- Dec 29, 2023
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No disrespect just a question. I'm not really able to enjoy a title if the MC is a derp. Constantly ask questions, never knows what's going on or what to do, self pitying, etc. An example would be in, the start of the story, we have our protagonist going somewhere because of some contract he knows nothing about. Just a few screens later he think that he should hate the head of the family, a female boss who he just met 2 minutes ago, for "putting him in this situation". Of course he has NO idea why he is there, what the situation is or if the boss is even involved. Derp.
Obviously he's a well written derp or he wouldn't irritate me so much. Well done you. I would just like to know if the protagonist gets any "less derpy" as the story goes on. Some titles have character development and some don't so it doesn't hurt to ask.
Thank you!
Obviously he's a well written derp or he wouldn't irritate me so much. Well done you. I would just like to know if the protagonist gets any "less derpy" as the story goes on. Some titles have character development and some don't so it doesn't hurt to ask.
Thank you!