MC less of an simp...
Forced LI's and forced lesbian content is just a no for some of us. Just give us the word so we know if it's worth to stay or if we can move on.
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This is the millionth harem game on this siteJust woke up and i see harem and no shit ntr new game...
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Of course...I don't want shit in my harem games ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
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