the new game mechanic is kinda pointless and at the same time usefull, it allow u to introduce characters without having to work on them, allow the dev to save some innecesary renders, if a char is going to appear one time and after that its going to turn irrelevant, just put him into one of the side jobs, nice, as for game mechanic... i guess a lot of people already say how bad it is so im not gonna add anything else.
I love the way u buils ur characters, remind me of OnePiece, its like reading one of those character, of course u dont follow the personality with the art as Eichiro Oda, but the exageration of one trait of personality is the same, u go hard with the "dumb" trait dou xD, Gracie is super book smart but dumb, and then Luna is brave and fearless, and dumb, i get that this add to their charm, "dumb" its a cute trait after all, nice. There is some parts that kinda overlap, i thing, and this is super nit-picking , like when Gracia "discover" ur plan to make her and Isabel be friends, Luna´s trait is being a willcard nobody can tell what´s she gonna do, but just after that Gracia say something like "she love me so she will do ......." she is either a willcard or she isnt, we know Gracia is super smart but u cant just nullify Luna´s "RNG" to make Gracia look smart, she is already smart. Didnt see the point in making Gracia beat the MC in that part. I know she discover that everything, even Luna being there, is a trap, but she shoulnt have any way to tell if Luna messing with the code was true or not, since that is just Luna being Luna, even if that is part of the trap, she say "Luna would have shot the door" or something, but that is wrong, she have no way of telling what Luna would do, or how she would react, because that is Luna, u cant say what her reaction would be, and even Gracia point that out, even worse, Gracia is just book smart, when it comes to people she is like Luna in a chemestry test, or should be, since that is the way she is portrayed.
I like what u did with the sex scene, introduce a side character and the MC gets some fun, and u can save those character for later interactions if u want, that give u time to keep building up, since the focus is just Isabel, Gracie and Luna, and at the same time that crave from some fans for a sex scene gets dealed with.
