* Dev is a non-native English speaker. Okay.
* Why name the narrator?
* One advantage of using Honey Select is that it's easy to modify the models so that you get a wide variety. So why do these models look like I've seen them before many times? For instance, the mother is the same as the one from Glassix.
* Zayn or Zayne? Consistency matters.
* I get the feeling the bully will over-complicate the plot. We'll see.
* Someone please kill the narrator. Or at least gag the narrator.
* Marry or Mary?
* If I mute the sound in a game, I expect it to be mute. I don't want to hear a peep, especially if I'm playing somewhere where I don't want anyone else to hear. Major pet peeve. F-minus. I cannot enjy the sex scenes because I don't want people around me hearing sex noises coming from my computer.
This game is mediocre at best, and I'm seeing little reason to continue playing. Perhaps if the dev didn't verride the mutiing, I'd continue, but in my opinion he made an extremely poor choice. The laguage is poor, it's not visually appealing, and I don't care about any of these characters.